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Posted: 9 years ago

#211

Seriously it is an amazing ff..loved it..continue soon..

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Apurva

@apps33

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Posted: 9 years ago

#212

OKAY SO THIS IS THE FINAL RESULT FOR VOTING!!

Majority of people have voted for ending MORE THAN FRIENDS & LIFE CHANGING BET

but there were also many people not wanting to end The Life Changing Bet! Their thought was that only because i wasn't giving it any priority the results for it was so weak!

so i have decided to give it some time before ending it!

i have a little free period this week

maybe then i can give better focus on it!

so yeah... I AM ENDING IT... but not so soon.

and same goes with MORE THAN FRIENDS! i will end it once the confession is done

and of course after the LITTLE EPILOGUE!

and now about the new ffs!

i have come to a decision

that i will continue with the DANGEROUS OBSESSIONS first... and TRAPPED WITH A BILLIONAIRE will be put OH HOLD! because I've realized FINALLY that having 4 ongoing stories becomes a total mess!! and that too have such interesting four on going and not being able to give them all equal time won't be fair!

thanks to the one who made me realize! (i won't mention the name!)

😆😆

further updates regarding my stories will be given as needed!

Thank you!!

Edited by apps33 - 9 years ago

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Apurva

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Posted: 9 years ago

#213

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filter.coffee

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Posted: 9 years ago

#214

crap?what crap?no part one mistake is crap!once again you did an amazing job!

himmat toh dekho manik ki!pehle toh notice hi nahi karta tha.bin baat ke divorce de diya.kisi aurk liye chhor diya!aur ab uske vulnerable state ki fayda le raha hai!kamina hai ek number ka!achchha hua nandini gave him a reality check.

in some delicate broken moments he can't win her.he can't take advantage of a weak moment.if he gotta win her.if her has to prove his love he gotta do it in the right way!

and yes mr malhotra all the things that happened is your fault.you're not even feeling half the pain the poor wife of yours went through.so you didn't sign the papers.but without even signing the paper getting rid of the relation you so wanted to get out of ,you went to soha for solace!chhi mr malhotra chhi!you never fail to disgust me!

once again thinking about the life in her womb ha?I wonder if not for the kid how much you would have wanted nandini.how much and what you would have done to win her.I guess nothing!

ps.the only thing that is crap is the wait for this fic to get updated.kitna intezaar karwati ho yaar :(

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Apurva

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Posted: 9 years ago

#215

Originally posted by: filter.coffee
crap?what crap?no part one mistake is crap!once again you did an amazing job!

himmat toh dekho manik ki!pehle toh notice hi nahi karta tha.bin baat ke divorce de diya.kisi aurk liye chhor diya!aur ab uske vulnerable state ki fayda le raha hai!kamina hai ek number ka!achchha hua nandini gave him a reality check.

in some delicate broken moments he can't win her.he can't take advantage of a weak moment.if he gotta win her.if her has to prove his love he gotta do it in the right way!

and yes mr malhotra all the things that happened is your fault.you're not even feeling half the pain the poor wife of yours went through.so you didn't sign the papers.but without even signing the paper getting rid of the relation you so wanted to get out of ,you went to soha for solace!chhi mr malhotra chhi!you never fail to disgust me!

once again thinking about the life in her womb ha?I wonder if not for the kid how much you would have wanted nandini.how much and what you would have done to win her.I guess nothing!

ps.the only thing that is crap is the wait for this fic to get updated.kitna intezaar karwati ho yaar :(

HAHA... thank you for the lamba comment

and so sorry for the wait

but i guess this time it was justified😭😭

upar se compensation mai OS bhi toh de rahi hu

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Anee_Sharma

@Anee_Sharma

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Posted: 9 years ago

#216

r u kidding me..?? its bad...??? oh dude u have no idea how I write..!! u won't even puke at it.. it was hell jhaakaaasss..!!! keep it up dear..!!

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Sonalmanan

@Sonalmanan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#217

It was amazing!! Whatever manik did,can break any woman,n nandini's behavior is justified... She loved him so much,but him 😡 He left her for that useless soha... He really has to repent a lot before anyone cud forgive him... I just don't want nandini to forgive him soon... Pls continue soon... Thanks for pm... 😊 😊

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rajirock123

@rajirock123

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Posted: 9 years ago

#218

Hi dear nandu ne sahi kaha she gone so much and now he wil undestand better

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A12609z

@A12609z

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Posted: 9 years ago

#219

Plzzz want angry Nandini n her brust out in Manik's over protective ness towards her plzzz she should say usko abb itna pyar kiyu aaraha h kiyuki Soha n usko chor diya ya wo pregnant h iss liye...plzzz want angry Nandini...n Manik's out brust tooo plzzz