#2 MaNan FF-Stranger (Part 23/ pg 128/ Link to thread 3/ pg 140) - Page 44

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: anjanbapidas

its ok. Dear i have no problem with your decision. Thanks for the pm. Tack your time and update soon . We will wait for you. Best of luck for your exam. Thankyou. Lots of love pari.

thnx for understanding...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Cutesanjana1008

Waiting just for nxt 30 mins ...
Update soon

Sure... M just searching for the next part... Mil hi ni raha h...

PS - My first crush par toh unres kardo...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: _Samthanian_

Awee... koi ni re sanjuu dont say sorry...
N about Nandini Murthy ... toh uske toh andaaz hi alag haii... 🤣
Chalo there is more to come...
Babyee,..

LOVE UH..


Babu...ur decision is gr8 ...
U should concentrate on ur studies too...

Bt ham wait karengey tujhe aur tere updates ko on weekends...

Btw...all the very very best for ur exams...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: _Samthanian_

Awee... koi ni re sanjuu dont say sorry...
N about Nandini Murthy ... toh uske toh andaaz hi alag haii... 🤣
Chalo there is more to come...
Babyee,..

LOVE UH..


Babu...ur decision is gr8 ...
U should concentrate on ur studies too...

Bt ham wait karengey tujhe aur tere updates ko on weekends...

Btw...all the very very best for ur exams...

And love uh three
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: _Samthanian_

Sure... M just searching for the next part... Mil hi ni raha h...

PS - My first crush par toh unres kardo...



Sorry..sorry...sorry...i forgot to tell...maine unres kar diya tha...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Cutesanjana1008


Babu...ur decision is gr8 ...
U should concentrate on ur studies too...

Bt ham wait karengey tujhe aur tere updates ko on weekends...

Btw...all the very very best for ur exams...

And love uh three

Thank you foe understanding sanjuuu...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Cutesanjana1008



Sorry..sorry...sorry...i forgot to tell...maine unres kar diya tha...

ohh ohkk...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi samthaninan...i m newbie n started reading ur ff "strangers"..i read all d parts in a go...trust me when i say this..ur work is brialliant...marvelous...n i m speechless with d way u turned d monster manik into a manik who act so innoncent types ...plus his cute antics...its just amazing..n den comes our dear nandu...actually bold n seductive one with all her nautanki...like seriously how i wish u to be the CV of ky2 ..agar aap hote toh dhamaal ho jata..aise ag or sholay pani me lagte toh kya kehne the..😆😆😆 but seriously ur imagibative skills r awesome n most importantly d dialogue of gunde wala scene...i was about to fall down d bed😆😆...u made my day...love u for dis..keep smiling n shining for ur luved ones...tc ...n come soon..sissy😃😃😃
Edited by shivanichauhan1 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Happy Children's day guyss...
Check this post...
Happy Children's day
Sorry for the typing errors if any...

Lo behno aa gaya aaj ka compensation part...

PART 20


Manik's pov :

She was looking attractive while doing such antique. I began to move closer to her. I could feel her gaze following my each step,piercing my soul.ohh god i was falling for this girl,she was different and it all felt so new and refreshing with her around,like a teenage love,finally after lot of argument with my heart and mind i looked at her.our gaze locked and i moved towards her.I stood infront of her & wanted to take her in my arms, kiss her madly, feel her burning skin under my palm. I was going mad with this erotics thought.I pulled her chin up making her face me,I found her blushing and that broke my sanity, I smacked my lips on her pulling her up in my arms,I hugged her from her slim waist and kissed her throughly, After pretty much time we broke the kiss & reality hit me. I felt guilty for this sudden action of mine but truly speaking I was feeling out of the world while kissing.

End of POV


Nandini : Hawww, Manikkk, ek baat sach sach baatao na, kya tum mujse payer karte ho? Bolo, bolo, saarmao maat.


Without answering her que manik simply went from there leaving a confused Nandini behind. Manik directly went to washroom to cool himself down. At that time manik's phone began to ring.Hearing this Nandini went to manik's room & found that he was in the washroom,so she picked up the phone.


Phone conversation...

The person : Oyeee, Angur muh main leke ghumne wala laangoor, abey sale Kaisa hain tu? Itne din hogaye aur, na koi phone or na koi massage kiya tune? Kya baat hain boss?

Nandini : Actually baat ye hain ki, laangoor aab washroom main hain, main Angur bol rahi hoon. Laangoor jab bahar ayega tab main kehdungi ke uske frn "chicken taandur "ka call aya tha.

