MaNan FF - EHSAAS..... A love saga {TO BE CONTINUED ON WATTPAD} - Page 68

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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update..
waiting for mukbhi patch up..
pls continue soon...
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Awesome update make nandu win the business deal
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Wow wat an amazing update...
Abhi and mukti nw dis is interesting...
I m so excited to c wat is der in nxt update...


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Posted: 9 years ago
Fabulous update
Update after a long time
Manik was so jealous
Abhi and mukti ...interesting
Update soon
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Superb update...
& cute too...
Luved it...
Plz continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Woww amazing update Dr...
Aww mail was jealous...
Mukthi was fumming in anger for abhi...
So mukbhi are pairs so cool Dr...
Manan are so lovely Dr...
Thanks for the pm dr..
Waiting for the update eagerly Dr..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey dear just came across ur ff n read d whole in a day.must say u ve done a very good work.I loved ur story. Awesum bonding among frndz n partners. Each character supports d others whole heartedly n stands up ups n lows.I just loved dis bondings. Keep writing so well.tc
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Posted: 9 years ago

PART 26 B'

Recap-:

M- Abhimanyu main hardly tumhe jaanta hoon but jo tumne kaha usse zaada jaise tumne kaha mujhe uss baat par yakin hai...aur aise har word ko itna feel karke sirf wohi bol sakta hai jo kisi se bhaut sacche mann se pyaar karta ho! I don't know ki Mukti tumse itni naaraz kyun h, she never shared any such incident with anyone of us. But I'm sure jaisa mukti samajh rhi hai aur keh rhi hai ki tumne usse betray karra hai I'm damn sure ki tum aisa kabhi kar hi nahi sakte!

AB- Thanx Manik! And I'm happy that Nandu has u for her... Because agar tum kisi ke ankahe emotions samjh sakte ho toh sure ki tum usse bhi bahut understand karoge ur usse bahut pyaar karoge!

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(All this while Nandini was smiling looking at the duo, her smile grew wider as she heard Manik saying all that to Abhi. She was just thinking that how come a person who on their first meet ignored her, on second meeting fought with her and on the third meeting provided solace to her was turning out to be the most pure hearted-person and he was indeed her aaiappa's blessing to her.)

NANDINI'S POV

Aaiappa!!!! Nandini Murthy focus... Focus on Abhi and Mukti, Stop thinking about Manik. Uff!!!... Yeh ladka completely drive me crazy...Accha now calm down... Pheew!!!

Aaippa mujhe yeh toh pata hai ki mujhe karna kya hai but before that I need to know the other side of the story too. Mukti ne aisa kya dekha ki woh itna heart-broken ho gayi... I know Abhi ne jo sab kaha uss ke peeche ka harr ek emotion is cent percent true... So phir what is Mukti thinking all about.

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(Nandini's trance was broken by Manik who was calling her name out for the third time but was so lost in herself or we can say that she was so lost in ogling at him only. Manik finally shook her from her shoulders and said)

M- Nandini were are you lost! We need to get going for the meeting!

AB- Haan! And Nandini don't worry we'll definitely find a way out to this problem, But let's just focus on meeting for now. So chalein!

N- Manik I'm fine it's just I have a plan to sort this out. But yes for now we should focus on the meeting. So haan chalo!

(Nandini quickly messaged FAB4 and Navya about her plan and then the trio again leave for the conference hall and soon got engrossed in it.)

MEANWHILE NEAR THE LAKE-SIDE...

Meanwhile near the lake side Fab4 and Navya were sitting silently. No one had the courage to even ask mukti about what had happened as her anger of few hours back was still intact and was clearly visible on her face. CaVya and DhruLia were steaing glances of each other as to looking at each other and asking now what to do. And our lady-hitler was sitting all lost with clear lines of frowns on her forehead that indicated that she was damn pissed and was not to be asked anything right now. So they all to kept mum not knowing what to do.

Just when they were glancing at each other a message came to all four of them. They all read the message and saw it was from Nandini in which she had clearly mentioned the solution to this problem and just told them to do as she said. All of them read the message carefully and then looked up at each other and blinked their eyes in assurance of going ahead with the plan.

