MANAN TS:ITS UR LOVE (Part-3 on page 19)(CONFESSION)(completed) - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: ruchi116

Update soon dear waiting to see if manik is lucky enough to get nandu or not

I'll try to update soon dear😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: Kavyashree22

Please update thoda long part tonight na, pleaseee!! I really love the prog. And btw, you are updating so many stories with this i think its total four stories.. So don't get ill.. Take care ⭐️

Thanks dear And
I'll try to update soon😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: Angel_manan

very nice concept.
update soon.
Thanks for pm.

Thanks purna😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: gtilwani45

That's nice ..

I like the concept. ..


pls continue this ts.

I really wanna read. .


waiting for it ..

Thanks Geet😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Snehasn

Yuppiiee...diwali gift k liye thank you so much... Count me in for this ride... Thanks a lot for pm...continue soon... Take care stay blessed

Thanks yaar😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice.. 😊
Interesting and different 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
#17
Hey guys thank you SooO much for those who likes my story ...well here is ur update ...hope you guys like it ...ENJOY😛😛😛
Part-1 (A)

Malhotra Mansion-

A guy was standing in front of the window looking at the sky ...without blinking his eyes ...he was in deep thoughts ...tears were flowing from his eyes...he didn't realized someone came in his room...he called him Many times ...but the guy didn't react a bit ...at last he patted his shoulder to broke his trance ...he looked at him...the pain was visible in his eyes ...

Guy:Manik tu thik ha naa...

He composed himself and gave a fake smile and said

Manik : Main thik hu Cabir ...

Cabir : voh toh dikh raha ha ...kya baat ha Manik ...tu jaanta ha ki tu mujhe bata sakta ha ...bol

Manik looked at him ...then again looked at sky and watching stars and painfully said

Manik : its being 4 years cabir ...aaj usse gaye pure 4 saal ho gaye ha ...voh bina bataye chali gayi ...aaj ke din aliya meri zindagi main aayi ...aur aaj hi keh din meri shining star mujhse dur chali gayi ...kya main itna bura hu Cabir ...kyu gayi cabir mujhe chodkar voh...ek baar bhi usne mujhse contact karne ki koshish nahi ki ...aur jab maine usse dhundhna chaha ...usne har raasta band kar diya ...kyu cabir ...kyu?

Cabir looked at him ...his eyes were filled with tears ...

Cabir pov

Kaise batau manik voh tujhse dur kyu gayi ...voh tujhse itna pyar karti thi ki usne apne pyar ko bhulna thik samjha teri khushiyo ke aage ...jisse tune pyar samjha voh teri sirf attraction thi ...aur jo tujhse saccha pyar karti thi usse tune kabhi samjha hi nahi...

Cabir : Manik vo vapas jarrur aayegi ...aur aaj ki party ha ...ho sakta ha ki voh aaj aaye ...

Manik looked at cabir and said

Manik : voh aayegi naa Cabir

His eyes were pleading him to say yes ...bcz now this is the only hope for him to meet his shining star

Cabir gives an assuring smile and said

Cabir : voh jarrur aayegi

Manik smiled a little and hugged cabir

Cabir pov :

Aaj pichle 4 saalo main maine manik ki smile dekhi jo kahi kho gayi thi ...ajeeb haina ...nandani ke naam se hi uske face pe smile aa jati ha ...aur yeh kehta ha ki yeh usse pyar nahi karta ...

Manik broke the hug and his phone started ringing ...

Manik : haa Aliya

Aliya angrily said: Manik are you coming or not ? Yaah phir main druv ke saath jao...we all are waiting for you

Manik : Aliya tum druv ke saath hi chali jao ...main aur cabir aa rahe ha

Manik cut the call and cabir ask him

Cabir : kya kaha Aliya ne

He looks here and there and said

Manik : voh keh rahi thi main kab tak aa raha hu ...

Cabir : Manik tu ek baat batayega ...tujhe teri shining star ki kasam...kya tu Aliya se pyar karte ho ...

