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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update. Manan's scream part was amazing and funny. Loved it.nandini's words of trust was fab.wow navya's entry and cabir's reaction was mindblowing. Loved it. Manan's moments were beautifully penned.eagerly waiting for next update. Continue soon.thanks for pm
Keep writing
Stay Blessed😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awsum update... nandu is trusting manik... bt jald he uakauska yeh trust vo break karega...wow navya ke entry
... update ASAP
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update
Hehehhe manik troubling her
Bt she trusts him
On no manik is still thinking abt his plan...
Nandu's friends asking her ques
Navya... Cabir knows her??
Thnkz 4 the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Heyy... M back ...
Pad to mne raat ko hi Liya tha but laziness...
It didn't allow me to write a comment...
So m sorry...
But now m here with my comment...
N m again really sorry for not commenting from so long uh to knew d reason...

Now about updates...
They were superb...

D accidental kiss... Ohh god...
N then d dinner... They all r really mad Sachi...
N then d party...
MANAN dace which was stupendo fabulously fantastical...
N then our very own drunk nandini... Asking for a kiss... Hahaha... That was hilarious...
N then Cabir k samne manik ki embarrassment...
N affcouse how can I forget d hot shower manan had...
N then nandini waking next to manik that too cuddling... Aaawww...
N nandini trust manik...
Don't know what manik is gonna do...
I just want d story out soon...

Jaldi se update karna...
M eagerly waiting...

Stay blessed...
Stay happy...
Keep smiling...
Keep writing...
Continue soon...
AVNEET... (AVI...)
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Posted: 9 years ago
I nearly forgot abt ths story! Its gud u updated! Manik teasing nandu! Hahaha poor nandini! Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: avimakkar

Heyy... M back ...

Pad to mne raat ko hi Liya tha but laziness...
It didn't allow me to write a comment...
So m sorry...
But now m here with my comment...
N m again really sorry for not commenting from so long uh to knew d reason...

Now about updates...
They were superb...

D accidental kiss... Ohh god...
N then d dinner... They all r really mad Sachi...
N then d party...
MANAN dace which was stupendo fabulously fantastical...
N then our very own drunk nandini... Asking for a kiss... Hahaha... That was hilarious...
N then Cabir k samne manik ki embarrassment...
N affcouse how can I forget d hot shower manan had...
N then nandini waking next to manik that too cuddling... Aaawww...
N nandini trust manik...
Don't know what manik is gonna do...
I just want d story out soon...

Jaldi se update karna...
M eagerly waiting...

Stay blessed...
Stay happy...
Keep smiling...
Keep writing...
Continue soon...
AVNEET... (AVI...)



Hehe., Tysm dear! 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update...
manik ki teasing.superb

but manik deewans ko kyun barbaad karna chahta hai

update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice update
nandu forget about last night n manik start to tease her so funny
manik is happy that nandu trust him bt why he's using her to take revenge from her family
will b waiting for next update
cont soon
b happy tc
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hello Readers, How are you all? Hope you are doing good.

Here's your update! I found the response for last updatethoda feeka- feeka. Isliye bahut try kiya but couldn't motivate myself to write "Manan Scenes". But anyways here's your update.. And silent readers, I hope this time you all also wont mind commenting..



Chapter 8: New Ties.
"Tomorrow is still unwritten, and it is waiting for you to write it..."



"Navya! What a pleasant surprise!!", I said getting up from my chair and leaving my pasta filled fork in the plate itself (Well, that was very tough for me. But anything for Navya! 😉). I went and hugged her, "Tum yahan kese?" She chuckled seeing my excitement. "Bas apni Nandu ko surprise dene aagyi.."
"Aww.. Not bad haan..", I chirped. I scrutinized her from top to bottom. She was wearing a white sport tee with blue denim, not her daily salwaar kameez. My eyes bulged out from my sockets and I whispered to her, "Yeh tumne khud toh kiya nhi hoga.. So is Arya behind this?", I pointed towards her attire. She nodded shyly.
"I knew it!"
Navya never wears western attire by herself. Me and Arya always force her whenever we go out for vacations. And if I am here, then this is surely done by Arya.

