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Posted: 9 years ago
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Damm damm excited please update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#22
very excited! i loed your previous ff too so cannot wait for this one!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#23
Very interesting
Update soon
And i love reading hot sexy bold update
I just love manan love making updaate
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wohoo new story
Bring it on dear
Looking fwd to
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow. .awesome awesome. .

You came with new story.

Very very good.

Looking forward to seeing more.



Thanks.




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Posted: 9 years ago
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yes please
will wait for the update😃

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting story.Do PM me when updated
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damm excited ashu...
waiting waiting waiting eagerly...😊
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SPACE Academy was the college of dreams. The high class posh students coming in their rich cars, flaunting their clothes in this building every day was a sight to watch. And so was the building and the college premises. The campus which comprised of 4 huge towers had the entire infrastructure to make it stand out and be called the best. Not only the building but the campus also had a big play ground area; thanks to the trustees of the college who had invested in it without showing an inch of greed. The white marbles laid on the bustling corridors or the classrooms lit so well with the luminous light. All of it made every student dream to be a part of this college. However there was one in this; probably the crow in the bunch of peacocks who was really disinterested to be a part of this life. Neither the elaborate college interested him nor the teachings of the highly qualified professor because like every day today as well MAnik Malhotra was sleeping in the luxurious classroom; every student to dream to be a part off. He felt so detached and odd one in this, strange he was--one of a kind.
Manik Malhotra slept in the back of the class with his coat on his face struggling with his hangover due to the late night party he had. He swore to himself not to drink again but then he knew it was just for a day. He was having a really bad time and his best friend Cabir just did not help in tat as he found it quote funny as he was continuously poking Manik all the time. He was actually making it hard to be in his dreamland as Cabir was bus poking compass on his new jeans and at times writing on his coat. Had it not been for the hangover MAnik was sure to smack Cabir but what was possibly funny he had no idea as Cabir was laughing continuously and Manik sat there with his eyes closed hurling all the curse words he knew at him.

Manik wake up "kabir again poked him
"Kabir let me sleep yar "he said while hiding himself under the blazer
Just than professor saw manik sleeping on his desk

"Good morning Manik "he called him while placing his hands on his chest
"Kabir i told you na let me sleep yar ek toh wo buddha professor bore kar rh h upar se tu now shut your mouth and let me sleep "he said lazily professor clenched his palm his jaw hardened

WHAT YOU THINK ONLY MANIK MALHOTRA HAS THE COPYRIGHT TO BE ANGRY ON SOMEONE !

"Mr manik malhotra i am telling you for the last time wake up or else i am gonna suspend you "professor said while giving him a murderous look
Manik opened his eyes lazily
It took him a few seconds to realize that he was in classroom surrounded by all the students
Or professor was standing on his desk !
.he raised his hand in a friendly little wave and grinned.
GOOD MORNING SIR !
You should have seen the effect it had...
Professor glare at him
Manik's eyes almost popped out of their sockets and the color drained from his cheeks. It was like he'd seen a ghost!
(Or a zombie invasion, more like)

Professor jaw clenched
in anger,his lips set in a
straight line, his frown just short of making its
remarkable appearance

"Good morning mr manik malhotra "professor mocked at him
nervousness n fear grip
his heart tightly.
Very tightly !
"I hope you had great sleep"
Professor snapped at him while, gritting
his teeth's and gazing at him piercingly.
Manik gulped his saliva

"V..vo vo sir i was just "he stammered
"Yeah complete it i am waiting for your answer "professor said

"Sir vo last night i was awake toh "before he could complete professor jump in

"What you were doing whole night manik "he asked

"Study sir that too your subject maths "he said
LIAR ! LIAR ! LIAR !
Lil devil aka his mind poked him
You shut up "he snapped at lil devil
"What did you said "professor asked
Shit !
"Nothing sir "he said
"Manik i want you to solve this question "he said while pointing his finger towards board
Manik gave him a weird look as if he asked for his kidneys !
"Me sir "he asked
"Yes you now go solve it "he ordered

NO DOUBT MANIK MALHOTRA WAS IN TROUBLE
DEEP DEEP TROUBLE !

