KHAMOSHIYAAN-manan ss (precap pg:139 & link of thread 2 pg : 1) 22 - Page 40

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Posted: 9 years ago
Thanx for pm.
Superb update.
Manik is so happy.
Plz don't do any thing bad with these poor souls.
Come back soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow I amazing superb chapter
Totally enjoyed
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
loved the update...

that letter was really very emotional...

manik.was so excited to meet nandini...

pata nahi how he will feel when nandu wont agree to say her real identity...

i m already feeling sad fr both of them..

update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update...
letter part n the flashbacks r so lovely...
eagerly waiting fr the next part...continue soon...
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It was beautiful update. Thanks for the pm. Continue soon. Tack care. Stay blessed. Keep smiling😊😊😊😊😊.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: saithanmayee

awesome update

awww the way manik locked the door so that no idiot can disturb him while reading the letter just loved that part 😆

finally nandini is coming back

I guess now the prolog part is coming up

but anyway eagerly waiting to see manan encounter

the letter is awesome

and thanks for the pm 😊

sorry for not commenting earlier my exams were going on at that time

but now they are completed so I will comment regularly


Thanx.. Dear..
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: shoana

soo cute update
the letter part was too adorable
manik relished their chilhood memories once again😊
he is too happy to meet his friend after soo long
plzz dnt make them apart
thanks for pm


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Posted: 9 years ago

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<font size="4">It was beautiful update. Thanks for the pm. Continue soon. Tack care. Stay blessed. Keep smiling😊.</font>


Thanx..
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Tiara115

Really u scared us at the last cliffhanger nut now as the mystery revealed than I let out a breathe.. it was cute... really excited about next update

Do update soon
Waiting eagerly


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Posted: 9 years ago

Khamoshiyaan

Part : 5 Manan Meet after 10yr.

Murthy House , Mumbai

Nandini P.O.V.

My sleep disturbed due sun raises n get up happily.. n than look at my surroundings n than realised i m at Mumbai n this mrng which i was waiting for 10yr. But today i hating that this day coming in my life.. 6 din phle i was so excited for this day.. why always me.. n than tear fall from my eyes i hate them.. why this happening wid me... why always me..

"Nandini... u have to be strong.. enough.. to face the reality.. u have to.. do.. this.. for manik.. "i wipe my tear with my palm n make myself strong

Than i take out my cloth from cupboard n than take a hot shower

Than do lit bit make to hide my dullness of face n to hide my swallowed eyes that due to crying yes i can't control my emotion but now i have to.. i have to strong..

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I was standing in kitchen preparing lunch becoz i want to keep myself busy in work so dat all worries i forgot..

"Madam.. aap jae.. mein.. bna.. lungi.. "made said to me.. as my over caring mom instructed her that i have not permission to do household work as she knows that i have burden of office work

"Neeta... don't worry tum jao aram karo.. mom ko kuch pta nhi chlega.. "i said than she went back

Than i feel sometime wired my heart start beating fastly.. than i said to myself "wht happening to me... "

I ignoring all this again start busy in cooking

P.O.V. Ends

She inside she knows wht happening she feels him as he arrived at her place but this first time happening with her so ingore it.. she unaware that he is her every breath how can she neglect him

Manik P.O.V.

So finally i reached oh god i feeling sometime as my heart beat become faster than before
Than i get of my car n reach to main gate of house

"U manik Mahlortra.. na... "the guard asked n i simply noded my head

Than he open the gate i went inside than i unknowingly i start going toward somewhere as i can smell her frangnace
Same frangance that i smell earlier also voe same feeling jo 4 din phle.. airport pr feel kiya. Tha.. same feeling..

3 days latter

MUMBAI AIRPORT

Manik just about to go from airport but he stops by seeing one girl infront of her standing far away from him

He loss in her cutness n he feels something after seeing n that girl non other his nandini.. he keep on staring at her.. he looking at her lips eyes n every inch of body.. n than the face come infront of his eyes is of childhood nandini

"Nandini.. "he whisper. Than somebody bumped with him n he helps her n than he again look there but now she was gone from there

"Manik.. toh.. pura.. pagl ho.. gya.. ush.. letter ke bd.. pta.. nhi.. kya.. imagine.. krne.. lga.. hai.. "by saying this he left the AIRPORT

Flashback end

I reached to kitchen own by own as she is attracting me.."monsto.. come.. find.. mujhe.. dundh ke dikhao.. "her voice echoing in my ear again again that she is calling me..

Than i stop at door n see short hight girl standing face toward backside.. she turn i hide myself so she can't see me.. because pta.. nhi.. kyo.. but first i wanted see her like this..

Oh.. god.. mtlb ki that girl i saw at airport she is nandini.. only.. my chotu.. nandu.. i don't word to describe about her cutness n beauty she just wao.. ethereal.. her simplicity.. she is wearing casual kurta.. but looking perfect.. she put some lit bit make up.. but something is missing that i see that day.. her smile..

Now.. i just can't control myself anymore.. bhut hua..10 saalo.. ka intzar.. so now i just hugged him tightly.. from back n hold her stomach n shout.."i missed u.. so much.. chotu.. "

But than i heard her voice "i m not nandini " she said make me hell shocked n than she put my hand dowm she turns n slightly push me away than wht she said it make me hell shocked

"Manik.. Mahlortra.. i m not nandini.. i m Mukti "she said camly but than i looked at her shockingly

"I can't believe.. that.. "i said in disbelief as my feeling can't be worng

Nandini P.O.V.

