MANAN FF-STORY OF LOVE - Chapter-8 pg- 39 27/12 - Page 20

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Chapter-7

Recap-manbir discussion...

Na-"yeh kya hai...?"

Nv-"ha... ye yaha kaise...?"

Manbir look navni's face n look into car n they both curse in mind.

Manik's pov

Ohh... shit. how m I so careless...

Cabir's pov

Ohhh... god. Now what to do think... bira... think.

Na-"ye burkhe yaha kya kar rahe hai."

Nv-"yeh burkhe to same hai jaise un dono burkha girls ne pehne the."

Cabir think something n msg someone.

Cbr-"ha... yeh yaha kya kar rahe hai...? Tum dono burkha bhi pehnti ho..."

Nv-"veer... hum dono bhi to yahi puch rahe hai ki yeh burkhe yaha kya kar rahe hai iska matlab yeh hamare nahi hai."

Mnk-"ya...cab(he is going to say cabir)"

Cabir put his leg on his leg.

Mnk-"ouchh..."

Na-"aman what happen...?"

Cbr-"wo kuch nahi sayad machchar ne kat liya hoga. Haina aman."

Mnk-"yaa... wo machchar... bahot bada machchar."

Manik said that giving deathly glare cabir.

Nv-"ek machchar ke katne se itani jorse chilaya...?"

Cbr-"wo machchar ne use kata to usne chilaya taki machchar bhag jai aur hum sab ko na kate."

Na-"what... veer kya bole ja rahe ho...?"

That time driver come there.

Driver-"wo bitiya aap aa gaye to mujeh buaya kyu nahi. Chaliye."

Na-"but wo burkhe...?"

Driver-"ohhh... ye o mera ek friend mujeh mil gaya tha jo mere ghar ke pas hi rehta hai usane apni biwi aur beti ke liye ye burkhe liye the. Par use kuch kam tha aur use me mil gaya to mene bola me dedonga unhe."

Nv-"fir thik hai."

All the time manik is confused but he look at cabir who is smiling n then he understand who did this.

All settle in car.

Cbr-"waise tum dono koi burkha girls ke bare me bol rahi thi."

Listing to this navni eyes poped out.

Nv-"nahi na veer tumne kuch galat sun liya hoga."

Mnk-"mujeh bhi aisa laga ki tum kuch aisa bola tha."

Na-"wo hamane market me burkha pehne do girls ko dekhd tha aur yeh burkhe bhi same the isi liye."

Cbr-"ohh..."

Mnk-"waise jab hum car ki taraf aa rahe the humne bhi do burkha girls ko chilate hua suna tha koi ladki par."

Listening to this navni got scared.

Nv-"kya... dekha tumne...?"

Cbr-"wo kuch nahi wo burkha girls keh rahi ki wo larki cho hai n all."

Mnk-"bro... aaj kal ki ladkiyo ka koi bharosa nahi."

Manbir is enjoying that teasing session.

Cbr-"ha... bhai."

Rest of the journy go in talking in different topics.

At farmhouse.

All reach at farmhouse n navni left.

Mnk-"cabir yarr. Tune yeh kiya kaise...?"

Cbr-"manik ise kehte hai magic of biraa... bcoz of his logic..."

Manik look at cabir.

Mnk-"what... I mean mehi milta hu tujeh ye sab ke liye. Ab sidhe sidhe bol."

Flashback

Cabir is thinking something n he get an idea. He msg the driver to come n say all this stuff...

Flashback over

Mnk-"yarr... man gaya tujeh... mere sath reh kar tu bada genius ho gaya hai."

Cbr-"tere sath reh kar...?"

Mnk-"ha..."

Saying this manik started running n cabir run behind him. Driver is enjoying the tom n jarry show. They reach at hall. Manik is running looking backward n BANG... manik bump with nandini n nandini fall down on couch n manik fall on nandini n navya watch all this. She go to help nandini n cabir is running n come towards navya. Cabir try to stop but n BANG... cabir bump with navya n cabir fall on manik's back n navya fall on cabir. So manik is over nandini, cabir is on maniks back n navya is over cabir. Manan n cavya share a cute eyelock.

Manik's pov

I m running from cabir n I bump with someone. When I see she is nandini. I fall over her n hand is on her waist. When I look into her eyes I just want to lost in it.then after sometime I feel something heavy fall on my back but who cares n that heavy thing push me towards nandini more. Now my lips touching her chicks. n bcoz of this her eyes poped out. she shivered under me n her chicks become dark shade of red. Ahhh... her chicks I want to eat them... n she bite her lower lips... I mean why she needs to do this...I look at her n again I lost in her eyes.

