TERA MUJSE HAI NAATA KOI MANAN TS (epilogue PAGE 123 + imp note)

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CHARACTER SKETCH::

MANIK MALHOTRA: A best doctor in india. he is very rude and arrogant only love his family and friends. he is friend of alya.dhruv and cabir and brother of mukti. his loves daughter of mukti. mukti and abhi died in accident. and than manik adopt mukti's daughter.
CABIR DHAWAN: A business man and brother of nandini. best friend of manik. loves his sister a lot. and husband of navya. father of a cute son reyansh.
dhruv and alya both are engaged.
NANDINI DHAWAN: A very calm and simple girl. she is a doctor. she loves her family and she loves children lot.
TISHA MALHOTRA: Daughter of mukti and abhi but after their death. she is princess and jaan of manik malhotra. loves him a lot. she is 3 years old girl.
NYONIKA MALHOTRA: very caring mom and grand mom loves her son a lot and her grand daughter a lot.
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Nandini was lying on the hospital bed in operation theatre. Manik came out from ot and cabir and aryamaan rushed towards him and asked "manik kaisi hai nandu? Is she fine?" Manik saw aryamaan and said " ya she is out of danger" aryamaan and cabir sighed in relief. manik said"cabir I wanna talk to you about nandini its personal can we talk in my cabin" and cabir and aryamaan both were about to go with manik but manik asked cabir "who is he? cabir its very personal matter"
Cabir replied "ye aryamaan hai jisse nandu ki engagement hone wali hai." Manik said "good that you are here come to my cabin"
After some time all of three them were sitting in manik's cabin and manik was reading nandini's reports. Cabir was tapping his feet very impatiently and than he said "manik bol na kya baat hai?" Manik closed her reports and said "cabir you have to be strong for her wo...wo accident main uske body pr itne effect nhi hua but iss accident ki wajah se nandini ki andar ki body parts ko bahot damage ho gaya hai aur is wajah se.." manik stopped for a second and looked at aryamaan and cabir asked in panic tone "aage bol na manik" and manik said "sorry cabir but ab nandini kbhi pregnant nhi ho payegi I am sorry uska womb puri tarh se damage ho gaya hai agar wo pregnant ho bhi jati hai to bhi wo baby ko carry nhi kr payegi aur agar usne phir bhi baby ko rakhne ke bare mein socha to koi bhi doctor nahi nandini ko nahi uske baby ko bacha payega. So sorry nandini kbhi ab pregnant nhi ho skti"
Cabir and aryamaan were very shocked. Specially cabir a lone tear fell down from his cheek and manik came near him and placed his hand on his shoulder and said "cabir you have to be strong for her she needs you right now usse tum sbki bahot zaroorat hai pls control yourself" cabir wiped his tears and said "you are right manik she is my doll wo bahot zyada weak hai aur nuje strong hona padega uske liye aur waise bhi nagya hai reyansh aiaur aryamaan bhi hai hum usse usse support karenge she will be fine" and cabir looked at aryamaan and said "aryamaan are you alright? Tum hina nandu ke sath?" Aryamaan get up from his chair and said "cabir nandu is my best friend aur waise bhi hum dono ye shadi sirf mere mom dad aur tumhari wajah se kr rahe the but muje nhi lagta k ye sab pata lagne ke baad mom dad bhi ye shadi nhi hone denge aur waise bhi kon aisi ladki se shadi karega yaar tum bhi nhi krte agar meri jagah hote to I am so.."he was about to continue but cabir punched him hard he fell on the floor and grabbed his collar and said"you cheap tu kya todega ye shadi me hi meri bahen ko tumhare ghar na bheju aise insan ke sath chee.." he was about to again punch him but Manik held his hand said"get the grip of yourself and aryamaan out of my cabin right now" aryamaan left the room angrily. Manik was expecting this from aryamaan. Cabir hugged him and manik patted his back to calm down his beat friend. Cabir tell everything to navya.

so tell me do you like it???
Edited by parthmanikniti - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome dear...
i loved this concpt very much

cabir is so caring...

