The forceful kiss manan ff on hold note on pg 60 - Page 30

Awesome update
Eagerly waiting for the next part..

awesome

Dude one word AWSOME. Period.

Originally posted by: apps33

Hold on...

Let me laugh first...

You can't be kidding me

Omg

Manik

His balls

Omg poor baby...

The pain

And cabir

And...

Ice pack...

Omg...

I almost died laughing

This was amazing

Awesome

Just too good baby

Loved it

And finally her makeover

I'm sure gondola is gonna have a heart attack seeing this HAIRLESS ROOSTER look so stunning

Omg am already waiting for the moment

And babe...

I don't think anyone... And i seriously mean... NOONE... Can describe the pain better than you...🤣

Then may ut be a heart break

Mind numbing kick in nuts...

When your hair is literally ripped out of your skin

Or when you see a lizard climbing up your leg🤣🤣🤣

I wanna read more

And i wanna read more now

Please baby jaldi update kardo

Ps: I forgot to mention

But I guess you deserve to know

This has become one of my FAVOURITES...

I love this story

Okay now am done...😆

lol it cracked me badly that's why i love writing comedy this comments always cracked me wese party ke liye i have a surprise you will be on the floors while laughing its going to be hilarious but yar comedy is damn difficult sabse difficult trust me yar meri jaan nikl jati h isko likhne me so kya kru late ho jata but tere liye try krungi jldi likhne ki

That was amazing awesome superb outstanding mind blowing fantastic lovely update tysm dear fr the update

I have been laughing while reading this while chapter, especially in the end...Waiting for the next chapter, may be its gonna be the fresher's party...where Manan meets again

Hey

Nice update...
Maniks reaction about d information which cabir has passed about d ice pack was awsm...
And then nandu's paper ball and maniks I m so not gonna leave u look was so hilarious...
Hehehehe...
Nandu is scared of lizard...
And navyas entry was good...
And nw nandu's make over and waxing wali thoughts was just awsm... Really must give her trophy...

Keep smiling
Stay blessed...

Hey

Nice update...
Maniks reaction about d information which cabir has passed about d ice pack was awsm...
And then nandu's paper ball and maniks I m so not gonna leave u look was so hilarious...
Hehehehe...
Nandu is scared of lizard...
And navyas entry was good...
And nw nandu's make over and waxing wali thoughts was just awsm... Really must give her trophy...
Continue soon...

Keep smiling
Stay blessed...

This was just too gud
The update was a beautiful
Mixture of humor wid it's plot
The manbir part was great
And finally navya has entered
Not to forget the humor that the update
Held !!! Amazed at how wonderfully u can handle
To write Smthing light hearted(forceful kiss) and
Something soo dark and emotional as devils !!!
Love you works
Thanks for the pm
And would love receiving them further!!

Hahahaha to funny update but it was awesome though