He looked at him surprisingly

Manik : Cabir yu yeh kya

Cabir : Manik main jaanana chahta hu pata mujhe

Manik : pata nahi... yaar...in 4 saalo main hum dono ke beech kuch bhi normal nahi ha ...hum ladte ha ... gussa karte ha ... hamare relationship main kuch bhi worked up nahi ho raha ha ...main baat karna chahta hu Aliya se par darta hu kahi main usse hurt naa kar du ...I don't knew cabir main pyar ...

Cabir smilingly said : Mujhe mera jawab mil gaya Manik ...

Manik looked at him and said :Main nikal raha hu tu bhi aa jaa

Manik left from there ...cabir smirks and said

Cabir : aaj ek baat toh pakki ho gayi ki tu nandani se pyar karta ha ...par tu itna stubborn ha ki tu kuch bolega bhi nahi ...par don't worry...Aliya ko main sambhal lunga ...aur main jaanta hu voh bhi samajh jaayegi ...bas ab wait ha toh nandani ke space aaneka ...jab main apna plan shuru karunga ...

He too left from there ...



On the other hand ...a girl was standing in front of the space ...she was wearing a beautiful red saari ...she just looking hot at the same time beautiful. ..but...she was lost in her thoughts ...a guy came and placed his hand on her shoulder and said

Guy : sab yaad aa gaya naa

Girl sadly said: hmmm...4 saal ho gaye ...par aaj bhi kuch nahi badla ...bas badal gaye ha toh log aur rishte ...

Guy : Nandani yaad aa raha haina voh

Nandani looked at him shockingly and said

Nandani : Abhi tum yeh

Abhi:Nandani main jaanta hu ek naa ek din toh yeh din aayega ...jab tum usse face karogi ...nandani I want ur happiness only ...only ur happiness ...ab chale ander

Nandani : hmm


Nandani pov :

Pata nahi ab kya hone waala ha ...par main kabhi manik aur aliya ke beech nahi aaungi ...kitni badkismat hu main ...apne pyar ko confess bhi nahi kar sakti ...aur abhi jo sirf meri khushi chahta ha ...par kaise batau meri khushi toh Manik ki khushi main ha ...aur agar vo khush ha ...toh main bhi khush hu ...main jaanti hu kahi naa kahi main tumhare saath bahot galat kar rahi hu ...par main tumhe har voh cheez dungi joh tumhe chahiye ...bas voh jagah nahi de paungi ...jo manik ki ha ...mere dil main...

Abhi: kaha kho gayi

Nandani smiled faintly and said : kahi nahi ...chalo

Nandani walks but abhi still stands there and thinks

Abhi pov

Main jaanta hu nandani tum aaj bhi manik se bahot pyar karti ho ...tumne mujhse engagement bas issiliye ki taki tumhare mom dad khush ho ...par main tumse pyar karta hu aur tumhari khushi chahta hu ...aur tumhari khushi manik ha ... issiliye tumhe yaha le kar aaya hu ...bas ek baar tumhe tumhare pyar ...tumhari khushi se mila du...uske baad tumhari zindagi se hamesha ke liye chala jaunga...


Nandani came towards abhi and said

Nandani smilingly said: ab tum kaha kho gaye chalo

Abhi:yaah ...

Both entered in space...


That's it
I knew I knew
No manan scene
But guys this was important
And in next part
U will see
Manan Meet
And some jealousy realization
And much more
If you guys like it
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Till then
Keep loving❤️
Keep smiling😛😊😛
And
Keep shining For Ur loved ones❤️
Love
Diya😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
#18
Awesome
Amazing update
Ab Cabir aur abhi manan ko ek krenge...manik realise q nhi krta wo nandu se pyar krta hai...lovd it...continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#19
Nice update...
manan sch nice frnds...
jst hope manan will meet soonn...
as it is three shot...
luved it...
update soon...

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Posted: 9 years ago
#20
amazing ..

prologue was superb ..
sacrifice love for love ones ..

its mesmerizing story ..

really u r a brilliant writter I love all ur ff ..

thnks for the pm ..

cont soon ..
stay bless ..

keep writing ...
keep smiling :-)

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