MANAN FF-STORY OF LOVE - Chapter-8 pg- 39 27/12

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_MonsteR_Stuff_

@_MonsteR_Stuff_

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Posted: 9 years ago

#171

no dear
i read and comment also
who said it is not good because it is awesome
you keep writing
don't feel hurt

rahul

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aishubangia

@aishubangia

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Posted: 9 years ago

#172

Thanks for d pm dear.. n I'm really very srry.. jst read d update... actually my xams were going on.. 2 be precise pre boards jat cnt ignore them.. bt jaisw he i read i commented.. really luv ur story. Waiting jab manbir navni ko sach batenge.. update soon

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mananneetu

@mananneetu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#173

shit..i m really very sorry...
woh actually i was having my exams..isiliye i couldnt read it..
so maine comment bhi nahi kiya.
i jst saw ur pm..
plz dont feel hurt..
nd i will jst read the update..
nd comment once again

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Boomchelesa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#174

Hey dear... I startred reafding ur FF today...after seeing ur caption of feeling hurt...n i must say u write too good...! Loved it alott... Dont stop writing...continue... N ask ur readers to like n comment... N dekhna after some months... U will hv alott of readers of ur FF... I really understand ur pain... Writing FF is not easy... I started once n i was like... No yaar i cannot do it... Bt i'll encourage u to write... Coz i liked ur story... Best of luck...!!
God bless u

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mananneetu

@mananneetu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#175

so.yeah..i read the update
nd it was too funny..
when manik said "yaha hamare izzat ko khatra hain.." i was like ROFL .
loved the part..
its good ki they bith hve realized that kisi bhi relationship ki.base jhooth nahi hota.
nd i think they saw the burkha that they were wearing..
plz update soon
waiting
nd aaj se regularly comment karungi..promise!!

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Boomchelesa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#176

Hmm actuallu i wanted to give u this suggestion tht...?initially whn i read the charachtet sketch n chp 1 i liked it but... One thing i wanted to tell u tht pks dont carry both manan n cavya love stories together... Otherwise the stories loses its charm... Focus on one love story... N carry the other one in side.. Tht would enhance the beauty to ur story... Here both manik& cabir r thinking in same way... Dono ke dimaag mein ek cheez ek baar me aati hai... Every person has diff character n shafe... So pls i request u to pls focus on one love story...!!!
Its only a suggestion rest is upto u... U knw best as u r writing n FF...!!
God bless u..!

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Gayathri

@ashitha.kerala

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Posted: 9 years ago

#177

ur updates are good u continue both with manan nd cavya stories as same importance i like both continue

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shubhshash

@shubhshash

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Posted: 9 years ago

#178

Hey dear...
read yur updates in one go..
n I must sae it is amazing. ..
loved it. ...
too good...
Grt wrk...keep it up. . 😊

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artitanikhushi2

@artitanikhushi2

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Posted: 9 years ago

#179

Aswm

I just love this ff

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sri_valli

@sri_valli

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Posted: 9 years ago

#180

read all parts in one go dear...i loved this story a lot...manik and cabir in burkas...ha ha ha..very hillarious...and manbir fall for navni in their first meeting itself...superb

and manan first meet was just perfect.

And U R handling cavya and manan story very well...

I have sent U buddy request...plz accept it and send me pm for ur further updates..