IF YOU HOLD MY HAND -A Manan FF chapter 7 Pg 36 - Page 18

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Cuteprincess6


thanxxx a lot for ur response
i was kinda waiting for it


aww...so sweet of u...
nxt time..i'll try to be regular...
bt u know ...am a lazy ass...badi mushkil se karti hoon main comments...😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome Update.
loved it.
thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update..nandinis problem related to her family..and super sixs life is also in danger..whats going on..
Update soon
Take care
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Posted: 9 years ago
thanks for pm
it was nce seeing mana talking so happily
n remincing their old time
really wondering what haooened
that nandu thinks there is danger if she coems to close to them
n that they will get hurt hmm
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Posted: 9 years ago
update was nice ...nandani do care for him
ty for pm...manan talking was cool...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Addrita.Jesin

Awesome update..nandinis problem related to her family..and super sixs life is also in danger..whats going on..
Update soon
Take care


just wait nd watch
a amazing twist us abt to come
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Posted: 9 years ago
thanx for PM😊
... reminiscing old time... Manan talking to each other
egarly waiting for what happened in past
... nandu thinks that there is danger if she come close to them
thank your for the wonderful update...
stay blessed,
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: arshuaar

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">thanx for PM😊
... reminiscing old time... Manan talking to each other
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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">egarly waiting for what happened in past
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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">... nandu thinks that there is danger if she come close to them</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">thank your for the wonderful update...
stay blessed,</font>


thanxxx a lot for ur feedback
it means a lot to
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Posted: 9 years ago
Chapter 6
During their return journey from recording studio to their apartment , botb were silent. They were lost in their own thoughts. Nandini was busy in thinking abt how her life took a u turn from happy life. Whereas manik was busy in thinking tht how to make nandini speak about her by herself not by forcing her. He thought tht he should give nandini some tym so tht she can open up to them. After tht she will b quite comfortable to tell abt her past.

After reaching their building both entered in lift . But it seems like god dont like them silent. Bcoz of sudden electricity failure , the lift stopped in between. Manan were stuck in the lift with no way to come out.

Nandini - What the hell ? Manik ye lift kyu band ho gyi ?

Manik - Kyunki na mera mood ban gya stucked lift me party karne ka.

Nandini (confused) - What ?????

Manik - Arey genious. Mujhe kya pta , m b to lift m hi hu tumhare sath. But i guess its bcoz of power failure.

Nandini - To ab kya karen hum manik.

Manin - Ab hum kuch ni kr sakte nandini. Ab to ye lift tabhi start hogi jb koi generator on kare ya phir power supply ho.

Nandini - Or vo kb tk hoga ?

Manik - Dont know. We can only wait nd pray to god .

Nandini - I dont pray now. There is nothing like god in this world.

This was again a shock for manik. Bcoz as far as he remember nandini was a person who visit temple, church, mosque, nd even gurudwara atleast once a week. But he choosed to be quiet for some tym. For next few minutes there was complete silence bw them. Bt manik is manik. How can he b silent for much tym. So again he started to tease nandini.

Manik(innocently singing) - Hum tum ek lift m band ho or power ruk jaye
mere naino ki bhoolbulaiya m nandini kho jaye.


Nandini (irritated with song) - Shut up manik. I know u r a singer bt atleast song to achha ga sakte ho.

Maink - Okkk. I l try another song nandini only for u.

Nandini gives a whatever look to manik.

Manik - Do pyar karne wale lift me kho gye
baaghi bane pagal bane deewane ho gye
kaho ab kya karen arey ab kya karen
do pyar karne wale lift me kho gye.


Nandinu's eyes snapped out listening pyar karne wale. She was hell irritated now.

Nandini - U hv the best collection of song manik.

Manik - Really nandini.

Nandini - Yes manik. You hv the best collectiin of worst songs ever. Cant u jyst sing simple nd non irritating song manik.

Manik - Tum to mere song se ese irritate ho rhi ho jaise sach me hum ek dusre se pyar karte h or ye song m tumhare liye gaa rha hoon. Just tell me miss nandini murthy who r u? My gf jo mujhe tantrums dikha rhi ho.