Cabir through his eyes looked at Navya asking her to continue. Sweat-beads form on Navya's forehead and she looked up at sky and slightly joined her hands as if asking god to please help her. All this while Cabir was lovingly staring at her cute-antics,but he soon composed himself and decided to continue with the plan as it was necessity of the hour.

[ ****WRITER- I KNOW .. I KNOW AP SAB YAHI SOCH RHE HOGE NA KI DONO BHAI BEHEN IKDUM EK-JAISE HAI... I MEAN BOTH NANDINI&CABIR ARE ALIKE. THEY JUST CAN'T STOP OGLING AT THEIR PARTNERS...HEHE...****]

NAV- Mukti!!! (she called her out hesitantly. Mukti tha looked up at her irriatedly. Navya calmed herself and then said) Mukti apne dil-ki-baat hum sabse share karoge toh pareshaani kam ho jayegi, apne andar hi sabkuch hide karogi toh dard aur zaada hoga!

AL (patted her back and said in a concerned tone)- Mukti... U know na hamara as-in Fab5 ka motto kya hai!! "ALL-FOR-ONE & ONE-FOR-ALL"... Please Mukti share yourself out!

CAB (cupped her cheeks and said)- Tu The Lady Hitler'.. The Rough and Tough Mukti Mehra unn sab ke liye hai jo tujhe jaante nahi hai! Mukti u can share urself with us! Right?

DHR- Mukti please say something!

(Mukti sighed helplessly and said)

MUK- Kya sunna chahte ho tum sab? Kuch batane ko hoga tab bataungi na! Hamesha pyaar mein dhokha khaati hoon, jaanti hun ki pyaar alfaaz mere liye bana hi nahi hai par phir bhi baar-baar pyaar karne ki- pyaar paane ki koshish karti hoon. Tum log jaante ho na Harshad ke baad how I used to be, How harshad using me manik aur tum sabko hurt karna chahta tha! Pyaar par se bharosa uth gaya tha! Phir you guys remember ki few months back mujhe kisi relative ke wedding par jaana tha with mom dad. There I met Abhimanyu Khanna! You know guys first day when I went there I was playing with some kids and then while playing I noticed someone staring at me and when I looked towards the direction he was like staring at me with like mouth opened wide! But I ignores it at that time. Then this staring and stalking game continued for two more days and as you all know me, One day I just went to him and grabbed him by his collars (as Mukti was recalling all that the smile was not ready to leave her face, her eyes were sparkling) and started saying him that what r u upto and why r u staking me and all that stuff!! I thought ki would just ran away after seeing me angry and so impulsive. But he was just smiling all that while and I thought that yeh toh completely gone-case hai, par you know what he said next left me astound... He just held me by my shoulders and I still remember what he said-

"Relax Mukti! Please you are going on the wrong track! Ek baar toh mujrim ko bhi bolne ka mauka milta hai aur mera gunaah toh bas itna hi hai ki jabse tumhe dekha hai tumse pyaar ho gaya hai"

Than he told me when he first saw me how he felt and how each passing day his love was increasing.

Seriously guys I thought that he is also one of those Harshad types kyunki love at first sight toh sirf novels mein hota hai. (she than thoughtfully while pondering over her judgement said) You know all this while jab usne mujhse yeh sab kaha na usne he was looking straight into my eyes and pata nahi kyun us ski baaton par yakeen karne ko mann kar raha tha! Dimaag keh raha tha ki Mukti Mehra get a grip over yourself but yeh dil trust karna chahta tha uss parr. I left without saying anything to him and then after that each passing day we used to steal glances of each other and then initially we started talking to each other, I started liking him guys. We talked and talked we shared everything about each other, I starts trusting him, I started thinking that I also can deserve to be loved then...(their was sudden outburst of pain in her eyes) ... Then one Dy while we were talking someone called him and said that someone was calling him so he excused himself and went. I waited for him guys, but then after sometime when he did'nt came I thought to go and check-on him, I went and asked someone about him and then I came to know that he went to terrace. So I too went to terrace...And you know what I saw! He was hugging a girl twirling her in his arms and saying

I Love You Doll! Pata nahi maine tumhe kitna miss kia!' and then that girl replied

I missed you too Abhi and I m angry ki tum hamesha mujhe chod ke chale jaate ho akela and now I'm not letting you go anywhere'

Guys I was shocked, shattered, heart-broken... Sab kuch yaad aa gaya tha jo pehle hua tha mere saath and aisa laga tha ki iss baar agar apne aap ko nahi sambhal payi toh khud ko hamesha ke liye kho dungi! So after that I quickly went down packed my bags and left a letter for him and came back to you all... My family, My friends!! The ones jinhe mujhe kuch kehne ki zaroorat bhi nahi padti and you all understand me.