"Par tum yahan ayi kese?", I finally asked her. But before she could answer, I heard Manik clearing his throat. I looked at Manik, "Apni nyi friend se hme milvaogi nhi?", he asked in his usual charming voice. Then suddenly Navya asked astonishingly, "Tum yahan ??", I looked at her and found that she was looking at Cabir who was trying his best to cover his face.

"You guys know each other?", I asked looking both Navya and Cabir one by one. Manik was also looking at Cabir with questioning eyes.
"Cabir.. You know her?", this time it was Manik.
Cabir coughed a little bit, "Yaah.. Abhi.. Abhi thodi der phele hi mile.. Mile the hum..", the all time confident and prankster Cabir was having difficulty in saying a proper sentence.
'Weird!'
"Kahan?", Manik asked again. Cabir was looking at Navya sheepishly who on other hand was looking everywhere except Cabir.

"Manik tubhi na! Phele unlogon ko bethne toh de..", Mukti interrupted, "Come and sit first Nandani and... Navya, right?" Navya nodded with a smile. We both sat down. Ishita and Vidhi also greeted Navya.

"So guys this is my Bhabi cum friend Navya! Meri sbse bade Bhaiya Ki wife..", I introduced Navya to Fab-5. Cabir started coughing badly listening to my words.
"Hey Cabir! What happen?", Aliya asked who was sitting beside him.
"Yele.. Pani pee..", Manik offered him. He drank and finally came in control. "M done with my breakfast.. You guys carry on.. I week just come back.", Cabir said and went from there. Both Cabir and Navya were behaving weird. I made a mental note to ask Navya about it when we will be alone.

Cabir's POV

"This can't be possible! She's Navya!! Nandani's bhabi! That means she's married to that jerk.. No! No! Yeh nhi ho skta..!", I was muttering all this shit on my way to washroom. I needed to bring my mind back to track. I came into the washroom and started splashing water on my face. I remembered our encounter before I joined my friends downstairs for the breakfast.

Mukti has messaged everyone to come downstairs for breakfast as she has called Nandani and gang too. I wore a white tee with a causal blue shirt on top, a blue denim and white shoes. I set my hair and got out of my room.

"Badtameez dil.. Badtameez dil..", I was singing on my way downstairs. Suddenly a girl came towards me, "You are Cabir Dhawan, right? The drummer of Fab-5!", she squealed. I nodded with a smile.
"OMG OMG OMG!! I knew it.. Ap yahan pe hai.. That means your whole Fab-5 is here, right? Manik bhi? OMG mujhe sbse milna h!! OMG I can't believe it.. Pls you wait! Me apni friends ko bulake ati hun.. OMG OMG OMG", she ended her crap and started going at the end of the corridor Maybe to her room.
'Is ldki ne kitni baar ek line me OMG bola hoga..', I thought.

I saw her coming out of the room. Now, it was my time to shout OMG OMG!!! She was not coming with her 'friends' but a whole gang of 12- 15 girls.
'Apni friends ke sath chuttiyan mnane ayi hai apne mohalle ki sari ldkiyon ke sath yahan kitty party krne'

I knew that I can't handle 12- 15 OMG OMG girls so I had to find a way to escape. I found a washroom near me so without thinking twice I just get into it and locked the door.
"Thank God!", I sighed in relief.

"Ahhh!!!", I heard a girl's scream. I turned around and found a girl in front of me. She was wearing a white tee with faded jeans which was completely suiting her flawless skin. Her long straight hairs were flowing till her waist. Her horrified eyes had some spark that held me. Her pouty glossy lips were...

"What the hell are you doing here? Tumhe sharam nhi ati?", That girl finally said something in her sugary voice and stopped my thoughts to go wild. I was still gawking at her unable to decipher the meaning of her words. 'She's such a beauty!', My heart told my mind.

