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Posted: 9 years ago
#31
i really loved the update..
manan first meet was damn awesome
loved manik's description!!!
aww!! nandini has already started to support manik or i would rather say take his side infront of aryamann..!!
i m eagerly waiting fr upcoming parts
thnx fr pm nd update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#32
Nice update...
Lovely story...

Well written


Thanks for the pm


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Posted: 9 years ago
#33
HEYYA...
i loved each and everything...

nandu's pov of her self description and her meet with manik...

the way u described her feelings..too good...

waiting for more...

continue soon


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Posted: 9 years ago
#34

So here it is guys. These are few scenes between our very own Manik & Nandini, in the coming few chapters. And As I told you, will update on Sunday. I know the story is going slow. Bear with me for 2 more chapters then, there will only be Manik & Nandini. It is just a bits of conversation, an attempt to increase your curiosity


Promo (A glimpse of what's coming ):


"There's plenty of room for both of us, Nandini." The sound of that husky voice broke me out of my momentary daze. How did he know my name?

-------******-----------

"Are you sleeping with anyone?"

I inhaled sharply. "Why is that any business of yours?"

"Because I want to you, Nandini. I need to know what's standing in my way, if anything."

"Maybe I'm just not interested, Mr. Malhotra."


-------******-----------

Manik stood with me. "I'll be done by five. I'll come get you then."

"No, you won't. This kiss doesn't change anything."

"The hell it doesn't."

"Don't be arrogant, Manik. I lost my head for a second, but I still don't want what you want."

His fingers curled around the door handle. "Yes, you do. You just don't want it the way I want to give it to you. So, we'll revisit and revise."



-------******-----------

"How did you know?" His tongue traced the shell of my ear and I shivered. It felt like every cell in my body was straining toward his.

"Know what?" he asked.

"What I like to drink? What Aryaman's name is?" He inhaled deeply, and then pulled away.

"You visited another of my clubs earlier. Your credit card popped and your drinks were recorded. And Aryaman is listed on the rental agreement for your apartment."

The room spun. No way...My cell phone. My credit card. My f**king apartment. I couldn't breathe. Between my mom and Manik, I felt claustrophobic.

"You own the building I live in?" I gasped.

"Oddly enough, yes."

"Are you crazy, Manik?"



-------******-----------

"Haven't you ever had it in a limo?"

"No." His jaw hardened. "Have you?"

Looking away without answering, I saw the traffic and pedestrians surging around us.



-------******-----------

"Hello." He laughed, and the sound was light. "I'm Harshad Verma, Manik's brother."


-------******-----------

"Tch, Tch, Tch! You've done it with him already."

"And you haven't."

That seemed to surprise her. "You're right, I haven't. You know why?"

"Because he doesn't want to."

"And I don't want to either, because he can't commit. He's young, gorgeous, rich, and he's enjoying it."

"Yes." I nodded. "He certainly did."

Her gaze narrowed, her pleasant expression slipping slightly. "He doesn't respect the women he... You know. The minute he done it with you, you were done. Just like all the others. But I'm still here, because I'm the one he wants to keep around for the long haul."



-------******-----------

"Did you get the flowers I sent?"

"Yes. They're lovely. Thank you."

"They reminded me of your dress."

What the hell was he doing?. "Some women might say that's romantic."

"I only care what you say. I thought about stopping by...I wanted to."

I sighed, surrendering to my confusion. "I'm glad you didn't."

There was another long pause. "I deserved that."

"I didn't say it to be a bitch. It's just the truth."


-------******-----------

Manik appeared at Daniel's shoulder. "The full experience of gym is included, when you're the owner's girlfriend." he said, coming around and behind me to slide his arms around my waist,

The word "girlfriend" reverberated through me, sending a crazy rush of adrenaline through my system.

-------******-----------

"Reporters are going to dig, Aryaman, and they're going to find dirt. They're going to splash it all over hell and back, and it's going to embarrass Manik."

"Baby girl." He set his hand over mine. "Dev buried all that."



-------******-----------

"We need to talk. Tonight, Manik. There are things I have to tell you. If a reporter looks in the right place and gets lucky...We have to keep our relationship private or end it. Either would be better for you."

Manik cupped my face and pressed his forehead to mine. "Neither is an option. Whatever it is, we'll figure it out."

-------******-----------

"He might've dumped me because of my past, not his." I cried over Aryaman's shoulder

"If that's true, it's good it's over. But I think you two will find each other eventually. At least I'm hoping you will."


-------******-----------


"What are you doing here?" he snapped, scowling.

I recoiled from his harshness. "Excuse me?"

"You shouldn't be here." He grabbed me by the elbow and started hauling me away from the house. "I don't want you here."
-------******-----------


Each part is the scene in coming chapters. In the coming 4 or 5 chapters. And Then our very own Nandu proposes Manik!!!
Edited by manju-ujnam - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#35
Wooo..
Their 2nd encounter..
They met...
They kissed...
Did Manik confessed her...are u sleeping with anyone???? He asked right...???wo..wat's going on...
he tag her as a GIRLFRIEND..Aaaiii
But wat happened..at last..
Confusion hi confusion solution ka kuch Pata nahi..

You just don't want the way i want to give it to u...so we'll revise n revist..What is happening..
M now in confusion queen...line..
Am i the first...??? If yes ..Yipii..If no than lets see in future...hahaha..
Harshad...GET OUT...
Keep smiling..n take care...
Will wait for the update...
Sunday..uff..kab aayenge...

Edited by lovePANI - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: lovePANI

Wooo..
Their 2nd encounter..
They met...
They kissed...
Did Manik confessed her...are u sleeping with anyone???? He asked right...???wo..wat's going on...
he tag her as a GIRLFRIEND..Aaaiii
But wat happened..at last..
Confusion hi confusion solution ka kuch Pata nahi..

You just don't want the way i want to give it to u...so we'll revise n revist..What is happening..
M now in confusion queen...line..
Am i the first...??? If yes ..Yipii..If no than lets see in future...hahaha..
Harshad...GET OUT...
Keep smiling..n take care...
Will wait for the update...
Sunday..uff..kab aayenge...



Ya, second and many encounters, thereafter. And you are the first! 🥳
Dont worry, maximum confusions will be cleared in in coming 2 chapters. If everything goes well, I ll post two chapters on sunday. Only for you😊
Edited by manju-ujnam - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37
Confusion...hee confusion...

They kissed...
Manik owned everything related to her...
He knows bout arya..
Harshad...

Omg...hell confusing...
Plz..confusion jaldi clear kar dena...

Would wait till tommorrow...


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SANJANA
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38
harshad😡
nice promo...

plz update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: manju-ujnam



Ya, second and many encounters, thereafter. And you are the first! 🥳
Dont worry, maximum confusions will be cleared in in coming 2 chapters. If everything goes well, I ll post two chapters on sunday. Only for you😊


Yes yes..m first...:) Many encounter..It will be treat to see/read..
Only for me ...eee :) kind of u.. m showing my 32 teeths..now..which is not at all beautiful ..hahaha..
Will wait for the update..
Keep smiling..n take care..

Edited by lovePANI - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#40
nice promo.
update soon. Plz pm me if possible.

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