#3 She resides in me.Manan ff(Ch 32 pg 134) (THE FINAL CHAPTER) 13 jan

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firefly09angel

@firefly09angel

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Posted: 9 years ago

#881

Super emotional update 😭 ...
Loved it...
So beautifully u penned down the emotions of
each & every character awesome hattsoff to u...
Nandini & manik(manan) both going through so much pain...
Last part shoking...
Manik ko maaf toh nhi kiya jaa sakta but he is so much guilty...
Waiting for the next update...
Will nandini be dead???please don't...
Continue soon...
😊 😊 😊

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shoana

@shoana

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Posted: 9 years ago

#882

thanks for pm dear
too emotional update
finally today nandini opened her heart...she shared her pain
she was right ...
she hate herself for trusting him soo much 😔
aliya has done very bad to her..
she even for once didn't trusted nandini...

where as nandini still can't see manik in pain...
though that old nandini died but still she loves manik

what was that😲
will nandini die😭plzz don't let her die plzz
i know manik deserves punishment
par itni buri saza mat do use

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crazydreamer

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Posted: 9 years ago

#883

Diii uh don't know what u hv done but literally I just love u to write this story...
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I tooo love the emotional stories
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but in my whole life I nvr watched nvr ever read this type of emotional story ever...
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this is the one n only in this whole world for me seriously n I owe u to write more n more as sometimes it gives me peace...
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bcoz after crying about 1-2 hours my eyes became strong or ache se dikhta b hai hehe saaf ho jaati h u know..
sry but maine socha itnaa rooo liya h to hasna b chahiye thoda sa...
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I can imagine every small part of this story...
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Aap ko toh Noble Award milna chahiye seriously don't get me wrong...
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btw I'm no one to ask u this but how u get this idea ?? means itna serene itna pure
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u had showed a girl's feeling that in some moment how badly she hurt...
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u had created this amazing story but on serious note bht rulaya m specially ye story raat ko padhna psnd krti hu but aaj noon me hi padh li... actually raat ko rone me asaani hoti h apne room me akele rooo looo eyes swell b hoti h toh subah tk fir b thik thak ho jaati h...
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Anyways I know m bht bak-bak krti hu...
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Sahi h Mukti Aliya ko itne jldi maaf ni krna...
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Yeah ryt Manik u can't be strong enough bcoz as much pain she had suffered u nvr do that not that much in ur dreams too.. sry but i really think sooo I'm tooo much angry on uh...
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OMG Nandu ...
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I know diiidaaa u can't do this...
love u diii
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Ty for pm me of this mesmerizing story
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keep smiling always 😉😃

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Inaya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#884

The most emotional update i have ever read...

The way u describe their pain... commendable dear... kudos to you...

Um literary out of words... my tears are not stopping...

seriously dear its seems so real...

sometimes words hi kaam padh jate hai...

Take a bow dear... u r brilliant dear...

Love u so much...

Thanks for pm...

keep smiling...

Stay blessed...

lots of love..

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manan4everlv

@manan4everlv

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Posted: 9 years ago

#885

Awesome...👏👏

And god.. It was so emotional😭😭

won't manan b back.. don't tell me dis..

N last part Nandini..😳

continue soon

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sameeksha

@mini_manan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#886

Sach kahu to mujhe iske end se koi shikayat ni he...infact i m at peace kyuki sahi mayne me nandini ko dard se mujhe uske marne ke baad hi milegi..
Or isse badi saza to manik ke liye kuch ho hi ni sakte..
Nandini ke na hone ka dukh rahega but happy for nandini as know she can be at peace..
Loved it
Cont soon.

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anya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#887

wat an update kajal!!!

i loved it soo much...

d pain they r going through ...

aww...u portrayed it soo well...

mukti's encounter wid alya's ...

shows how much she love nd care she had 4r nandini...

mukti nd navya r just awesome...

nd nandini nd manik's convo...

no words 2 describe them...

that was mind blowing...

nd final dat accident part...

i cried alot...

it was amazing...

ya ...there is no more pain in nandini's lfy...

bcs she suffered alot...

she too need peace...

bt manik's ??

manik deserves dis punishment...

bt we dono wat will happen in future...

hoping 4r joyful future...

loved d update very much...

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Priya980

@Priya980

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Posted: 9 years ago

#888

Awsome update ...really love it ...it was so emotional,hope to see them together soon...

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prathyushaeluri

@prathyushaeluri

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Posted: 9 years ago

#889

loved the part

its superb

and manan convo was very

emotional

i became emotional during reading

nandini ka accident

now what happens

continue soon

thanks for the pm

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Noor

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Posted: 9 years ago

#890

Oh MY GOSH OH MY GOSH

Did u seriously killed I am memory loss is fine but if anything happen to that pure soul I am going to b so angry at u.

She was always in pain amd even Manik was to I know he did wrong per use apni galti ka ahsas to huwa and he loved her so much they loved each otger unconditionally dont u think he deserve pne chance to regain her trust to win her love.

Plz plZ

UPDATE SOON

AND HUM AP SE BHT NARAZ HAIN

LOVE YEAH

NOOR