#2 Tum Hi Ho - manan ff (imp. Note pg-136)thread 3 pg-1 - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
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CONGRATULATIONS for the new thread. amazing work by you..really love this story..you deserve it all. thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#22

TUM HI HO

Part : 75

she start going afterward manik but somebody snatch her hand n he is looking like manik wearing same dress n covered her face with mask

Nandini thinking that he is manik say "manik wht r u doing "

They came out

Nandini : manik tum mujhe party se bhr kyo le ae kuch bolo

N drag her to the car

Nandini : who r u
Manik...

The man put her finger on her mouth n say" sh..."

Nandini get scared n she slowly say kon ho tum
The man remove the mask from his face

Nandini : adi..
Wht do u want

Adi : i want u
Just sit in car vrna i will forcefully do that

Nandini push him n say just go from here i will not going with u anywhere

Adi stops her by holding her hand

On the other hand manik comes with water n thinks nandini kha gye
Manik start finding her here n there n ask everyone all around start searching her

Scene change

Nandini : leave my hand adi
I have to go

Adi : i m saying last time sit in car

Nandini : no no no

Adi : k nhi manogi na

Adi push her in car n nandini start pulling her n say adi have u gone mad yeh tum kya kr rhai ho manik ko pta chlege na he will not leave u n in this her braclet fallen down
Adi makes her sit at front sit n he sit driving sit n starts the car n nandini start bagging the car windiw n saying open it plz adi...
Leave me have u losted

Manik again n again shouting her name n he comes out n all guest gone n everyone start finding her manik search nandini outside n ask from watchmen n he tells him that madam abhi bhr nikli hai kisi ladhke ke sth
Haan aur ushne bilkul apke jaise kapdhe phane thai

Manik thinks where u nandini
Phone bhi pick nhi kr rhi ho n he sees her braclet fallen down n he picks it up

Mukti n cabir comes out

Mukti : manik...
Nandini achank kha chli gye

Manik : nandini gye nhi ushai koe lekr gya hai mein nandini ko kuch nhi hone dunga
Not again ab kuch glt nhi hona chiye ishme meri hi glti mujhe nandini ko akla chodhna hi nhi chiye tha

Cabir manik calm down nandini mil jaegi

Scene change

Adi : yeah...
I m gone mad becoz of u
U made me mad i m love wid u
Why don't u understand main tumhai kisi aur ke sth nhi dekh skta u r only mine

Nandini : adi i m not niti...
I m nandini suna tumhne i m nandini manik mahlortra

Adi : tum chahe jo bhi ho tumhra koe bhi naam hai
Main tumhse pyaar krta hn

Nandini has her phone her hand n she call manik by hiding from adi

Manik pick the call hello nandini...
Where r u

Nandini : adi...
Main manik se pyr krti hn tumhse nhi

Adi sees her phn n throws the phone out of the car


Manik : hello nandini...


Cabir : kya hua manik

Manik : nandini adi ke sth

Mukti : adi kon hai

Manik tells them about adi

Manik : mujhe jldi uske ghr jana chiye
Khi nandini ko kuch kr na de

Cabir : main tere sth chlta hn
Mukti tum adr jakr sbko bta do
Cabir n manik sits in car

Manik looking very tense

Cabir : manik..
Nandini ko kuch nhi hoga

Manik : nandini kitni kush thi
Main ushai dubra nhi kho skta kabir i can't (tears come out from manik eyes )

Cabir put his hand on his shoulder

Manik start thinking about her
N on the other hand nandini is not saying anything n having tear in eyes n thinks i know manik u will find me n he also remembering about manik
N nandini didn't know that manik has pick her call n ushai pta chl gya ki nandini adi ke sth hai

Adi reaches at his home

Adi open her side door n make her come inside by draging her
Nandini try to calm down adi becoz she knows him he is not like that he start making him understand
N nandini saying adi... plz yeh tum shi nhi kr rhai ho

Adi make her sit on sofa n give her water n nandini take the water n put it on table

Nandini stand up n say adi meri bt suno
Plz mujhe jane do main tumhse pyaar nhi krti having tear in her eyes n adi trys to rub her tears but she throws down his hand

Adi : holding her hand
Pyaar nhi krti toh pyaar ho jaega
Hum bhut achi life jienge
Ek happy life pta hai maine bhut se planning ki thi humhri shaddhi ke bd kya kya karenge but
Nandini : adi plz hosh main ao
I m married n happy in my life tum jise pyaar krte thai voh ab iss duniye main nhi hai

Adi : no no no

Nandini : acha tumhai kya lgta yeh tum jo bhi kr rhai voh shi kr rhai
First ask from yourself
Main jis adi ko janti thi voh aisa kabhi nhi kr skta tha voh ek bhut acha inshaan tha
Pyaar ko aise china nhi ja skta pyaar dil se hota hai aur main janti hn tumhai bhi koe sache dil se pyaar jarur karega

