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Posted: 9 years ago
So sorry didu for being late
Amazing updates just loved it.
All the best for your exams

Your baby loves you a lot didu
Eku
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Posted: 9 years ago

NOTE -: thnks for your support !!

That girl deleted the story ...

PART 12

Next day it was a total hustle bustle environment in manhotra mansion ..

Nandini was running in every direction of the house in order to manange everything of decorations...

She was busy giving instructions to her assistants regarding decorations and all other arrangements..

It was maniks haldi today ...an important function of marriage ...

the whole manhotra mansion was decorated beutifully ...


Alyas haldi was also going to take place at the the same place ..

Nandini was pretending all calm and cool yet engrossed in her work but she was the most devasted soul present their ..

And why she shouldn't ??

Afterall she loved the men who was going to marry a different girl in few days ...

And on the top of that the most unfortunate deed was that she was planning the wedding of her LOVE with some other person ...!!

Nothing can be more tragedic then this ...!!

she was in the irritated and devasted state ...

she was trying her best to focus on her work ...but this time not only her heart but her mind was giving her a tough time of not remembering manik ...

on the other hand manik was standing in front of the mirror getting ready for haldi ...

he was looking absolutely handsome and hot in that yellow kurta matched up with blue dhoti ...his hairs gelled up perfectly as always ..


he was standing in front of mirror having a determined and intense expression on his face ..

yes !! a day back he was happy as he got to know that the girl whom he love also love him back !!

but today ..its his haldi ...and that too with alya..

after some days its his marriage and he had a very less time to clear the mess he created ...

he remembered that he tried to talk to nandini today in the morning ...but she deliberately got engrossed in her works and ignored talking ...

he had understood that there is something wrong with nandini which was stopping her to even express herself to him ...

manik was really irritated by the fact that nandini was not even giving him a chance to speak ...

she was trying her best to ignore any kind of conversation with manik ...

"i don't know what is actually stopping you to even talk to me but the thing which i know and what really matter is the fact that you love me and i too love you ...and that is ...what is important."manik said to himself determindedly and made his way downstairs ...

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Nandini was standing downstairs shouting on one of her assistant...

Suddenly a boy dressed in blue T and and creamy shorts came looking super cool ...

"these frowns doesn't suit on this beautiful face..." he spoke cheesily removing frowns from nandinis forehead ...

"excuse me ..." nandini spoke pouting.

"you look beautiful ..." the men complemented her.

"excuse me !! do i know you ...??" nandini asked him sarcastically yet little pissed... "no !! we don't know each other ... but we can ...!! you know a beautiful lady like you and ofcourse a handsome man like me ...can know each other well ..." he replied her cheesily and nandini smiled and tileted her eyebrows ...

"are you flirting with me ??" she asked him sarcastically .."aha !! beauty wid brains ..." he again complemented her cheekily ...and this time nandini frowned.

"listen !! stop flirting ...i m not interested ok ??...and what the hell are you doing here ..." nandini questioned him angrily completely forgetting the fact that its not her function ...

"oh !! chill lady ...ok hi its aryaman...aryaman saxena ...alyas cousin brother ..." the men introduce himself with a charming attitude and nandini bit her tounge and patted her forehead.

"oh !! sorry ...i mean ...woh .i m sorry ...!!" nandini apologised throwing her hands in the air ...showing her confusing state...

"ahhh !! chill ...its ok !! but i must say you are looking gorgeous !!! " Aryan again complemented her with a smile ...

"thank you " nandini thanked him with a smile ...and continued ..."ok so you are here for the marriage ..you must be feeling tired ...come i will show you the room ...!!" nandini told him smilingly ...

"amm !! wait first atleast introduce me to yourself ..??" aryaman asked her ..

"me ...umm i m planning your sister wedding with manik manhotra ..." nandini introduced herself and remembering about the wedding she again became sad ..but controlling her emotions she plastered a fake smile ...

"ohk !! wedding planner ..." aryaman adjusted in his mind..

"so miss planner...i mean beauty with brains and with lots of work ...am i wasting your precious time ..."

Nandini chuckled and they mixed up with each other comfortably ..

But little they both knew that they were witnessed by two furious pair of eyes... manik was watching them from upstairs pissing his teeths ... he didn't liked the way aryaman flirted with nandini ... and now seeing them both mingling with each other so well and chatting with each other like long lost friends irked him to the core...