Cabir Dhru Alia... Remember how was I when I came back! I knew that u all have got to know that something has had happened par then also u never asked me the reason for it!! And u all specially Manik did all that was possible and then I was back to normal... Par aaj phir usse dekha and I was totally back to that time...



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Posted: 9 years ago

PART 26 C'

(After hearing this all of them were hell shocked and angry at Mukti. And with a jerk they all stood up and said)

CaVya & DhruLia TOGETHER (shouted)- MUKTI!!!!!

MUK (confusingly)- What??

CAB- Mukti tu pagal hai kya? Jiss insaan se jaane-anjaane itna pyaar karne lagi thi... Jis insaan se itne dino tak mil rahi thi... Jo thodi der ke liye doore kya chala gaya tu uske peeche peeche usse dhoondne chali gayi... Bas usko itna hi trust karti thi ki usse bas kisi se baat karte hue, I love you kehte hue kya sunna tu chali aayi wahan se! Ek baar poochne ki bhi koshish nahi ki uss ka aur bhi koi reason ho sakta hai!

AL- Mukti maine tumhe pehle bhi kaha tha and I'm telling u once again ki tum jab tak apne aap ko ek chance nahi dogi na tab tak aisa hi hota rahega. Mukti u still don't understand... Mukti kyun aisa sochti ho ki ur destiny will deceive you, kyun sochti ho ki u r not capable of anyone's love... Mukti ab dekho kya hua ... Jiss love ke liye u were craving from so long woh tumhare itne paas tha aur tum hi wahan se usse chod kar chali aayi.

(Navya was calm all this while ... She quietly sat down beside her and held her hand and lovingly said)

NAV- Mukti tum bahut acchi ho! Bahut bahut acchi ho aur woh insaan bahut lucky hoga jisse tumse pyaar hoga. Mukti pata hai Nandini hame hamesha ek baat kehti thi aur pata hai hum usse hamesha kehte the ki bhalla kaunsa logic hua and hame uski baat samjh hi nahi aati thi. Pata hai Nandini hamesha kehti hai humse ki Navya -:

jiss insaan mein hame sabse zaada hurt karne ki takat h hoti hai na ussi insaan mein hame sabse zada pyaar karne ki Shakti hoti hai. Begaano se toh rutha hi nahi karte kyuki unki unka hamse koi wasta hi nahi hai, par khaffa ussi se hote hai jiss par hum apna haq samjhte hai.

Par pata hai Mukti aaj tumhari baatein sunkar tumhe jaankar Nandini ki iss baat ka matlab samjh aa gaya. Mukti tumhe sab ladaku, lady hitler isiliye bolte hai na kyunki tum kisiko apne aap ko affect hi nahi karne deti par phir tumne ita easily Abhi ko apne aap ko effect kyun hone dia? Mukti tum Abhi se pyaar toh arne lag gayi thi par usse trust nahi kar payi, aur pata hai kyun nhi kar payi kyunki tumne apne past ko apni kismat maan li thi.

Mukti hum chahe toh abhi ek second ke andar tumhare saare doubts clear kar sakte hai but hum aisa karenge nahi. Kyunki sach ko janna tumhare liye itna important nahi hai jitna tumhare liye sach ko mehsoos karna hai...

(Mukti quickly hugged Navya and started crying... She cried for a long time and then five of them quietly went back to hotel and settled themselves in Mukti's room itself. Navya and Alia along with Mukti were on bed and were patting her head to make her sleep while Cabir and Dhruv settled at the couch itself...)

(Mukti was still awake thinking about what all happened... She was only rhinking about the times she had spent with Abhi. After a long time of debating with herself she spoke.)

MUK- I want to meet Abhimanyu!

(All looked at her in surprise still trying to digest what she said.)