His thoughts broke when he heard someone giggling

WHO ELSE CAN DO THIS
OUR VERY OWN
AHMM NANDINI MURTHY !!

Manik glared at him they looked at each other for serval nerve wracking seconds she observed anger in his eyes his nostrils flaring in annoyance

"Manik i can't waste my whole period for you do it fast "professor shouted on him
She smirked when she saw him so stressed
It's her antics or smirks that irritates
him.
Irritates you or affects you? Lil Devil again made his entry
Manik move towards the board he picked up a chalk his hands was shivering
Whole class was biting their nails as if there was a some cricket match going on or sachin was about to complete his century
Manik was sweating like anything

But, he, being manik malhotra
can't backed down, in front of the whole class
Eh, No freaking' way !
Than he being to solve the question
After some time he was with the question
Now manik look towards the professor for the answer
"Pathetic solution "he said

f**k !

"I must say a kg student can do better than this "professor mocked at him

"Nandini can you do this "professor passed the ball in her court

ROOSTER NO WAY SHIT !
Manik thought

"Sure sir i can "she said while flashing her 32 teeths
She move towards the board picked up a chalk within a seconds question was solved

Very good nandini "professor appreciated her

She gave a i won look to manik as if she snatched the whole malhotra empire from him

NOTHING CAN BE MORE WORST THAN THIS
ATLEAST NOT FOR HIM !

YOU WILL PAY FOR THIS ROOSTER "he thought

"Manik "professor move towards him
"Get out don't show me your ass "professor shouted on him

ERMM HOW DARE HE !

Budhhe you too will pay for this "he made a full revenge plan in his mind

"Sir agar manik jyega tab i will go with him "just than kabir made his late entry for his besties rescue

"Oh really "professor asked while arching his brow

"Yes ye ambuja cement se bani dosti hai no one has the power to break it "kabir said in typical tone while holding manik's hands

"Kabir tuhi mera sachha bhai hai "manik thought


"Agar tum manik ke sath bhar gye toh next exam me tumhe -40 milega "professor said

His eyes opened wide in shock when professor said this
No No No !

-40 means 36-40= -4
Means back !
Again three hours i have to spent while flirting with examiner
But wait
-4 is still pending
Means
36-4 =32
Again back
Again three bloody f**king boring hours
Means total 6 hours
Nooo what if my examiner will be a man
Hey mata rani !
I can't let this happen

"Sir v..vo i was just kidding manik deserves a punishment manik get out from the class "kabir went from butcher to a lamb in like almost
0.1second !

"Kabir what about ambuja cement "manik said while gritting his teeth

"Manik ambuja cement me milawat ho gyi "he said while making a puppy dog face
"Manik malhotra hope you got your answers now get lost "professor said
Manik gave a bro-meet-me-outside-i-am- gonna-kick -your -ass look to kabir
Kabir looked like a scared puppy but he just can't do this so he kept his mouth shut and dug his face in books again manik heard her giggles it made him more angry

"You trio will pay for this "he again made a revenge plan in his mind
"Out i said "professor again shouted on him

'Huh buddha 'he muttered and left the class

After some time class was over kabir came out from the class he saw manik was waiting for him outside
dangerous MANIK who was all set to kill with just the look in
his eyes !
Oh,he will the luckiest person on this planet if this floor will just
open up n swallow him
Mata rani !
Kabir called his mata rani for his rescue but
No one came !
Manik took a step towards kabir
He gulped his saliva
he could visualize the manik laughing Evilly at his
helplessness !
After beating him
Ehh black and blue !

Kabir looked liked a typical bollywood movie heroine who was about to caught by villain !