The person : Nehi nehi, main taandur nehi hoon, main to Harshad hoon, Manik ki dost.
Nandini about to say something when someone snatched the phone from her & of course it was Manik Malhotra.

Manik : Hello, kaun?

Harshad : Tune hamari dosti ka ye kimat diya, Huhhh, tune saadi kar liya aur hame baataya bhi nehi.

Manik : Saadi kiski saadi, kab hua, maine toh saadi nehi kiya, listen tu phone rakh main baad main baat karunga.


Saying this he cut the call.Nandini was staring at her bcoz he was wearing only towel. Manik saw her staring & smirked. He thought of teasing her.


Manik : Aise kya dekh rahi ho, ghar main bhai, papa nehi hain kya?

Nandini : Bhai, papa to hain par pati nehi hain na.


Saying this she winked at him & manik stood like an idiot. Nandini came close to his ear & said...


Nandini : U know what manik, mujhe mere liye kuch nehi chahiye, par meri baccho ke liye tum jaise ek hot father chahiye.


Manik's pov :

Why bhagwan why, konsa pen kharidkar aapne mera kismat likha tha, mera kismat likhne ke pehle mujhe bol dete, main khud aapko branded pen kharidkar deta.


Nandini : Manik chup Keu ho?kuch to bolo.


To divert the topic manik said...


Manik : Nandini tumne breakfast kiya?

Nandini : Aab tak to nehi kiya.

Manik : Ok, listen tum jao, main tumhe ande ke omelet bana deta hoon.

Nandini : Ande ke omelet, nehi nehi main insan hi thik hoon.

Manik : Ufff, nandini chup, tumhe khane ke liye omlete banadunga.

Nandini : Par ek omlete mujhe kaise kha sakti hain?

Manik : Tum jao yaha se please.


Nandini in anger went to the adjacent balcony of her room to take fresh air & saw shahid again.
Shahid : jo ja raha hain, usse Jane do, pyaar hi to hain, kahin aur se aane do.


Saying this he winked at her.


Nandini : Meri chappal ki size tujhe baatau kya?

Shahid : Arey waaah,Tumhe pehle bolna chahiye tha na ke tum chappal gift chahti ho, bolo size kya hain?

Nandini threw an icy glare to him & went from there. She found was ready to go somewhere.
Nandini : Where are you going?


Manik didn't say anything, simply locked the door & went outside the cottage, leaving an angry Nandini behind.


Nandini's pov :

Aapne aap ko samajh ta kya hain wo, ghatiya Manik Malhotra Huhhh.
In the afternoon...


Nandini was feeling bore so she played a song in her phone & began to dance like manic, she also singing like crazy people...


Nandini : "Lagaweli jab lipistic ,
hilela arra distric
Tu, lagaweli jab lipistic ,
hilela arra distric
Zilla top lalelu
Komariya, Komariya
kar lopa loap,
lalipop lagelu "


When Nandini was busy in dancing the door opened & she saw manik was standing folding his hands on his chest.


Manik : Ho gaya, pagalpanti?


Nandini remained silent due to anger.


Manik : Listen, ghar main khane ke liye kya hain?

Nandini : Poison hain poison.


Manik answer absent mindly...


Manik : Good wo hi kha ke so jana, main bahar ja rahi hoon, lautne main late ho sakta hain.


Without waiting for her answer manik again went out.


Nandini : Urgghh, ayappaa!!!!

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Chalo chalo aj ka laughing dose khatam...
Ab jaldi se comments dedo bade waale coz yeh update kaafi bada thaa...
So how was the update???
Do uh guyss like it???
If yes than hit like button n share your views in the form of comments...

Loads of love,
Pari

PS - The once who haven't saw my surprise yet... Here uh go... My new FF...
Click here to open ---> My First Crush

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Posted: 9 years ago
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unres

OMG...manik kissed her...uske baad nandu ka dialogue...haha...

angur
langoor
and chicken tandoor...my personal favorite...loved it...
harshad bhi kam nautanki ni hai...saare ke saare kitni nautanki karte hain...

uske baad toh...ROFL...seriously...

""""""Bhai, papa to hain par pati nehi hain na.""""""

awesome...
thereafter manik's pov...tooo good...

shahid and chappal...very nice combination..hehe...

dance...loved this song...konsa hai btw yeh?????

koi manik ko batao pagalpanti bhi zaroori hai...kitna mazaa aaya...

awesome pari...

aise hi hasate raho aur update dete raho...


LOVE
SANJANA

Edited by Cutesanjana1008 - 9 years ago

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