#2 Tum Hi Ho - manan ff (imp. Note pg-136)thread 3 pg-1 - Page 33

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: shruti1997

Nyc update
Par bhoth rona dhona hogya
But anyways
Making memories was a nyc idea
Par kya yaar suspense beech mei he chod diya
Par keep nandini and the babies safe
Waiting for your next update
Update soon 😊

thanx
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sanikagokhale

Such a nice update!

Loved the photo session part!
It was too cute😳
But the twist in end!😕😕
Eagerly waiting for the next...
Thanks for pm!
Continur soon dear!
Take care!😃

thanx
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Sjmanan

amazing update! wow...godbharai coming up. the shopping part was amazing...what happened to navya! hope everything is fine with her. now who is that nurse who took nandini. hope nandini and the babies will be fine. thanks for the pm. update soon.😊

thanx
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: archu_asok

Awesome update. Finally nandini and babies are fyn nw.but the nurse part was scaring😭.omg wat is gng to happen. Eagerly waiting for next update.👏.thanks for the pm.😊

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Chocolava14

Awwiie...everything was going so well ...but dis nurse😲

I lykd update...shopping was so much fun
Good to knw all three r safe😊
i hope nandu's fyn
Always keep writing😊

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Posted: 9 years ago
TUM HI HO

Part : 89

Doc. : by the way where is nandini

Manik : doc. Nurse ushai checkup ke liye lekr gye hai

Doc. : manik.. yeh tum kya bol rhai
Nandini ka routine checkup main khud personally krti hn
Maine kissi nurse ko nhi kha nandini ka checkup krne ke liye

Manik stands up in shock n say " so voh nurse kon thi
Oh no... "

N manik rans outside n doc. Also ran afterward manik n saying "manik... hua kya hai "

Scene change nandini is in ward n nurse is giving one injection n nandini says "why u giving this injection
Sb thik hai na "

Nurse says " haan sb thik hai bs yeh normal injection hai don't worry "

Manik is checking nandini in every ward

N nurse about to give injection but the somebody open the door
N he is ward boy n he says to nurse go immediately as dr. Mehta is calling her n she goes without giving injection to nandini

After nurse gone manik enters the room n he got happy to see that nandini is f9 n he hugs her n say nandini tum thik ho na
Nandini also hold manik but she also get shock to see manik like this n she asked him " manik... main bilkul thik hn
Manik.. kya hua "

N manik is not leaving her n nandini calls his name " manik manik... look i m f9 "

manik break the hug n hold her hand n than face

Nandini : manik.. kya hua

Manik : nandini... voh tum mujhe dur thi na so i worried about u
Acha tum btao ki voh nurse kha hai aur voh kya kr rhi thi

Nandini shows injection to manik n say " she is was giving me this injection lekin manik... tum itna kyo tension le rhai ho "

Manik : because i love u...
I cares about u more than myself
Nandini.. i want to tell u something

Nandini : manik... sb thik hai na

Manik hold nandini hand n nandini looks worried n manik says " nandini there is not any risk in yr preganancy now
Now u don't need to take tension about it anymore "

Nandini smiles n tear comes out from nandini eyes n she hugs manik n manik also hold her n their hug broken by doc.

N nandini wipes her tear n doc. ask that" manik.. nurse kha gye.." n manik stops her in b/w n say "nurse bhr gye hai "n explain in gesture that not to tell nandini anything

Doc. : nandini howz u

Nandini : doc. I m f9
Doc. Nurse was giving me this injection

N doc. Take the injection n say " ab tum thik ho ab tumhai iss injection ki jarut nhi hai
Haan lekin manik... nandini main bhut weakness hai
So u have to care of her "

Manik says "yeah offcourse doc. "

N doc. Instruct another nurse to do the check of her n he ask manik to come on side

Manik leave nandini hand n come with doc. N nurse start checking up nandini

Doc. : Manik... tum jante ho nandini ke liye injection kitna dangerous tha
Isse uski jan bhi ja skti thi
Vaise toh injection pregnancy rokne ke liye hota hai

Manik : but voh nurse hai kon
U call every saff now
Kon hai jo nandini aur mere babies ko harm krna chta hai (say angerly)

N nandini looks toward manik n manik notice that n he looks toward her n smiles n than he calmly say to doc" call the staff now"

Doc. : okay main yhi bolati hn sbko

Manik : no yha nhi iss ward ke bhr
Nandini ko iss bare main bilkul pta nhi chlna chiye

N doc. Goes n nurse is doing check up of nandini n manik goes to her n say " nandini i m just coming wid in a sec. N ordered nurse to not leave nandini alone"

Nandini : manik come fast

N manik come outside n see everybody that nurse was not there n one nurse is missing n doc. Shows him the pic of her n
manik regonise her n her name is Rashmi chawla n than he also inform police n ask police to her find her as soon as possible

N they come inside n manik help nandini to get her up n they reaches home
N they take the dinner