I was working in kitchen than i feel grip of hand on my stomach oh god manik.. i feel him.. but why she hold me.. like this

"Oh... nandini.. i missed u.. so much.. "he said how he knows me.. n how he comes in kitchen directly i was so shocked n want to turn n hug him tightly n i also want to shout that i missed u.. manik.. "but my fate n again tear fell from my eyes i feeling so god in his arm but than i said to myself "nandini.. u have to.. do this..

"I m not nandini.. "i composed myself n said wiping my tear n than remove his hand from my stomach n turn n see him..in front of my eyes live.. after 10 yr.. he is so.. handsome.. more he looks on screen but i can see his shocking face he staring at me.. in disbelief but how he recognise me.. why he Making all this more difficult for me..

"Manik.. Mahlortra.. i m not nandini.. i m Mukti "i said camly again as but than he is looking at me shocking only i know how i controlling my emotion..

"I can't believe.. that.. "he said in disbelief oh.. god.. why.. making it more difficult for me.. . He has to believe that vrna..

"Oh..Manik.. u know.. i missed so much.."Mukti came n hugs him form behind thank she came on time as now i can't give more any reply to him

P.O.V. ends

"Hey.. wait.. who.. r u.."manik said turing toward mukti

"Manik.. tum mujhe.. bhul gye.. "Mukti said making sad face..

"I m yr.. chotu.. nandu.. "Mukti said holding his hand

"Haan.. ab kha.. yaad.. hongi.. main tumhai.. ab tum bhut badhe.. singer jo bn gye.. ho.."she said but manik is looking so confused looking at her in disbelief

Manik P.O.V.

No no.. main glt nhi ho skta.. i can still feel her... now also my heart beat for her only

"Tum manik.. ko andr le jao.. voh.. itni.. dhur se aya.. hoga.."nandini.. said yes she nandini.. i don't know but she lying but why..

"Cholo.. na.. manik.. mujhe.. tumhai.. bhut.. kuch.. bta..hai.. so chle.. "now the other girl.. said i don't know voh nandini hai yeh nhi.. but main sach jan kr rhaoga..

Than that girl take me to room by holding my hand

P.O.V. END

Mukti take her to room n than Nandini ran toward her room n close the door n ly down on bed on her stomach n holding the pillow tightly start crying.. badly..

"I m sorry.. manik.. yr.. nandini.. so helpless.. to accept that she is yr.. nandini.. n she loves u.." she said while crying..

"Maine.. iss din ka bhut intzar kiya.. tha.. kabhi.. nhi.. socha.. tha.. that tumhai.. main yad bhi hogi.. but.. u feels me.. u recognize me.. i love... u.. so.. much.. but main.. tumhari.. nhi.. ho skti.. i have to do.. this.. for u.. only.. as i love.. u.."she screams than she get up n wipes her tear fastly.. n set her dress as somebody knocks the door

As soon as she open the door manik holding her mouth pinned her toward the wall n both look into eachother eyes deeply
(Kya us gali mein, kabhi tera jaana hua
Jahan se zamane, ko gujre zamana hua
Mera samay toh, wahin pe hai thehra hua
Bataun tumhe kya, mere saath kya kya hua)


Than manik lean closer toward her lips now both can feel eachother breath they r very close to eachother their lips was only few inches away

nandini unwillingly loss in him n manik can't control himself n slammed his lips with her.. but he start sucking her lips she about to respond him but than she realised wht she is doing n stop herself
(Hm..
Khamoshiyan, ek raaz hai, seene mein dafan hai kahin
Khamoshiyan, jo paas hai, main tumse kahunga kabhi
Baat loonga main, saath mein tere
Milne toh aao zara

Khamoshiyan, teri meri khamoshiyan
Khamoshiyan, lipti hui khamoshiyan)


Than she pushed him n slap him hard on his face "how dare.. u.. "she shouts as she have to but on the other side she feel like dying after slapping him

"I m sorry.. i m sorry.. but i have.. to.. do this to make u.. believe i m not nandini.."nandini said to herself n He is looking at her shockingly by holding her cheek in disbelief as he shocked by his sudden act.. she slaps him why


"Hr.. ladhke... ek jaisa.. hota.. ladhki.. dikhi.. nhi.. dil ajata.. hai.. "nandini said looking at him angrily only she knows how she saying harsh word him as she knows he is not like that

Nandini killing herself by slapping him saying harsh word to him only she can understand how much it difficult to this.. but she know it's just starting.. on the other hand manik heartbroken by her word n act.. but wht next he said it make her hell shocked she can't believe on her ear..

So here is next part wht manik said to her that nandini got hell shocked n why nandni is doing this keep thinking.. n guyz.. believe me.. this will be interesting story.. but have some patience n as many secrets are hidden in this story.. from this part the real story begins.. from how much time nandini keep herself quite to not say the truth.. n wht's the reason behind her silence
Again i m saying have some patience n don't forgot leave yr.. comment..
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Stay blessed
Love Mehak


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Edited by Mehaklovely - 9 years ago

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