MANAN FS - And It Happened promo-pg10(22nd dec)

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey guyzz remember me yeah I'm your very own writer of friends with benefits and egoistic love so now I have come up with a four shot or maybe its completely different from my other story and I will update depending upon the response it was in my mind from quite a long time and finally I have time to pen it down so here is the sneak peak to the story.

PRLOGUE

"I said just go out from here now" the man yelled at her pointing towards the door and his back facing her

"please listen to me once its not what you are thinking" the girl pleaded him but the man was in no mood to listen to her

"nandini leave right now I don't wanna listen to your crap just go before I do something which I don't want to" he said now looking towards her his eyes were red spitting fire

"manik please give a chance to explain" nandini said holding his hand but he jerked it away

"what should I listen that you were bloody trying to con me and for once I would have been in your trap and you would have left after taking my money if I wouldn't have heard your conversation" manik shouted on top of his voice pinning her to the wall and digging his nails in her wrist

"manik its hurting" she pleaded softly to him

"I bloody don't care" he shouted making his grip more tight "did you care that it will hurt I thought you are different from others and special to me but you... backstabbed me" he said and left her with a jerk

"I know manik I came here after your money but you changed me I fell in love with you" nandini said with teary eyes

"ohh just shuutttupp.. a pure word like love doesn't suits on women like you tell me to how many men have you said this" he yelled again on her

"manik please I seriously mean.." but she was cut by him

"with how many men have you slept for money or its just me?"



So how was the prologue did you guyzz liked it show me your support and if a good response I will update very fast okay

INDEX

Chap 1A -pg 5
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nara26 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#2
Wow sounds interesting
Updat soon dear and pm me pls 😳
manan58 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#3
Wow.. Awesome story line..
Interesting..
Like it
Cont soon
suraiya77 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#4
It's very interesting
update soon
mananneetu thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#5
its such an interesting concept!!
a passionate one!!
so plz continue
nd can u plz pm me even if i dont buddy u..actually i hve problem with my account..cant buddy people..!! plz help me out
nd continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey...

Awesome prologue dear...

Nandu a con girl...

Waiting for more

I loved the concept

Update soon



LOVE
SANJANA
parthadmirer thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#7
Nice intresting start. ..
Continue soon...
Thank you for pm...
AditiSinha21 thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#8
Wow yaar its awesome...
Eagerly waiting for update... Plz update it soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awwweee me likey me likey..Loved the prologue <3
please continue soon :D

P.S. BTW you haven't updated friends with benefits since long..please update it also 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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it was good
continue soon
want to know more about the story before i comment

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