N after that nandini is lying in manik arm n nandini says "manik... i m so happy now main apne babies ko delh paungi "

Manik says " haan nandini now u have enough time to spend wid them "

Nandini says " n not with them only also with u manik... ab toh bs inkha intzar hai
Kash sb thik ho "

Manik says "ab sb thik hoga " n he kiss on her forehead n say " don't worry "

Nandini says " hmm... u right now everything will be f9 " n than she say excitingly " i m so excited for tomorrow
N manik.. n i wearing yr fav. Colour dress that is red "

Manik says " but main toh voh function attend nhi kr skta na
I heard that iss function main boyz were not allowd "

Nandini says " but manik... no i want to be wid u
We do it in diff. Style "

Manik says "nandini... really i can also be there "

Nandini says happily that yeah because i want to remain wid u every day every min. N every sec. N every movement
Because without u i m nothing
N manik having the tear of happiness n he hugs her
N manik phn rings up n he break the hug n he sees that inspector is calling n he looks toward nandini n smiles n come outside n take the call

Inspector : manik... usk ladki ka kuch pta nhi chl rha
Ushne apni sari information glt de rkhi hai

Manik : main kuch nhi janta ba s ushai jld se jld dhund yea
Main nhi chta ki voh aur kuch na kare

N he cuts the call n see that nandini is slept n he sets her blanket n kiss on her cheeks n ly wid her n hold her hand n say " nandini itne dino bd u r sleeping so calmly n without any tension
Aur main tumhai disturb nhi krna chta yeh sb bta kr
But main tumhai kuch nhi hone dunga
Main hr waqt tumhare sth rahunga i will protect u " than he kiss on nandini hand n sleep
N at mid night n manik wakes up n listen some noice coming from outside n he put on his slipper n comes outside n close door n he listen that the sound is coming from kitchen n he goes there n says "who's there " n again say " kon hai vha"
N he switch on the light of kitchen n no one is there n he about to look at back of refigerator but he stops because nandini shouts loudly manik...


Part : 90

N at mid night n manik wakes up n listen some noice coming from outside n he put on his slipper n comes outside n close door n he listen that the sound is coming from kitchen n he goes there n says " whoz there " n again say " kon hai vha"
N he switch on the light of kitchen n no one is there n he about to look at back of refigerator but he stops because nandini shouts loudly manik...

N manik immediately rans n shouts nandini...
N he reaches there n door was open n he switch on the light n he see nandini sweating n looking very disturbed n afraid n manik goes to her n hold her hand n nandini is saying again n again "manik vha koe hai "

Manik hold nandini face n say "nandini calm down it was just a dream "

Nandini say shouting" no manik... maine khud dekha tha
One shadow comes n suddenly it's disappear i have seen ."

Nandini is not listening manik n manik hold her in his arm n say " nandini... koe nhi vha sb thik hai "

N nandini hold her n try to be relax in his arm n about close her butn m mmm again see someone shadow on window n she again shouts manik... vha koe hai

Manik break the hug n say " nandini... "

Nandini point finger toward window n says " manik... somebody is there "

Manik hold nandini face n clear her sweat n say "k relax"
N he gets up n open the window n say " dekho koe nhi hai "

N manik comes to nandini n make her lie down n covers her wid blanket n moves her hand on forehead n says " nandini sleep comfortably i m here wid u jb tk tum nhi soti i m sitting with u okay don't worry "

N nandini take manik hand n hold it tightly n manik moves other hand on head n close her eyes n after 1min. She again open her eyes n sees toward window n manik says " nandini... don't worry i m wid u"

N nandini sleep after sometime n manik thinks yeh kya sb kya ho rha i have to found out n than he also sleep on floor head on bed n holding nandini hand

Next mrng sun raises comes on both manik n nandini n nandini wakes up n sees manik sleeping n she come close to manik face n kiss on his cheeks says "manik... kitni care krte ho meri aur main always give u the reason to take tension lekin kl rt ko maine dekha toh tha kisko voh mere veham nhi ho skta
But aisa kaise ho skta hai ki voh ek dm se disappear ho gya "

N nandini slowly get up without disturbing manik n covers him blanket n moves her hand on in his hair n smiles
N see the time 6am
She thinks "Itni subha toh koe utha bhi nhi hoga n i m so hungry n manik ne mna kiya hai ki koe km nhi krna but main manik ko nhi uthna chti
No i will make myself something"

N she fresh an up n goes to kitchen n heard some noise was coming from upstair n she goes to stair n stand down the stair n ask "kon hai " but the sound is again n again coming n she goes upstair n she reaches at store room n open the door of store room but she didn't go inside n again ask " kon hai vha " n suddenly someone push her inside n she about fall but control herself with support of wall n she turns n see somebody close the door n locked it n nandini beat hand on the door n screams open the door
Manik... manik...

