KHAMOSHIYAAN-manan ss (precap pg:139 & link of thread 2 pg : 1) 22 - Page 48

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Posted: 8 years ago
Finally they meet
But obviously we need a twist
Will be waiting
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Posted: 8 years ago
I'm waiting for the next part eagerly.
But I'm Glad manik didn't need any introduction to identify nandini.
He's the best and nandini is a poor soul.
I just can't wait to see manik help her to clear the mess.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome Update
Finally Manan meet each other
But Nandini aisa kyu karrahi hai?
May be because of mukti..
Manik kiss nandu😳
and nandu slap manik...
Ohhh god..
It was superb
Waiting for the next part
Thanks for the pm
Take care dear😊

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Posted: 8 years ago
It's awesome ..amazing ... marvelous ... nice too
Manik recognize Nandu ...He can feel his Nandu ...

AND all this is done by Mukti na?? ...She is so bad

Loving it

Will be waiting for the story to proceed ...

Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
fab chappy
love has nbo boundarys srsly
manik knows his nandu
afterall she is his Love
and hating mukti here if she did all this srsly
cont asap
ty for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
really sorry for late comments...
... flashback moments ...so adorable N cute
Manik is so happy ..his Nandini coming to meet her Monstu...
... but scared...
Finally manan met
...feeling sad for them
...poor Nandu😭😭
...know that Manan will together forever for Hamesha...
egarly waiting...
thank you for the wonderful update...
Edited by arshuaar - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
first of all sorry for not commenting on previous parts...im little but busy and couldn't find time to read ur ff.. Now um free and read all parts in one go...thus us an amazing ff dear with fabulous story line...u potraited manan emotions very well...liked flashback parts...now waiting to know the reason behind nandinis behaviour...
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Posted: 8 years ago
sorry for commenting late
was lil busy
update was really awesome
finally manan met
don't know why nandini is hiding her identity
this mukti😡😡plz use manan ki life se mukti dedo😈
but loved how manik understood that she is only nandini
what was that dear first meet me hi slap😒
plzz continue soon
waiting for manik's reaction
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Missing ur updates yaar it's been 3 days...Abto update kardo...Thanks for the pm ...Awesome update ..Waiting
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Posted: 8 years ago
Khamoshiyaan

Part : 6 Force To do

Murthy House ,Mumbai

"Slap.. me.. once more.. "manik said forwording his face toward her n she shocked by his word

"Common.. agr.. tumhai.. yhi.. lgta.. na.. tum mujhe yeh.. sb.. bol logi.. thapad mrdogi.. tu mein yeh.. believe kr lunga.. so let me.. tell u that u r highly mistaken.. i know.. u r my chotu.. "he said with attitude n confidently as he is sure that she is nandini only

"Seriously tum bilkul nhi.. badli.. ho.. abhi.. kisko.. vishvas.. dilwane. Ke liye.. tum kisi bhi Extend tk ja.. skti.. ho.."he smiles than said n nandini looking finding some words to say as she shocked how can he so sure that she is nandini.. but happy also he upto now also remember her n regonise also

"But.. u forgotten.. one.. thing.. ki tum kabhi.. bhi. Manik.. ke age... jeet nhi.. pae.. ho.."manik said looking toward her but he also broken why she is doing this but he decided he will make her to say the truth herself to him

"Ho.. gya.. tumhra.. kabhse.. chotu... kare. Ja.. rhai.. ho.. mein.. janti.. hn.. tum bhut famous ho tum.. lekin.. mujhe tum koe interest nhi.. u r friend of nandini.. that why i listening u.. now get lost from my room.."she said angrily showing her toward door but from inside she feeling like dyeing by talking him like this way.. she killing herself by doing this

Manik left the room after giving her smile n nandini get shocked after that much also he is not believing her but manik knows that there is something very serious.. that why she is doing like this n there now no use to talk with her so he left

"I m sorry.. i m so.. sorry.. manik... "nandini cryingly said by bending down with support of wall as she feeling so much bad as he slap him without any reason on kiss as she knows that is not their first kiss only she knows how she control her when he kissed her than she.. slap him

"Manik.. i know.. i m doing very.. wrong but i force to do.. this for.. u.. i wanted to tell u.. everything.. but dr lgta.. tumhai.. kho.. na.. do.. plz.. mere.. yeh.. sb.. aur.. muskil.. mt.. karo.. mujh pr.. itna.. vishas krke.. "she said n again crys by holding her knees

It is so difficult for anyone unwillingly to say bad to anyone whom u love .. this broken the person from inside n same with nandini she is broken by doing this . she didn't think manik will regonized her.. she is happy also that he rememberd her..

