Manan FF - Pyaar mei sau uljhane... - Chap 2 Pg 4 - Page 2

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Chapter 1

Vadhera House

This morning was not like every other morning. It was a special day for the Vadhera family. It was a special day for every other family but for vadheras it was extra special.

A 20 yrs old girl was all excited she got up at 6 AM in the morning. Took bath and got ready for the special day. She came and stood in front of Babaji's photo and said

Girl: Thank you babaji , mujhe is ghar mei lane keliye . Itni pyaari family dene keliye. Aur aaj ka special din har saal aisa he special rahe. Aur mummy chachu, chachi, Bua , dadu and mere chaaron bhai humesha khush rehen aur har saal RAKSHA BANDHAN pe mujhe bahut saare gifts de .

This was none other that our sweet si pyaari si nandu.

Nandu was preparing har thaal for Raksha bandhan with sone ki rakhi for all her 4 brothers with their favourite mithai.

Viren was a huge fan of besan laddoo, virat loved gajar ka halwa, Abhimanyu was made behind pinni and cabir loved kaju barfi. The thaal was ready and the big job now was to get her brothers ready.

Nandu came out of her room it was 7 AM now and she saw her ma and chachi setting up for the big day. She walked up to them and hugged them one after the other

Kadambari Chachi - Kitni soni lagrahi hai. Hai ni Bhabhi betiyaan kitani jaldi badi hojati hain. Kalki baat hai nandu theek se khadi bhi nai ho paati thi aur aaj pure ghar mei bhaagti firti hai, Sach Bhabhi betiyaan hain hi pyaari. Kabhi kabhi babaji se shikayat karti hoon ki mujhe bin bachon ka kyun chod diya

Nandini - Chachi agar aap aise bologi to mei aapse baat nahi karungi. Kya mei apki beti nai. Kabhi maa se kum manaa hai apko.

Vanshika - Kitni baar bola hai kadambari ki aisi baatein mat kar. Viren, virat, Abhimanyu, cabir aur ye jhalli tere he bache hain. Cabir aur nandu ko tune he to bada kiya hai

Kadambari - Hai ni Bhabhi galti se boldiya sorry.

Swamini - Aaj boldiya hai fir kabhi mat bolna. Cabir ne agar ye sunliya na to bas aaj teri khair nai

Kadambari - Peripauna didi. Sab taiyaari hogai hai. Woh bas aate honge.

Swamini - Tum Doctor ho kadambari aur modern thoughts rakhti ho so aage se aisi baatein mat karo ( swamini gives kadambari a side hug)

Raj - Good morning beautiful ladies. Aaj humari nandu toh badi pyari lag rahi hai. All set to rob your brothers (and raj winked at her)

Swamini - Pehle toh mei tumhe lootungi

Vijay - Good Morning everybody . I love festivals . aise mauko mei he sab ghar mei saath hote hain aur meri gudiya tumhare bhai uthe nai

Nandini - Dekho na dadu 8 baj ne waale hai aur ye log abhi tak nahi aaye

Vanshika - waise to har saal time se pehle aate the aaj kya hua

All brothers in Unison - Good morning ppl.

Viren - Mom Breakfast ready kardo meri aaj 9:30 ki court me hearing hai

Virat - Mom mere ko gym jana hai so mera protein shake

Abhi - Mom mei viren bhai ke saath jaa raha hoon so mera bhi breakfast pls

Cabir - Mom meri band practice hai so no breakfast mei college mei karlunga

Nandu was shocked seeing her brothers not remembering Raksha bandhan in last 19 years this has never happened

Vanshika - But aaj ke din bhi (before she could say anything Nandini stormed out with tears in her eyes)

Viren could never see Nandini in tears and he started scolding cabir

Viren - Ma ye sab iss ghade cabir ki wajah se hua hai. Maine manna kiya tha but issi ka brilliant idea that nandu ki tang kheechne ka

Virat - Ab gussa hogai ja tu manna ke la. Bola tha maine aaj ke din nai

Abhi - Cabir tu kab sudhrega

Cabir - Arre kar sabne aur final gaali mujhe. Not fair

Swamini - Viren tum bade ho aur tum jaante ho Nandini ke liye ye kitna important hai.

Viren - Sorry Badi ma.

Vijay - Tum log kab bade hog eek shotti si bacchi ka dil dukkha diya. AB jao manao use warna sanko mar padegi.

There in the room nandu was in tears , angry and cursing her fate and saying her brothers don love her and she is not important in their life and suddenly she here from her window

" laal laal gaal jaise tamatar

Nandu ka gussa char gaya chat par.

Kaise manau usse lagta hai daar.

Kahu kuch toh royegi woh balti bhar bhar."

Cabir was singing the song and entering the room through window and when she saw all her brothers coming thru the window her heart smiled but she didn't want to forgive she turned her face to other side

Now it was viren's turn and he started to sing

Phoolon ka taron ka sabka kehna hai
Ek hazaron mein meri behna hai
Saari umar hamein sang rehna ha
i

(He held his ears and went near nandu and stood beside her with an apologetic face. His heart pained to see those tear droplets and he tried to wipe it but she walked away)

Phoolon ka taron ka sabka kehna hai
Ek hazaron mein meri behna hai
Saari umar hamein sang rehna hai
Phoolon ka taron ka sabka kehna hai

(Now Virat sang and went near her and held her hand but nandu was still angry she jerked his hand off and turned her face)

Jab se meri aankhon se ho gayi tu door
Tab se saare jeevan ke sapne hain choor
Aye jab se meri aankhon se ho gayi tu door
Tab se saare jeevan ke sapne hain choor
Aankhon mein neend na man mein chaina hai
Ek hazaron mein meri behna hai
Saari umar hamein sang rehna hai
Phoolon ka taron ka sabka kehna hai

(Abhi and cabir sang with a sorry face but nandu was still angry)

Yeh na jana duniya ne tu hai kyon udaas
Teri pyaasi aankhon mein pyaar ki hai pyaas
Aa mere paas aa keh jo kehna hai
Ek hazaron mein meri behna hai
Saari umar hamein sang rehna hai
Phoolon ka taron ka sabka kehna hai


(When viren was singing these lines he had tears and nandu never see Viren like that she ran and higged him tight and viren took her in a fatherly hug. Nandini always saw a father in him. He was way too protective about her)

Bholi bhali japani gudiya jaisi tu
Pyaari pyaari jaadu ki pudiya jaisi tu
Bholi bhali japani gudiya jaisi tu
Pyaari pyaari jaadu ki pudiya jaisi tu
Dadi ka mummy ka sabka kehna hai
Ek hazaron mein meri behna hai
Saari umar hamein sang rehna hai
Phoolon ka taron ka sabka kehna hai

Phoolon ka taron ka sabka kehna hai
Ek hazaron mein meri behna hai
Aye la la la la la la la la la la la la
Ek hazaron mein meri behna hai
O la la la la la la la la la la la la.


(the other three brothers walked up to her singing and holding their ears and Nandini one by one made them release their ears and forgave them and all of them took a group hug).

to be continued...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing !!!!!! Ur first part itself made me fall in love with your ff !!! Update soon !! All the best ⭐️
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Posted: 9 years ago
#15
Ohoo that so cute story 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update loved it ur story is amazing dear all of them love nandu very much.
Waiting for next part update soon n long one. Waiting for manan meet
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Posted: 9 years ago
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my favourit serials on 1 ff,,yaar luv u so much
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Aww cute family moment loved it
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow... damn awsum... 1st part mei he fida ho gye mai.. cnt wait 2 read more.. update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow superb...
amazing bond between brothers n sister...

pls continue soonnn...

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