Scene change

N manik also get up n notice nandini was not on bed n he says nandini... n he check the washroom n manik thinks itni subha subha nandini kha chli gye

Scene change

Nandini turns n see one man fully injured n bleeding very badly n she got scare n goes toward door n shouts open the door

Scene change

Manik comes out n she listen nandini screaming voice coming from upstair that "open the door " n manik immediately reaches there see that door was open n nandini come outside n hold manik shirt n she says point her finger toward store room " ma...
Ma... manik vh... vha...
Koe... uska... face ...
Blood.."

Manik says " nandini... relax "

N he goes inside n nobody is there n manik says " nandini.. come inside dekho koe nhi hai vha " n nandini afraidly comes inside n shoched to see no one there

Nandini says " no... manik koe tha yha pr n uska pura face blood se covered tha "

Manik says "nandini... hum bhr hi toh thai koe pafis gyA yha se nhi na
Nandini yeh sirf tumhra imagination hai "

Nandini starts crying n says " manik... i don't understanding wht all this happening
Mujhe kuch smj nhi aa rha "

N manik hold her face n say "nandini... u were taking lot's of stress na that's all this happening "

Nandini rested her head on manik chest n crys n say "manik... yeh sb kyo ho rha hai " n manik moves his hand on head " n than manik break the hug n say "Nandini u relax chlo come down u need to take some rest "

N manik hold nandini hand n shoulder n they reaches down n nandini again n again looking back n manik knows she is not f9 but he don't understanding wht all this happening n he lie her down on bed n nandini fully lost n manik covers her with blanket n about to go n nandini hold her arm n nodded n say "don't go "
Manik comes to her n say " are baba i m just lying beside u
Aur haan vaise tum itna subha bhr kyo gye "

Nandini says "manik.. i m feeling hungry socha kuch bna lun but suddenly "

Manik " 1 min. Why don't wake me up hmmm... "

Nandini says " manik... i m sorry but i don't want to disturb u
Pr manik... plz trust me i seen someone at night n today also"

Manik says " nandini... i believe u but tum hi btao yeh sb kon karega bolo aur haan don't be afraid of this i m wid u okay "

Nandini says " manik... why this happening "

Manik ly beside her n hold in his arm n say " nandini... jb tk main tumhre sth u don't need to be afraid of anything "

Manik thinks nandini... last i m thinking u r sleeping without any tension after many days but this happened pta nhi tum yeh sb kya dikhaye de rha hai i m not understanding wht that thing that scaring u from inside n u feeling that things outside also

Next mrng now nandini lit bit better n sitting on couch but lost in thoughts n servants r decorating the house n manik is giving instruction to them n manik comes from backside n hold her shoulder n nandini got scared n side away his hand n manik says " nandini relax it's me " n than nandini look down n tear come out from her eyes n manik come n sit beside her n ups her with hand n say " hey nandini... no tears okay nandini this is the time to be happy n u having tear "
Nandini hug him n say "manik... why can't we remain happy manik... why always something bad happen after something good thing happen
Why the life can't be normal "

Manik break the hug n say " nandini sb thik hai don't think about it i said na i m wid u nthng will happen okay
Plz nandini smile na i can't see u like this "

N nandini smiles lit bit n manik says "thats better "

evening time nandini n manik both r getting ready for godthbahrahe function n manik is looking so hot in black shervani n nandini take out her dress from the cupboard n unfold it n sit down on bed n having tear in eyes n manik sees from her mirror n says " nandini... kya hua " n he goes toward her n put his hand on his shoulder n say "nandini... kya hua " n nandini shows him her langha n it's having hole n she says " manik... wht's happening i don't understanding " manik says " nandini...yeh sb kaise hua " nandini says " manik... i don't know yesterday i kept in cupboard
Manik... i m so excited to wear this n nandini tears not stopping "
Manik put hand on shoulder n say "nandini relax tum koe dushra phn lo na "

Nandini says " manik... i don't want to go "

Manik says " nandini kya bol rhi ho tum
Okay wait i have something better than this "

N manik take out the beautifull red langha from the cupboard n nandini after seeing that dress a smile came on her face n manik also got happy by seeing her smiling n nandini says " manik... wow.. it's so beautifull manik... tumhne kb khrida yeh "
Manik says " nandini... vaise toh i want to give u on some other day but aaj dena bhut imp. Tha
now happy na "

Nandini hugs him n says manik " i m so lucky to have u in my life i love so much... "
N manik break the hug n kiss on nandini chicks n say " i love u too... "


Again.. who came in their life to destroy them.. keep thinking... n guyz.n this story will remain like this only.. if u wanna read so read i can't change it..
Stay blessed
Love Mehak



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Posted: 9 years ago
waiting fr the next part...hope everything will be f9
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update...
Thankfully Nandu ko kch nahi hua...
Yaar ab kon dono ko pe he pad Gaya hai...
Jst hop everything goes well...
Thnx for pm..
Update soon..

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Posted: 9 years ago
Mysterious update. . Koi nandini ko pagal banana chahta hai ... par kyu ?
Do update soon
Waiting eagerly
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hoping for the best
Suspense is killing me
Pls update soon!!!!

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