Agar Tum Saath Ho.. MaNan OS

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hi guys how is the weekend going? i am here with an OS on MaNan my first try writing an OS hope i did good and you like this...a weekend treat to you all...

i really love this song and this idea popped up in my mind so i penned it down ...

do share your views and comments about it ...

lots of love...


AGAR TUM SAATH HO

"Nandini vo chala gaya" said Navya I looked at her tears came running from my eyes I fell down on the floor mukti alya and navya came and hold me in there arms I kept crying they try to stop me but I was lost he left me how can he go like this how "MANIKKK" I shouted on top of my voice "nandini relax calm down" said mukti but I was not listening "how can he go" I got up and held the frame which has our picture in it "MANIKKK" I shout his name as I ran out of the room and in the house I kept saying his name but he was nowhere. Lost I collapsed on the floor...

Pal bhar thahar jaao
Dil ye sambhal jaaye
Kaise tumhe roka karun
Meri taraf aata har gham phisal jaaye
Aankhon mein tum ko bharun
Bin bole baatein tumse karun
'gar tum saath ho..
Agar tum saath ho



How can he go like this I saw around our pictures were on every wall this was out house we made it one year of marriage 5 years of togetherness and he left why what was my fault I caress the frame it had our picture when we went to Manali for our little small trip at night just left without telling anyone we were so happy the first time we enjoyed our heart out just him and me.

Behti rehti..
Nahar nadiya si teri duniya mein
Meri duniya hai teri chaahaton mein
Main dhal jaati hoon teri aadaton mein
'gar tum saath ho


I got up and moved to the dining area where we use to eat together he was feeding me and I was feeding him and he bit my finger I was so angry then he hugged me kissed my finger and I return the kiss by kissing him on his cheek. I laugh thinking about it but then the scene disappeared the table was empty all alone I cry more and more.. I walk to the living area where we use to watch TV together he always wanted me in his lap he used to say am his battery he needs to keep me close for energy so me in his lap was a must we use to laugh and then end up kissing and making out with each other. It was his daily dose I laugh and blush but the other second the TV is close he is not there I cry more and more "Manik please don't leave me come back Manik please" I shout and sit on the floor in a cocoon manner

Teri nazron mein hai tere sapne
Tere sapno mein hai naraazi
Mujhe lagta hai ke baatein dil ki
Hoti lafzon ki dhokebaazi
Tum saath ho ya na ho kya fark hai
Bedard thi zindagi bedard hai
Agar tum saath ho
Agar tum saath ho

How can you be like this nandini I wanted a life with you and you thought my work meant everything to me how can you think I was be happy away from you just because I didn't reach on time it was my kid to nandini my baby he was it was our first child how can you say that it was just your dream not mine this accident was not only which hurt you I was dead nandini I had to choose between you and the baby and I choose you because you were important to me more than the baby it's you who came to my life first you are my life then how can I left my life die in front of me .. that one moment and you said I didn't care for you how can you end all this like this 5 years of relationship one year of marriage and you said I was not the guy for you how. I was at the airport leaving her and going away. I check the phone seeing her happy smiling pictures how will I live without you how?

Palkein jhapakte hi din ye nikal jaaye
Bethi bethi bhaagi phirun
Meri taraf aata har gham phisal jaaye
Aankhon mein tum ko bharun
Bin bole baatein tumse karun
'gar tum saath ho
Agar tum saath ho

He is my soul, my heartbeat without him my life is empty every day with him was a journey how will I live without him his crazy antiques I touch my tummy feeling which I had a few weeks ago our baby and the flashbacks the accident my baby's death and me saying it's all because of him how can I be so ruthless how can I say this to the one and only person who was my life who would cry when my finger was cut with the knife how he never let me use knife again not even enter the kitchen dard mujhe hota tha anso uska ate tha kase kase main na asa kia kase usko itna dard di ka vo mujh sa dur chala gaya but he knows me na how stubborn I am he should have stayed "Manik vapas aa jao please I will die" I cried my heart out.

Teri nazron mein hai tere sapne
Tere sapno mein hai naraazi
Mujhe lagta hai ke baatein dil ki
Hoti lafzon ki dhokebaazi
Tum saath ho ya na ho kya fark hai
Bedard thi zindagi bedard hai

"Main kia krta nandini I had to go na you said I am responsible how can I see you hurt I love you so much nandini" I said as I caress her smiling face she was so happy when she found out that she is pregnant we are expecting a baby "manik I know it will be a boy manik dekhna bilkul tumhre jasa hoga" I cry more as her words echo in my ears she was so happy and in one second our life got ruined how did this happen how. "NANDINI please don't let me go"

(Writer's POV)

he was lost crying when on the other side she was crying "manik promise me you will be with me always hamesha say na manik" he opens his eyes and look around wipe his tears "I can't leave her I can't" he ran from there... she remembered the promise I can't let him go I can't she stood up when pain stuck in her tummy she winches and fell down "MANIKKK" she shouts again. Doctor told her to rest as her wounds were still healing yet she knew if she didn't go he will leave her she will die...