Manik came more close to him he narrowed his eyes n glanced at kabir with a
piercing gaze !
Very piercing!
Kabir closed his eyes
He knows his death was close !
JUST THE WAY JERRY RAN AWAY FROM TOM
SHERKHAN RAN AWAY FROM MOGLI !
VILLAXE RAN FROM BEN 10
Same as
KABIR RAN AWAY FROM MANIK ...!!!!
,like
some invisible fire catching on His invisible tail.

"Kabirrr waitt "manik shouted but kabir was already gone

Kabir ran from there
How could he just do this
He underestimated manik malhotra
In a fraction of seconds manik caught him

"Manik dekh chod de muje i haven't done anything wrong"kabir pleaded to him

"Really sir manik deserve this manik get out it was me na who said this "manik said while grabbing his neck

"Manik i will do everything you want abhi chod de please tuje jo chaiye le le "kabir said while freed himself from manik's grip manik tighten his grip on his neck

"Jo chiye le lu "manik said while arching his brow

Damn it !
Think before you speak kabir
Dumb head you are
Shit now what damage is already done ! He thought

"Okh i want you new watch"he said and winked at him

"Manik dad gifted me "kabir said while making a innocent face

"So what tu muje gift kar de"he winked kabir made a bad face

"Fine chod ab "he said manik left him he turned his face to other side manik kept his hand on his shoulder

"Chal canteen chaltey hai bill tu dena "manik said evilly

"Aj tak tune kabhi dia hai "he said while gritting his teeth

Both entered in canteen manik spotted rooster there

Manik she is real culprit "kabir said he smirked

Just she took the seat and placed her order

1 veg burger
French fries and cola
Waiter nodded and left from there
Manik gave a wicked look to kabir just like the evil twin he understood everything

"Waiter"kabir called him
Waiter came to them

Yes sir can i help you what you want "he politely said

"Give it to me i will typed our order "
Just than manik snatched his tablet from his hand

He saw her order there
He didn't do it anything
Nahh ...!!!
What manik malhotra will do with this
A little bit editing
Does it matters ...??

He just added chicken beside the BURGER !
That means

Chicken +burger =chicken burger in nandini murthy's plate

Umm its sounds Trouble
A very deep one
Lets see !

Nothing much cold coffee for both of us "manik said waiter gave him a
Weird look
And took his tablet back

After some time waiter came with the order and gave it to them manbir saw her eating burger while sipping the coffee

her order came
the "service is quick "she muttered
And she dug in with relish

"Umm its tasty "she said while chewing her burger
But it tasted
Weird unlike other days
Something is different
Anyways its tasty ummm"she chewed the burger while making weird noises she saw kabir muttered something in manik's ear he let out a laugh she couldn't figured out a single word so she thought to keep her concentrate on her
BURGER !

She was done with her food than waiter came to her with a bill
She gave him 50rs tips
"Food was very yummy "she said waiter thanked her

She took the bill in her hand

COCA COLA -40rs
FRENCH FRIES -50
CHICKEN BURGER -70rs
TOTAL -160

She took the money from her purse she was about to gave him but something stuck in her
Oh wait !
Chicken burger -70rs
She stared at waiter for a while her mouth hanging open

"What does this chicken burger means it can't be possible"she said her looks clear show that
She was horrified !

The waiter nodded enthusiastically "yeah a fresh one "

"No"she shrieked while grabbing his coller
Other people turned towards her the easy chatter had turned to a strained silence chairs squeaked as people turn to look at her

"Ma'am what are you doing"head came for the rescue of poor waiter
She was about to eat him alive
"What you have done"she said while pushing the plate away from her

"I ordered veg burger from where this non veg burger came how could you do this"she said while shooting draggers towards him

"Ma'am see you ordered this "waiter showed her his tablet

"No this can't be possible how can you change my order it's ILLEGAL "she again shouted on him
Poor soul was scared from her

"Ma'am trust me you only order this "waiter begged from her

"No no no no ...!!!she kept her hand on her mouth

"Look ma'am you need medical help but please before going out pay the bill"head said to her