And one fact was also this that aryaman was always in maniks bad books ...

He never like arayaman s over chirping nature and extra mingling attitude ..

Aryaman always acted funny and always stay in joyous mood which manik hated the most about him ...

And now seeing her girl with him ...was a point for him to get angry ...

And ofcourse he is a possessive majnu ...yeah !! he can behave all insane when it comes to nandini but yes how he can see his lady love talking with the person all smilingly he hated the most ..

Yes he was jealous ...for the first seeing her laughing .

Not because she was laughing but by the fact ...that whom she was laughing with ...

Manik pissed his teeths and his jaws tightened ...he closed his fists controlling his anger and made his way to them carrying that killer smirk on his lips...

"whats ...so hilarious ...??" manik asked them smirking ...yet pissing his teeths ..

"hey !! hi bro whats up ...?" aryaman suddenly pulled manik in a hug maniks eyes was still fixed on nandini ...

And it was not a fault ...nandini was looking extremely hot in that white skirt reching till her mid thighs paired up with black crop top and with a light blue sleeveless denim jacket on it ...

She was looking as hot that she can easily burn a cigratte stick with her hotness ...!!



Nandini noticed maniks intense gaze on her ...she unconsciously tried to avoid his gaze ...

Aryaman broke the hug ...and notice the uncomfortableness in the atmosphere ...

Before he could speak anything nandini interrupted and spoke ..." i think i should leave you guyz alone ...i have lots of work ..so excuse me ...!! " she told them plastering a fake smile on her lips ...and excused herself..!!

Manik got very irritated on seeing her again ignoring him ...

"now !! you cant even stand my presence ..fine nandini ...!!" manik muttered to himself pissed ..

"ma..." Aryaman was about to say something but was cut off by manik as he said ..."bro !! gotta go ...excuse me ...and he will show you the room ...!!" manik informed aryaman and pointed at the men standing a little far from them doing his work and left from there ...

Aryaman sighed ...and muttered ..."intresting ." to himself and made his way to that man ..

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Nandini was walking to the room given to her... to get ready for the haldi ...

But sudden in a second she was pulled inside by a strong force and was pinned to the wall ...

Before she can shout for help ...she saw manik plaming her mouth ...

His eyes were stiff ...and intense rather then soft and loving like always ..

When manik felt that she is not going to shout he left he mouth ...but placed his both hands on both sides of the wall so that she wont run away ...

"what nonsense is this manik ...??" nandini shouted at him furiously still not meeting her eyes with him ...

"exactly ...nandini what nonsense are you doing ...??" manik snapped back at her furiously ...

"manik listen ...!! leave me ...!!" nandini again avoided any kind of conversation ..

But this time manik got really angry and grabbed her shoulders tightly ...

"listen nandini ...dont test my patience ...stop uttering this nonsense ...!!" manik warned her furiously ..

But this time nandini lost her all cool and shouted back at him ...tears flowing from her eyes ..."what ...?? i m doing nonsense ...?? and the things happening with me ?? what about me manik ?? mera kya ..?? you want me to be happy .right ?? tou just question yourself ...manik ki can a girl stay happy watching her LOVE marrying with someone else ...?? and on the top of that ...mein kudh ...like me myself is planning your wedding ...It hurts manik ...IT REALLY HURTS ...!!" nandini blasted and cried more ..

Manik was taken aback by her sudden outburst but listening her ...he realised that her reaction like this was normal ...

It was obvious that anyone ...anyone will react like this only ...!!

It was not her fault ...!!

It was all his fault which he needs to make ok ...!!

He slowly cupped her face and looked in her eyes lovingly and said "nandini ...I LOVE YOU ...and i know you too LOVE me ...i know i had created the mess ..but i will clear it soon ...bas i need your support ...i need you to with me ...!!" he told her making her understand his point of view ...and took her in a craving hug ...!!!

Nandini too lost her control and hugged him back tightly soothing the devasted state of her soul ...!!

They were standing like that only from a ;long time feeling each others presence .but suddenly something came in her mind and she pushed maniks away ...

"nothing can be alraght manik ...now nothing can be alright .its wrong manik ...i cant too this ..." nandini spoke tears forming in her eyes and ran away wiping those stupid tears who already made their way out leaving baffled manik behind ..

