#2//The Ex's At War//Chapter 9 pg133 n Link for Thread 3 on pg153

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sujal1fan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#931

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..paarsaa..

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Posted: 9 years ago

#932

mujhe comment jarna hain kya?

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lovesucks_78

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Posted: 9 years ago

#933

plss steve is bad

ask manik to punch him for me

sry for not commenting on both the updates

exam time

will cmmnt later

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alind713

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Posted: 9 years ago

#934

Awesome update
Please update the next part
Eagerly waiting for it

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Sohinitalukdar

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Posted: 9 years ago

#935

Omg finally... Such nicely witten yaar. Amazing *claps*

as usual again waiting for next part. Atleast say when you will post the next part.

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S.h.e.e.t.a.l

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Posted: 9 years ago

#936

Manik as always went overboard with his insecurities
Nice update

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Pari_mananholic

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Posted: 9 years ago

#937

Wow awesome update...

Manik has reasons...

Luved tht punch...Nandu is soo upset...

Manan lost their baby...wats the flashback...

Manini is soo smart..after all she is manik daughter...

Luved their convo...

Manik was soo frustrated as Nandu was not responding...

Their hug was wow...

Sit ups were wow...hilarious...

Manik is too impossible...

Manan is love no matter what...l

They care for each other soo much...only they can cry for each other...

Why they drifted...pls update flashback also...

Manik is not going to leave tht Steve...

His hand on Nandu waist...he is definitely going to kill him for tht...

Nandu was soo shocked to see manik at the office...

Can't wait for next update...

Luved it...

Thnx for pm..

Update soon...

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simranstar

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Posted: 9 years ago

#938

Yeiii

I am the first 1 to comment

First of all bara wala sorry😭 itne din tak gayab rehne k liye but kya karoon exams se avi avi picha chuta hai😭😭😭

Or nai toh mai v situps kar rahi hun ab toh maaf kar do.

Waise i know aapka heart bahot bara hai.:-) :-)

About the chapter

👏

It was out of the world

the reason behind manik's action was shockinG.

Waise toh mujhe is stupid steve par pehle se hi shak tha.

But i never imagined that he would be such a jerk.

Bloody looser.😡

M3 rocked.😃

She is always the centre of attraction of your chapter.

I love the way you write manini's dialoguE.

papa or beti ka situps drama was superb.

I was laughing😆😆😆 like a mad after reading that part.

I jst love manini.

She is such a cutie pie

usse toh cutest teacher ever ka trophy milna chahiyE.

no doubt wo manik or nandu ki beti hai.😃

And manik being manik was super duper Amazing.

Seriously he was posing for the photographs.:-) :-)

Haa ha ha ha ha 😆 awesome.

I hope unka confusion jaldi jaldi clear ho jaaye.

Or nandu jaldi se manik ko maaf kar de.

I am dying to know what will happen when nandu will come to the truth.

Ab wait nai ho raha..

Update the next chappy asap rockstar.

Hame dher saare or v amazing amazing updates dete raho.

Keep rocking and keep updatiNg.

Take care

With lots and lots of love...

Simranstar.

Edited by simranstar - 9 years ago

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shindesweety

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Posted: 9 years ago

#939

wanna 🤗

i so love manini man

even though i dont like kids but she is the cutest of all

and ua too😛

she is the show stealer

see i dind want to kill manik😊

i knw he is right😊😃

solid reason

ab nandu ko kab pata chalega

and marine drive😃family scene😆😆😆awwwies i love this trio malhotra😳

how to u write manini's character👏

takecare

see u write this awesome😉 n how u dont want we to trouble u aftr this😉

will keep ranting jaldi post karo😆

thankusomuch for the update😊

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hpzaya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#940

Manik is the best husband you have written but yes he is way too impulsive but that's ok the way he loves Nandini is just adorable...now waiting for Manik to punch Steve hard in front of nandini and reveal his true picture...loved it...jaan Mein jaan aayi...love reading your ff

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