She think how manik kissed her now n than she lost in her childhood when for the first manik kissed her

Flashback

"Chotu.. don't cry.. na.. "manik said setting beside her in park they were sitting on bench n nandini is crying becoz her family is leaving mumbai in 3 month becoz of work

"Manik.. how can i live without
Tumhai.. pta.. hai.. jb tum.. 2 din ke liye.. chle gye.. kitna.. miss kiya.. tha.. meine.. tumhai.. "she said in her cute way b/w her cry

"Acha.. jb toh.. bol rhi.. ki u have.. done.. lots of fun without me.. "manik said in fun way as he want chill her up but he also feeling bad now they will never able to meet eachother

"Voh.. toh. Voh.. meine.. isliye.. bola.. tha.. kyoki.. u were saying that ki.. tum vha.. bhut masti.. krke.. agr.. tumhne.. mujhe.. miss.. nhi.. kiya.. toh.. mein.. kyo.. bati.. ki i missed u.. "she said again start crying

"Manik.. i don't want.. go.."nandini said b/w her than manik is also sad wht to say

"Acha.. sun.. i promise.. u.. we will meet.. means i will come to.. u.. to meet.. u.. jb.. mein.. akle.. khi.. aja.. skta.. honga.."manik said holding her hand she now stop crying look at her with no expression

"But.. how will come to know.. where.. i m living.. aur.. tum mujhe.. bhul gye.. toh.."she said as she afraid if he will forgot him than wht happen

"Budhu.. teri.. muma.. se tere.. ghr.. address lenge.. na.. aur.. haan.. tujhe bhul jana.. toh dur ki bt hai.. iski.. toh tu.. chinta.. chodh de.. "he said now she got lit bit relief

"Acha.. abhi.. toh.. we.. having.. 3 month.. na.. we will enjoy fully.. without any worries.. aur.. haan.. mein.. movie.. dialogue suna.. tha.. ki.. dur.. rhaine.. se pyaar badhta.. hai.."manik said n nandini looking at him as she was listening her talk to so carefully
"Sachi.. "nandini said n manik pecked her cheek n said "muchi.."

N than manik again start teasing her by pulling her cheek n again they start fighting

They were small n this age.. generally children donot about the meaing of love.. n same with them as they thought they r best frnd of eachother but afterward they get separated they come to know wht is love
Love is that when we can't able to think about think about anyone only always busy thinking about her whom we love n having full trust on them
Flashback end

"Manik.. u fulfill yr.. promise that u will never forget.. me.. but.. i .. betrayed u.. i m so bad.. n u were right.. duriyan.. pyaar.. ko.. aur.. badha.. deti.. hai.. that time i don't take yr.. word seriously as i was unaware about wht is love.. but i now.. i know.. i love.. i will don't get weak i will do this for.. u.. "she said getting up n wipes her tear than goes to washroom to wash her face

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"Manik.. where.. were.. u.. gone.. "mukti Said holding her hand but manik looked at her angrily

"Wht.. "she about said something but manik pinned her with wall holding her hand

"Just stop.. acting.. n tell the truth.. wht's going on i know.. u r not nandini... so stop.."manik shout n mukti get scared with him

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Nandini look herself at mirror n touch her lips with her finger n close her as she is feeling him

"When.. u.. kissed.. me.. it's feel so god.. "she thinks fully lost in that movement but than he remembered wht she done..