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Phew !!! i m done ...long update ...happy ...??

I know some of you really wait for the updates ...

But i have noticed the response ...is really disappointing ...

So i can easily sense that people are not interested ...and that i am saying for all my three stories ...so wont bore you further and will wrap up soon as i cant left it in mid ...

Or i cant do anything as bhut mehnat lagti ...but you ppl cant even write few words ..or long comments tou ana hi band ho gye hn ...!!

You ppl are continuously sending me buddy requests and i m accepting it and sending you guyz pms too ...

But you guyz really feel that the chapters are not even worth your few words of appreciation ...

So its OK i wont torture you further and vaise bhi i have exams from 11 as my exams were postponed from 1 ...and that too to 30 ...

Silent readers ...thak chuki hn ...ab nhi bol skti ..

I don't know your exixtence even on my story !!

But still ek do update or jhello as i really worked hard on najdikiyan ...shadi tou krwake jaungi ..

And eventually lafz ...last chapter was really ...had put my all efforts ..but nhi ...you love keep mum ...pictures .of peacocks and cakes...those poems ...only i know how much efforts i put of myself ...

I was going to update brutal love ...i had written half but mood nhi h ...!!!

Now i can just hope that you like the update ...so mood ho ...or time ho ...tou comment krdena...

Otherwise theeke no problem ...!!

I know i am the only stupid here who try to give you updates ...even after having my exams ...a pcm student ...tutions ...sleepless nights ...after getting hell tired ...

And in return i only deserve your silence right ...??

BYE !!

AKANKSHA !!

Edited by akkukh - 9 years ago
apps33 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
Res
Unres
Oyee... Meri darling behen...

Aa gayi tu...

Woh b itta mast update leke...

Nandu ignoring Manik

Aryamann ka entry

Jealous manik

And hurt nandu...

Omg...

Bohot maja aanewala h...

And babe...
I understand

Kam response milne ka dukh...

It hurts!

But iska matlab yeh nai k tu likhna hi band karde yaar...

Upar se maine abtak tere sab ffs padhe b nai...

This is not done...

But still i wont force you

After all I know what ur goin through

And trust me it's nothing different here

Kabi kabi lagta h forum chodke bhag jau

But woh b nai kar sakti

Anyways

Update... Was awesome

I loved it

Ab dekhte h Manik Malhotra kya karta h nandu ko manane
manane k liye...

M excited already

Jaldi update kariyo

And yeah... All the best for exams...

Ps* sorry for talking rubbish
Edited by apps33 - 9 years ago
shwetparth143 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
NICE UPDATE...HOPE THEY CLEARED ALL MISUNDERSTANDINGS SOON...WAITING FOR NEXT UPDATE ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update
Arayaman flirting with nandini if he continues that na he will surely get some punches frm manik fr sure awww manik is jealous tahts super
Nandini is correct at her place but nw how will manik clear all the mess around him eager to know
Continue sooonnn
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update dude.
Jealous manik is amazing.
Innocent soul nandni is suffering a lot.
How difficult for her is to plan wedding of her love.
Will wait for next.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update. Haldi decoration pictures were amazing.manan convo was mindblowing.jealousy manik was fab.wow aryaman intro in the story add more curiosity to know what is going to happen. Waiting for next update. Thanks for pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update...
Nandini is in too much pain...
Hope Manik clears d mess soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome Awesome Awsome...
That thing only i could say..
Like literally it was too cute,
And i am not finding this "Aryaman" a good person
Just a guess..
Aur nandini ki narazgi sahi he, manik should be more understanding on this things, as he cant see nandini with any other guy.
So it is equally difficult for her also. Infact more, because marriage is on..
But anyway, loved the update, and good k that girl deleted your story...
Thanx for d pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update loved it jealous manik is always a treat manik kuch kar to RHA nhi hai BA's khada dekh RHA hai aur bol RHA hai mail sab thik kar doonga kab jab shadi ho jayegi. Nandu is right on her place koi bhi ladki a is a hi react karegi but pls yaar mehandi mat home Dena warns kitna bekar lagega sari rashm alya k sath n shadi nandu k sath to pls Jo bhi Karna hai haldi hone se pehle. Ab to kuch kar me manik now its high time aur kitna rulayega nandu KO.

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