"What the hell ek toh order change kar dia i am gonna file case against this canteen i will drag you to the court just wait and watch "she said while pointing her fingers towards him

"Ok ma'am but please bill if you don't have much money we need a waitress today if you want you can join "head said everyone started laughing on her
Manbir grinned evilly

"You ye lo tumhare pese keep the change but trust i am not gonna leave"she while throwing 200rs on his face

"Rooster became a criminal" just than manik made his entry

"Gondola keep your bloody f**king mouth shut am not a criminal or anything "she snapped at him

"You ordered chicken
They killed chicken
So you are the master mind criminal ! He winked at her

Wait that means it was who done this "she said while gaping at him

YES ...!!!!!
CONGRATS EINSTEIN
manik exclaimed

"You "she was about to complete but kabir came in mid

"Uff rooster ne rooster kha lia haww how could you
Nandu rat ko murga drayega "kabir mocked at her and reminded him

"You will pay for this gondola"she said while running towards the washroom
Manik and kabir burst into laughter
Hi 5 !!!!!

Nandini's pov

I swear as i walked out the restaurant's door someone followed me
A wispy little shadowy thing with a smiley face and said

"You ate my dad "
I turned around "no i didn't "

Than it disappeared
Haww
It was right there !

I covered my mouth with my palm and ran towards washroom

She came to washroom
Oh god oh god !
How could I
Aiyaapa nooo
I did it i actually did it ...
no no no !
What had i done... ???
i ate chicken burger that too infront of the whole college

I am guilty how could i this guilt was taking me to my
DEATH...!!!!!!!
Hawww...
I don't want to die
Not so early i am still a virgin
No no no no ...
Aiyooo aiyaapaaa
Now what i am suppose to do...?????
But it was a plan against me
Shit i need to file a case against Gondola
I really should consult my lawyer but
WAIT...!!!!
I don't know any lawyer
And i also need an exorcist
Those people who can get rid of Ghosts...!!!
But before you jump on any conclusion let me clear this
It was plan
I am completely INNOCENT...!!!!!

I still can't believe this happening
I must night marring
Some body please pinch me
Because this can't be real

All i can say is one moment i was enjoying myself and the next moment ...????
I was a killer a criminal
What if amms came to know about this
Shit ! Shit ! Shit !

She instantly land up in a dream

(Aiyoo nandu how could you how could you do this to me you broke your twenty years old vegans you ate non veg i never expected this from you that's what i taught you...????
Answer me kanna ...!!
Amms while wiping her tears

Amms but it wasn't my fault i haven't done anything
It was plan someone trap me into this "nandu said while holding her hands

Don't touch me you lost the right and
I don't know anything or i don't want to anything
I only know one thing
You can't stay in our house you have to leave nandu
Nikal jao yha se just get lost) Amms said while dragging her outside

Amms no no please muje ghar se mat nikalo where i will go please amms ...
She instantly came out from her dream she was
HORRIFIED... !!!!

My own amms disowned me i felt like an
ORPHAN...!!!!
Oh god !
She will send me off to a orphanage for the rest of my life
But wait orphanage are only for children's or i am not kid
Than old age home
Shit i am not a old woman
There is no place in the whole India where a young disowned girl can stay
Now where i will go ...????
No body wanted me
Nobody understood me
What i will do now ?????


and the day is still on
Ohk how is it first chapter of my new one
Force full kiss dare you to leave without comment you know me very well
I know it was pathetic but my gutter mind comedy is pathetic !
I can't help it i will continue with this if i will get good response so its up to you
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Posted: 9 years ago
#30
First one to comment 😃😃😃
this was one of the most hilarious update...
LAWYER...GHOST OF THE CHICKEN...BEING ORPHAN...ALL IS WAS REALLY REALLY FUNNY...
continue soon

Edited by Love_ashi - 9 years ago

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