she cant become a mum

hate aryaman

loved it

continue soon

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SANJANA
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting and completely different concept...Plz continue!
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awesome..
loved it...
waiting for next update...
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Interesting...Continue soon...😊😊
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Manik came to his house and he.saw.that nyonika was sitting in the hall. Manik came near her and said "how many times I have told you mama kyu wait krte ho aap mera?" Nyonika smiled and said "jab tumhari wife aa jayegi tumhara wait krne ke liye main nhi karungi tumhara intezaar thik hai?" Manik smiled and sat beside her and nyonika asked him"manik nandu kaisi hai?" Manik sighed and said "she is alright mom out of danger but mama" she raised her eyebrow and manik said "but now she won't be able to get pregnant" nyonika said "what but uski to engagement hone wali thi but ab?" Manik sarcastically said "mom apko lagta hai k wo aryamaan nandini se shadi karega sach pata chalne ke baad immediately he broke his engagement with her and left without saying anything" nyonika sighed and said"bahot a6i bacchi hai wo god bless her a6a ab chalo main dinner lagati hoon tum fresh ho jao" manik left and came to her jaan's room and opened the door he peeped in her room bit she was not there he was about to call a servant but two tiny hands hugged his knee and said"bhoo...pappu...papppuuu...iz a fool main to yahan hoon loom ke bahal aul aap loz ki tarah fil se room main dekha ooo papppuuu iz a fool yeyyy" manik smiled and picked her up his arms and kissed her face madly and said "humari jaan ne dinner kiya" she nodded her head in no and manik said"princess aap kyun roz aisa krti ho" and he both went down and manik sat on the chair and he made her Sat on his lap. she encircled her arms around her neck and said "papu aapko pata hai jb tak papa apni plincess ko nhi khilate tb tak wo nhi khati" and everyone laughed on her statement and after some chitchat manik picked her up and both left for his room. Manik lay down on his bed and tisha lay down on his stomach and said"papuuu ek baat pu6u aapshe aap gussha nhi kalenge plomise me" manik was patting her head he said"pappu apni jaan pr kbhi gussa nhi kr skte ask me" and she asked "pappu mele all fliends ke pash mumma hai to mele.pash kyun nhi hai mumma kya main a6i baby nhi hoon ish liye mele pash mumma nhi hai?" Manik sighed and said"ooo meri jaan to world ki sabse best baby doll hai aur tumhe pata hai aap na bahot special ho kyun ki aapke pass papa hai jo aapko sab se zyada pyaar krte hai okay.." and manik kissed on her forehead and said "baccha now sleep baby bahot late ho gaya hai" tisha closed her eyes and manik made her sleep on the bed and manik gave her favorite teddy and she hugged her teddy and smiled manik went to his balcony and nyonika came there and said"manik kb tak tum iski baat ko aise talte rahoge I think now its right time you should get married apne liye nhi to tishu ke liye kab tak tum aise rahoge tishu ko zaroorat hai uski mom ki" and manik said"apko lagta hai mom k koi bhi ladki aise hi jaan ko apna pyar degi wo bhi meri bahen ki bacchi ko no mom koi nhi hota itna a6a mere liye jaan sabse zyada important hai aur jaan ke liye main hoon usse kisi ki zaroorat nhi hai." Nyonika was about to say something but tisha came near him and hugged his knee and gesture him to pick her up. Manik smiled and picked her up and said"kya hua bacche? Kyun jag gye aap?" And she rubbed her eyes with her tiny palms and put her head on his shoulder and said"kyun ki aap nhi the wahan pal mele pash aapne max ko sula diya mele pash" manik smiled and said "now chalo max ko hum hata k hum sote hai thik hai" and nyonika kissed both of them and manik lay down with her jaan.
In the hospital:
Late night nandini gained her conscious. Cabir and navya both were sitting near her she opened her eyes very slowly. Cabir saw this and came near her and placed his hand on her head and asked"how are you feeling now my baccha?" Nandini smiled and said "I am ok..okay fine" navya also came near her and kissed her forehead and said."you scared us naughty girl" nandini smiled and said "bhai bhabhi main ab bilkul theek hoon dekho sirf sir pe aur hath main hi chaut hai" navya an cabir looked at each other with helpless look. Nandini saw this and asked "kya hua bhai ku6 hua hai kya Aryamaan kahan hai? Is he alright na? Koi baat hai?" Cabir held her hand and said"are bas express ko break laga ku6 nhi hua hai tuje nahi aryamaan ko sab thik hai you just take rest ok and sleep" cabir made her sleep and she drifted into sleep because of medicines.
A nurse informed manik about nandini he gave tisha to nyonika and went to the hospital. Cabir and navya was resting in the rest room.
Manik went near Cabir and asked "nandini ko bataya tumne uski condition ke bare mein?" Cabir nodded his head in no. Manik sighed and said "waise koi problem nhi hai but agar usse kahin aur se pata chala to usse zyada problem hogi I hope you understand what I am trying to say" cabir nodded his head and said"navya aur main usse subah baat krte hain" manik patted his shoulder and said"I checked her she is fine now and one more thing hume usse 2 3 days under observation rakhna padega" cabir nodded.
manik left for his house he came to nyonika's room and picked up his jaan and came to his room and drifted into sleep.

Precap:: first meet of tisha and nandini. And manik.
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Please update soon as possible eagerly waiting for ur update pretty please .
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Waiting for next part
Continue soon
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Read both parts in one go
loved it
plzzz update nxt part soon

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