Adi bends down n crys i m sorry nandini main pyaar main itna pgl ho gya yeh bhi smj nhi pya kya glt hai aur kya shi
Mujhe maaf kardo

Nandini : adi no need not be sorry mere liye itna kaffi hai mujhe apna phle wala friend wavis mil gya
I m happy

Adi get up n say chlo main tumhai ghr chodh deta hn

Nandini : i have to call manik
Manik bhut preshn ho rha hoga mere liye

N adi gone take the phone from table n he comes n she about to faint adi comes to hold her but manik comes n hold her n nandini say manik..
N he hold her put on couch n put her head on his lap cabir brings the water n manik give her water n he sees adi n gets angry n he get up n comes to him n nandini sits couch n say manik..

N manik holds adi collar n say how dare u to this with my wife
Nandini get up n say manik ...

Manik start beating him n nandini trys to stop him n cabir hold manik n say cabir tu mujhe chodh de i will not leave him

Nandini : manik...
Plz stop

Manik : nandini..
Yeh tumhai yha forcefully lekr aya
N u r stopping me

Nandini : main adi ke sth kudh ae thi

Manik : nandini...
Isse tumhre sth yeh sb kiya tum fir bhi uski side le rhi ho

Nandini : manik i m not taking anyone side
Manik... plz hum iss bare main bd main bt kare( holding his hand)

Manik : nandini u disappointed me for the first time

Manik goes out leaving nandini hand n nandini go afterward him
Manik...
Wait

Cabir also go

Adi smiles n say mere tir bilkul shi nishne pr lga
Tumhai kya lga nandini main tumhai itni jldi bhul jaunga
Main tumhai paa kr rakhunga nandini isske liye chai mujhe kuch bhi krna padhe

Manik n nandini reaches home

N manik didn't say anything n comes upstair n change her cloth n ly down on bed nandini try to talk to him but he ingnores her n sleep

( after sometime nandini got up becoz she can't sleep properly n also feels hungry n she kiss manik forehead go downstair )
Bg song

Nahi jeena tere baaju
Nahi jeena, nahi jeena
Nahi jeena tere baaju
Nahi jeena, nahi jeena (x2)

(manik is awaken till now n he get up n goes after her n she n eating bread like a baby n he stands at corner n lost in her cuteness)

Main tenu samjhawan ki
Na tere bina lagda jee
Main tenu samjhawan ki
Na tere bina lagda jee
Tu ki jaane pyaar mera
Main karoon intezar tera
Tu dil tui-yon jaan meri

(Nandini got disappear n he trys to find her but she put her hand on his shoulder n hold her ear n say sorry to him n manik holding her hand reaches to dinning table n make her sit )

Bg song

Main tenu samjhava ki
Na tere bina lagda jee
Tu ki jaane pyaar mera
Main karoon intezar tera
Tu dil tui yon jaan meri
Main tenu samjhawa ki
Na tere bina lagda jee

(Manik start feeding her n nandini too feed manik)

Mere dil ne chun laiyaa ne
Tere dil diyaan raahan
Tu jo mere naal tu rehta
Turpe meriyaan saaha

(Than manik hug her n than nandini also hold him tightly )

Jeena mera.. hoye
Hun hai tera, ki main karaan
Tu kar aitbaar mera
Main karoon intezar tera
Tu dil tui-yon jaan meri
Main tenu samjhawan kee
Na tere bina lagda jee

In last they sleep in eachother arm

SO HERE IS NEXT PART... HOPE U ALL LIKE IT.. IF LIKE THAN PLZ. DO COMMENTS N HIT LIKE
KEEP SMILING
LOVE MEHAK


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rajirock123 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#23
Hi dear hope adi next wont give any trouble to manan and thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow sweet heart firstly congratulations for this new thread... Update was too rocking... Loved it very much...Adi has became psycho... He needs treatment... Manan are too cute... Thanks for the pm
Continue soon
Take care stay blessed
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Snehasn

Wow sweet heart firstly congratulations for this new thread... Update was too rocking... Loved it very much...Adi has became psycho... He needs treatment... Manan are too cute... Thanks for the pm
Continue soon
Take care stay blessed


Thank u so much dear...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#26
New enemy again...happy as well as sad update...thanks for pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#27
Thanks for the pm
Knew it that it's adi!
Thank God she is fine though!
N even I was thinking achanak he can't be good
So he is tryna create misunderstandings between manan
Hopefully nandu realises that soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update
Hope adi doesn't bring trouble to manan
Tqvm for the pm dear
Take care and stay blessed
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Congrats fr new thread dea. ...
Amazing update dea. ...
Continue soonnn
Tnx fr d pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#30
Superb update ...too good loved it...
Ohh god..that adi...I hate him...
Eagerly waiting fr the nxt update. ...
Bye tc...!!
Thanks for the pm. ..

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