NAV- Mukti! It's okay u don't need to run into all this so soon, give yourself sometime.

(Mukti got up and sat on the bed.)

MUK- Nahi Navya! I need to talk to him.Main galat hoon Navya, mujhe koi haq nhi banta ki main kisi ko doubt karun apne past experience ki wajah se kisi ke present ko kharaab karun. Abhi ne sirf mujse pyaar kia badle mein kuch expect nahi kia, even after knowing about Harshad he never judged me...But maine uspe doubt kia, usse judge kia, usse blame kia without knowing the truth. Main apna decision le lia aur usse bolne ka mauka bhi nhi dia. Mujhe usse trust karna chahiye tha...

(While saying all this silent tears were flowing from her eyes... All that she spoke was straight from her heart ... Cabir and Dhruv came infront of her and held her both hands while Navya and Alya were side-hugging her.)

DHR- Finally bhagwaan ne impulsive angry hulk Mukti Mehra ko patience aur brain de hi diya.

CAB- Pyaar sab kuch sikha deta hai.

MUK- Guys I know what u all want to say but I'm still not sure about this love thing. I will never ever doubt abhi again but I don't trust this word love yet. I'm not ready to love yet.

AL- It's absolutely fine Mukti. Don't worry... Atleast you are trying to do so, its more than enough.

NAV- Haan Mukti tum tension mat lo. Bass keep smiling!!

(Mukti smiles brightly and hug all of them and then says)

MUK- Cabir Dhruv yeh meeting kab khatam hogi I want to talk to him.

(All of them chuckled listening to her)

CAB- Abhi tak u were too angry and now u are too desperate to talk to him.

(Mukti hit him lightly on his arm. And the rest laughed on seeing her.)

DHR- Mukti I think it would get over in about 20-30 min.

MUK- Guys chalo na hum neeche chalte hai, I'm hungry and we would by the time eat something itne mein unki meeting would also get finished.

(Everyone agreed.)

MEANWHILE IN CONFERENCE HALL...

(Meeting had ended and all of them were only waiting for the final announcement from Mr.Tondon about who grabbed the deal. After sometime Mr.Tondon came inside with his team after their discussion and turned towards everyone.)

Mr T- So after having seen so many excellent presentations it was a difficult task for me and my team to come into the final conclusion. But after lot of discussions we came to a final conclusion that amongst all these there were two companies whose presentations were very much impressive. And those two are non other than MURTHY INDUSTRIES and MALHOTRA INDUSTRIES... So I hereby announce that this deal is going to be a merger between these two industries and both of them will work together for this project.

( Everyone stood up and clapped for the two winning companies, while Manik and Nandini were just staring at each other all lost within themselves. Seemes they were communicating through eyes.)

MANIK'S POV

Nandini yeh sab sacch hai na jo ho rha hai! I mean we both got the deal! Sab kuch ek sapna sa lag raha hai

NANDINI'S POV

Manik sab kuch kitna alag lag rha hai, I mean kucch din pehle tak aisa lagta tha ki aaiappa mujhe khushiyan dena hi nahi chahate, par ab har pal kuch aisa ho rha hai jisse hum aur pas aa sake ek doosre ke

MANIK'S POV

I Love You Nandini!

NANDINI'S POV

I Love You Manik... I Love you Bahut bahut bahut saara!!

(Their trance was broken by Abhimanyu who shook Nandini and gestured her to go ahead and greet Mr.Tondon, Manik and Nandini both stood up and went towards Mr.Tondon and shook hands with him and thanked him for the deal. And then the deal was signed by Manik and Nandini. After that everyone congratulated them and they along with Abhimanyu came out of the Conferrence hall.)

RECEPTION AREA (2:00PM)

(MaNan and Abhi came towards the reception area after that. Manik was about to call Cabir to know were they were, just than Mukti came running and hugged Abhi all of a sudden. The hug was totally unexpected for Abhi so he just stood there in shock not knowing what to do. Meanwhile CaVya and DhhruLia too came from behind and stood beside MaNan. Manik and Nandini looked at all of them and gestured a what' look, to which all of them nodded-smilingly, MaNan too smiled knowing what they meant.)


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Posted: 9 years ago
Wiw.. nyc..
Mukhbi on its way..
Do update soon
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