(POV end)

Agar tum saath ho
Dil ye sambhal jaaye
(Agar tum saath ho)
Har gham phisal jaaye
(Agar tum saath ho)
Din ye nikal jaaye
(Agar tum saath ho)
Har gham phisal jaaye

I was in pain yet I have to go I have to stop him I have to "Nandini" I heard my name I look up to see it was him he is here he didn't leave me my manik he didn't go I knew he will not leave me "manik" he comes running to me and hugs me tight is it a dream is he real "you are here manik" we cry holding each other my manik didn't leave me I break the hug and touch him ... he is ...he is...here "how can I leave you my angel please stop crying baby am here na with you" he wipe away my tears but I was just lost into him I touch his face, hair ,arms I wanted to be sure I was not dreaming "man..ik...i...am..sor...ry please never leave me please" I kissed his forehead, cheek, eyes ,hands and nuzzle in his arms "shh shh angel am here with you see I promised I will be with you forever hamesha see am here" I look at him "HAMESHA" he nods "HAMESHA" and cups my face I look at him he kisses my nose, my cheek, my forehead and crashes his lips on mine as our tongues meet it felt like for the first time we kissed the passion and emotions he was gently moving exploring my mouth our tongues danced with each other the kiss was desperate yet slow I moan as he bit my lips "manik" we left each other when we were breathless "NANDINI I LOVE YOU you are my life my forever we will start our life again it's us angel how can we be apart" I lay on his chest "I LOVE YOU TOO MANIK yes it's us we can never be apart" we stood like this holding each other because the love we had was not the one that breaks in a nano second our love was beyond eternity and what if old memories has some painful ones we will create new ones which will take place of the painful ones.

1 year later

"Manik...Manik...Manik" I was shouting his name and yet he was not listening I walk out of the kitchen seeing him engrossed in TV "kia kro main is larke ka everyone is about to come and yet he is not ready" I walk to him took the remote and shut the TV off "angel what is this yar itna maza ka show aa raha tha" I stare at him he knew am pissed "Okay fine ja raha hoon ready hone" and walked towards the room as I turned to the kitchen when he hugged me from behind touching my tummy "how is my champ" I smile "kicking as always" he kissed me on the neck making me moan "manik stop go get ready" I know if he continues I will not be able to make him stop "he kissed on my tummy "champ come fast okay you dada needs you as your mom is too irritating" he talks to him "manik I will kill you" before I hit him he runs up "NANDINIII I LOOOVEEE YOUUU" his voice echoed in the house and I laugh.

Agar tum saath ho tu har ik pal kushi hah Agar tum saath ho tu zindagi haseen hai... one year back I was broken but as he said we are forever today after one year we are happy more than before a new member is coming and today we are celebrating with our beloved family here they come "manik..nandini where are you we are here?" see they came Mukti and abhi with their daughter sanaya, cabir and navya with their son abeer and Dhruv and alya with their daughter pia. "hey guys" shouted manik as he came down I walk smilingly towards them "finally nandini few more days then champ will be with us" I blush hearing mukti "mukti please yar ziyda mat bol yeh emotional hojae gi tu rona start aj kal iska mood swings are really too much" said manik I looked at him he loves to irritate me "manik I will kill you" he ran from there I walk after him he held his arms up and I hug him tight everyone laughs seeing us that the sky also smiles with us ...happiness is when you are with me...Agar tum saath ho...


The End



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love Sehr:)



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Knight99 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely!!!
Thanks for pm
Keep up the good work!! <3
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It was a lovely os
sweet sa
agar tum saath ho
the title is perfect
takecare
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Really beautiful...
Amazing is...
Loved it...
Vry emotional...
Ur amazing...
God bless..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice os...
luved it...
thnx for pm..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome OS...

loved it so much...

loving the married manan...nandu is pregnant and they promised each other for a humesha...

they are the cutest couple...no matter what happens they cant stay away from each other...

keep up the good work...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow.. what a cute n sweet os. I just love this. . manan r so adorable. . manan ne ek dusre ke saath forever ka promise pura kiya . .they r just lovable. . now they r happy.. wid new family member. . just awesome . this one is amazing. . more write os like this.. this Is ur first attempt. but its beautiful. ..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It was amazing, superb, manan happy n together after all ups n downs
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Emotional starting and happy ending. Loved it yaar
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Even I love that song.. 😊
Ur first OS was a super hit...I must say
U write really well ya..
Amazing
Thanks for the PM

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