"Nandini.. why u.. slapped him.. ushai.. kitna.. bura.. lga.. hoga.. kitna. Dil tuta.. hoga.. uska.."Nandini said to herself looking at mirror as her silly act again again coming in her mind than her eyes fall on knife on table

She immidaitly goes n grab the knife n cutted her palm slightly with knife closing her eyes to bear the pain blood oozed out badly as she want to punished herself for this n feel the pain which he is giving to him n again tear roll down from her eyes blood is flowing down n than she listen laughing sound from outside

She immidaitly ran to door n open the door without bothering about her bleeding hand n she got shocked to see the scene infront of her eyes

Manik n mukti talking to eachother n laughing as they know eachother from many years

"He believed that she is nandini. But abhi todhi dr phle he was very sure that i m nandini.. "Nandini.. think n lookeding at them silently n blood continuously falling down from her hand

"Nandini.. why u.. worrying.. manik.. is believing her so it's good na.."she said after closing the door as she can't see them more

She again start crying setting with support of bed holding her knees now also her blood coming out her jeans also got dirty..

Than the door opened n mukti get shocked to see the condition of room n specially her

"Nandini.. yeh.. sb.. r u.. mad.. "she shouted n nandini immiadiatly looked at her but didn't say anything

Mukti immidiatly take out the first aid box n sit beside her n take her hand start doing bandage

"Why.. u..doing.. this.. n also.. forcing me do this if it is hurting.. u.. alot.. bolo.."mukti asked her now also angrily

"I slapped him mukti.. "she said cryingly looking at her n mukti also feel bad for her on her condition but she wanted to know why she is doing this

"Nandini.. looked.. at me plz.. tell na.. than.. why.. u doing.. i know.. it's hurting u.. from inside.."mukti said holding her face

"Khi.. bato.. ka.. razj.. rhaine.. hi bhtr hota.. hai.."again she get the same answer from her

Mukti phn Rings up n mukti take out her phn from pocket n nandini also see that it's manik n more tear flows from her eyes

"Hello..."mukti said getting up
N looked at nandini who is looking down

"Yeah.. missing.. u.. alot.."mukti said n come out from the room

"Howz.. nandini.."manik asked he setting on chair in office

"Manik.. i think.. we need to change the plan.. "mukti said worriedly

Flashback

"Just stop.. acting.. n tell the truth.. wht's going on i know.. u r not nandini... so stop.."manik shout n first mukti get scared with him

"So.. tum uski ja kr.. hi.. kyo.. nhi.. puch lete.."mukti said n manik get shocked as he didn't think dat she will say the truth so easily n he leave her arm

"I know.. tumhne.. ushai.. pucha.. hoga.. but she didn't tell u.. it's good that u recognise her as i also don't want this "mukti said n manik immidiatly asked her "so tell na.. why she is doing like this n who r u.."

"I m her sister.. mukti.."mukti said n manik get shocked as he knows she is the only child

"How.. ?"manik asked her n mukti said "it's long story.."

"Okay.. leave. Tell why u both do this.. n come with me.."manik said walking toward door

"Stop.. she will not tell.. u.. i know.. "mukti said n manik stopped n turn back n look at her

"Even i also wanted to know why she is doing this.. manik.. "mukti said n he comes toward her

"She cares for u.. lot.. so iska mtlb yeh. Toh nhi.. that.. she hates u.. mein.. janti. Voh.. aise.. sach.. nhi.. bolegi.."mukti.. said n manik so confused n shock by all her word

"Than.. how.."manik asked her in a serious way

"I have planned.. "mukti said n than she tell him the plan

Flashback end

"But.. why.."manik asked him confusingly

"U... know.. tumhre.. janne.. wht she done..."than mukti told about everything

"Oh.. god.. she.. is mad.. "manik said getting up from the chair

"No.. i definitely know.. there is something very serious behind all this.. "manik said

"Don't worry.. she will surely say the truth the plan will surely work.."manik said confidently with determined look

"I hope so" mukti said n than cut the call

Manik again sit back to his chair n he feeling so confused n frusted by all this n more than worried wht's the reason why she is doing this he never thing after meeting her sometime like this going to happened

So here is next part with twist n turns how mukti got so god n manik know the truth now n now wht manik n mukti do so dat nandini break her silence n say truth n kya.. she will say the truth. U wanna.. so connected with the story.. n haan.. don't forgot to so big wale comments..

Stay blessed
Love Mehak



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