The man in the elevator~ MaNan OS

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Suprabha

@shaanmaan

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Wow it was interesting n
New concept , loved ur update

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ky2manan

@ky2manan

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#22

I loved it!

Awesome!

Please do write more.

The story kept me engaged till the end

Interesting story

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Sofiafarooq

@Sofiafarooq

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#23

What a story man.
I was just thinking why nandni betraying her man.
U can't blieve I was hell scared what will happen when manik will come to know that she is with another man. Ufff. Amazing.

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urvxshi

@urvxshi

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#24

it was amazing..superb... manan playing each other.. absolute fun

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Uma

@uma88

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Ya i guessed it would be manik.

Good one shot.

Do write more like this.

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sri_valli

@sri_valli

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#26

nice update dear ..

I guessed it would be manik...bcoz they R manan...

Nice attempt dear...thanks for pm...

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anumanan

@anumanan

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#27

Awww...that was ausome...vaise tho guessed it in the beginning only that it was manik but luved reading it...

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kash321

@kash321

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#28

Woohooo
Nicely written
Superbbb well played along
Njoying to d fullest
U should write more offfen

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esh ;)

@ps_angel

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#29

ahaa

mujhe pta tha wo manik h

jab manager ne bola mrs.malhotra

tbhi

lol

😉

frm the start

bt fr b mzaaa aagyaaa

nyc one

👏

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ChocolatePie14

@ChocolatePie14

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#30

JUST ONE WORD "" FABLOUS"" ... THE CONCEPT WAS SOMETHING REALLY DIFFERENT... YOU SHOULD WRITE OS MORE OFTEN... THANK YOU VERY MUCH FOR THE AMAZING OS... LOVE YOU YAAR...

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