"Are you even listening to me??", she asked furiously.
"Huh.. Haan..", I finally came out of my trance.
"Tum yahan Girls' washroom me kya kar rhe ho?? And why did you locked the door?"And then a bomb fell on me, "What? Yeh.. Yeh girls' washroom h?"
"Yes Mr.!"

"Yar Vo kahan gya? Abhi toh yhin tha.."
"Yar I swear Vo abhi yhin tha, mene khud dekha tha!"
We heard that OMG girl's voice from outside.

"Yeh bahar tumhare bare me hi baat Kr rhe hai na? Tum yahan bhag ke aye ho? Who are you? Chor ho kya??", that girl bombarded me with her questions. I sighed.
"Wait! Me abhi unhe btake ati hun..", she was about to go outside in full Jhansi-Ki-Rani-Mode. I caught her arm and pushed her in. Now, she was between me and the slab of basin. Her beautiful eyes got wide by this action of mine. She was about to shout but I covered her mouth.
"Tumhe kis angle se me chor lgta hun?", I asked raising my eyebrow. She examined me and gestures me to uncover her mouth.
"Chilaogi toh nhi?", I asked and her eyes showed some relief. She shook her head in a 'no'. I uncovered her mouth and stepped backward and she scrutinized me from top to bottom.
"Chor toh nhi lgte.. Toh phir kon ho tum?", she asked innocently.
"K-K-K-K-Kiran.. My name is Raj.. Naam toh sunah hi hoga?", I said mischievously mimicking Sharukh Khan. She giggled. I was coming close to her but I got slipped because of the spilled soap on the floor and I landed on her. I caught her So that I don't fall And in that process I kissed on her collar bone.
'Shiitt!', my mind screamed while my heart was in Bliss Mode.

I somehow managed to stand up straight without falling on my own legs. I glanced at her, she was hell embarrassed and she was looking here and there in her nervousness. Her cheeks become completely red.
'Oh! She's so cute man..'
But before I could say anything she ran out of the washroom.

"Arrey ruko..", I tried to stop her but I fell on the floor because of that spilled soap.
'Damn!'

I finally managed to get up and went outside but she was nowhere to be seen.
'Shitt yar..!!'

And I have never thought in my wildest dream that that girl will be none other than Harshad's wife. I was totally frustrated.
'Am I falling for Navya?', I asked myself. But my heart and mind both were going either ways.

I assembled myself and went to my friends. They were almost done my their breakfast. Navya was still not looking at me while Manik was giving me We-Need-To-Talk wala look.
'Arghhh!'

Back to Nandani's POV

Cabir came back and I could still feel the awkwardness in the air between Cabir and Navya.

'Kuch toh zarur Hua h..'

"So guys kya plan h? Kahan Jana h?", Dhruv asked.
"Actually mujhe pta chala hai Ki Goa me ek carnival lga Hua h.. Let's go there!", Ishita suggested.
"Great idea!", I exclaimed. Everybody nodded.
"Let's go to the jeep then.", Manik said. He moved outside and we all followed him.

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"Yes Dad! Bas yeh deal ache ho Jae.. It's very, very important for our company!!", Bhaiyya said.
"Han Harshad.. Agar Mr. William ke sath yeh deal ache se hogyi.. Toh international market me bhi hmara naam hojayega..", Dad said proudly, "Vese Abhi tumhari baat hui unse?", he asked looking at Abhi bhai.
"Yes dad. Mr. William do din ke baad India ayenge..", Bhai replied.
"Cool, our whole team will be ready by then!", Bhaiyya said with a smile.




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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update...
navya joined nandu...great...

itna sab kuch ho gaya cabir and navya ke beech,,,,,,,

cabir bechare ka to sach mein aaj omg omg ho jata 😆😆

navya ko harshad ke saath nahi cabir ke saath hona chhaiye tha

mujhe aisa kyun lag raha hai k definetely aisa kuch hone wala hai ...cabir and navya ke beech kuch to khichdi pakne wali hai...

but chalo jo bhi hoga acha hi hoga.,

loved it

update soon

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