Nandini(shocked) - I m...am ur neighbour nd business assosiate , so u jyst cant irritate me like this.

Manik - Nd u can irritate everyone . Hain na nandini.

Nandini - Maine tumhe kb irritate kiya .

Manik - Irritate hi to kr rhi ho. Jab tumhara mood hota h to bolti ho nd jab tumhara moid hota h to ye gabbar wala mode on kar leti ho. What do u think, isse hum irritate ni hote. Last three months se tumhe dekh rha hu. Puri society tumse pareshan h . Kusi se bolti ni ho or jab bolti ho to aisa kuch bolti ho ki samne wale ko heart attack aa jaye.

Nandini - Just shut up manik. U dont know anything abt me so u dont hv any right to say a single word about me.


Manik - Then plzz tell me na about u. I want to know about u. Nd u what not even me , whole super six wants to come close to u like we were in clg.

Nandini - Really manik . Tum sab mere close aana chahte ho. So what if i say ki agar mere close aane se tum logon mi life danger m aa sakti h. Jaan jaa sakti h tumhari. Kya ab b mere close aana chahte ho.Manik i m not that old nandini with whom u can make frnds. Ab jab meri life ka hi mujhe ni pta k kya hoga then hw can i involve u alk in my worst nightmare. So plzz manik jyst stay away from me. I m telling u this for ur own gud. These r only my gud intentions towards u. So plzzz.

Manik was numb now. He was not in a condition to speak anything. The power supply also resumed nd both headed towards there flats.

Nandini just closed the door nd fell on her knees . She was crying like a child.

Nandini's self talk - How can i manik. How can i come clise to u guys when i know this will lead u all nowhere. U all will get pain only with me. Nd i just cant do this . I know i l b happy with u guys bt for the sake of my happiness , i cant put ur life in danger. Abhi m cabir ko h stop ni kr pati mujhse milne se , agar tum logon ko pra chal gya to m tum sab ko kabhi ni rok paungi.

Here with manik-
He just went inside his flat and started pacing here nd there.
He was thinking about nandini. Suddenly he got a idea nd he called everyone except cabir nd asked them to come at his place bt without telling cabir.


After sometym whole supersix wss there except cabir.


Dhruv - Buddy u ok . Tune hum sabko itni jaldi yahan bulaya nd why did u not invited cabir.

Manik - Vo maine tumhe nandini k bare m kuch batane k liye bulaya h.

All in unison - Kya bat.

Manik told them about the conversation with nandini. Everyone was shocked.

Manim - Guyz i cant see her like tht. I will heal her phir chahe meri life kitne h risk m kyu na ho.

Maddy - Same here manik. How can veenavadini think like tht. We will alwys b there with her chahe kuch b ho

Aaliya - Yess guyzzz. Bt we need to find out the reason why she said that.

Manik - But how ?

Mukti - I hv an idea guyz. Nd i am sure tht it will work. But yes we hv to take care of one thing.

All - What???

Mukti - Yehi ki cabir should not know abt this idea as i m sure he will not let us do this.

Then mukti told her idea to all of them . They were quite fine with it bt manik has some doubts.

Manik - R u sure mukti tht it will work. As it is possible tht if we will follow this plan then we can even loose her for always.

Mukti - I m sure manik tht this will work nd if u hv any better idea then we can implement tht also.

Manik - Okk . I m in.

All - We r also in.

They shared a group hug nd left from there hoping tht their plan will work.



Hiii guyzzz
i m back with another chapter . Hope u all will like it.
As all if u asked to end the suspense i m going to do it in nxt chapter bt if i will get gud respinse on this chapter. Vaise to i was going to do it in this chapter Bt my frnd sanjana advised to do it after creating some suspense. So i m doing it. Nd yess nxt to nxt chapter will b full of manan. So no complains.

Plzzz hit like nd comment on it. Bahut hardwork lagta h yrr likhne m . I l luv it give response to it.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update...
Hope tat now manik will cum to know abt nanduz past...

Eagerly waiting to know tat...
Pls continue.. Thanks for the pm

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