Nandini's pov

I m going towards couch but I bump with aman n I fall on couch n he fall on me n his all weight is on me. I look up n I lost in his chocolate brown eyes n time just stop there. After sometime something push him towards me n his lips touch my chicks. I just shivered. I just feel heat on my chicks n yaa I m blushing like hell. To stop myself I bite my lower lips then look at him but again I lost in his eyes.

Cabir's pov

I m running behind manik then I see navya so I try to stop but ahhh... I bump with her n I fall on something hard but who cares. N navya fall on me. My one hand on her waist n she close her eyes bcoz the fear of falling. After sometime she open her eyes. N her hair come on her face n I don't know what happen to me my hand go to her face n put hairs behind her ears. Doing this my hand touch her chick n she just shivered... I m enjoying her condition... she just close her eyes n her chicks become red.

Navya's pov

I see that aman fall on nandu. I go there to help them but veer bump with me. I just close my eyes in fear of falling down on floor but I fall over him n his hand is on my waist. I open my eyes. Veer is looking at me. My hair fall on my face n veer put them behind my ears. Doing this his hand touch my chick n I shivered n I started blushing. I close my eyes bcoz I cannot look at him more...

Manan n cavya are lost in each other. Dadi come there n see all this. She don't want to disturbe them but they are in hall n all servants are looking at them with smile.

Dadi-"umuh... umuh..."

No response.

Dadi-"man( she is going to say manik) I mean aman."

No response.

Dadi-"navya beta."

Dadi say is bit louder but again no response. This time dadi shout.

Dadi-"aag...aaggg..."

They come out of their la...la...land.

Dadi-"bachcho me tum logo ko disturbe nahi karna chahti thi par tum sab hall me ho not in your room."

Listing to dadi manan try to stand up but manik again fall on nandini. Then manik realize that cabir is on his back.

Mnk-"mote yarr tu kitana bhari hai. Uth... mere par se."

Cbr-"uth raha hu sale. Navya wo..."

Navya stand up n help cabir n then they both help manan.

Mnk-"dadi aag kaha lagi hai... aap thik to hai na."

Cbr-"ha dadi."

Dadi-"wo mujeh laga ki couch pe aag lagi hai so I just say you know."

N dadi smile at them n now manan n cavya understand the meaning of AAG about which dadi is specking. N they started looking here n there. N that time they realize that all servants looking at them with smile. Now they feeling like hide their faces somewhere.

Dadi-"beta aise kam room me karte hai n we have many room so you can take separate room. Tum charo ko ek room share karne ki jarurat nahi hai. Do ek room mai aur do dusare room me."

Dadi is enjoying their condition n manan n cavya are blushing, I like blushing is small word for their condition.

Cbr-"dadi aap ye kya bol rahi hai."

Mnk-"ha dadi aisa kuch bhi nahi hai."

Na-"ha dadi wo..."

Nv-"ha wo hum bas..."

Dadi want to laugh but she control herself.

Dadi-"wo hum... kya... me keh rahi thi ki tum sab market se aaye ho to thak gaye honge so fresh ho jao. We have many room so ek room me tum dono I mean nandini n navya fresh ho jao n dusre me tum dono I mean aman n veer."

Cbr-"what...?"

Nv-"aap ye keh rahi thi..."

Mnk-"r u serious..."

Na-"kya...?"

Dadi-"aise kyu puch rahe ho tum log kya soch rahe the ki mene kya kaha."

N dadi wink at them.

Na-"wo dadi hum fresh hoke aate hai."

Navni is going to room.

Dadi-"aur ha help chahiye to inhe bata dena."

Navni's eyes poped out.

Dadi-"koi bhi servant ko bol dena jo chahiye wo de denge tumhe."

Navni left n dadi look at manbir.

Mnk-"wo dadi hum fresh hoke aate hai."

Cbr-"ha... chal..."

They both run from there n dadi burst out of laughter.

Dadi's pov

aise kaise jane tum sab ko abhi to love story suru hui hai n I like nandini n navya n I think they are best for my naughty sons. after all they teach my sons how to blush. i think they are falling for each other aur aisa hai to I will fully support them. But pehle mujeh yeh janna hoga ko manik n cabir kya sochate hai. Chalo ab cupid bhi ban jati hua. N she go to manbir's room.

Manbir's room.

Mnk-"cabir yarr... aaj to hum gaye."

Cbr-"ha... I m sure dadi aati hi hogi."

Mnk-"hum kya bolenge unko."

Cbr-"pata nahi bro..."

Dadi come in the room.

Dadi-"yeh sab kya tha...?"

Dadi asked n screen freez at manbir's tensed face.

Precap- dadi's love test...

So here I complete my chapter-7...

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