So reading again helped
These lines
"She was the morning dew which he wanted to feel and he was the first drop of rain she wanted to get drench every moment. Their love was scarlet; a cherished love song that was sung as their hearts beating as one."
I don't know how I missed it at first but that is some writing .
Amazing
And yeah
These are getting copied in my notes .
(Only the lines .. Not the story .. No plagiarism ... You deserve every accolade for the story )
So blissful !
-God bless you in abundance .