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Posted: 9 years ago
🤗👏 this is for u mawara...
Supppeeerrr se uppperrr wala update ...

This ff alws bn closed my heart nd it wii...

U r amazing writer so pls make new some manan adult ff 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
Manvi wanting MaNan to get involved in everything that she does. Her sudden behaviour of crying is obviously very disturbing for MaNan. Nandini also being pregnant was sensitive. Manik handling his two babies who are his life. Manvi's wish of sending Smurfy to school was so cute. Nandini's mood swing & cravings. Manik missed this phase before & now he wants to make the most of it. The way he doesn't say no to her demands & went searching for Pani Puri at 1:00 in the night.
Manvi's visit to the Doctor. Finally MaNan know the reason for their bundle of Joy crying. Parents Loosing Phobia. It's probably cause she was away from Manik for 4 years & also she seen Nandini having an accident.
MaNan talking to her & trying to make her happy. Nandini telling her about her little brother & saying that he loves her & MaNan will never leave either of them. Manvi's happiness on knowing about the trip & the spark that was missing finally returned in her eyes. MaNan's morning Romance. Manik stated correctly seeing Nandini he does forget everything. But also his daughter's happiness is important & he would so anything for it!
Manvi being upset cause Mr.Malhotra didn't know how to be a Horse. The family finally gets going for a Holiday. Manik carrying Nandini cause she was sleeping & she clings to him like a baby. Manik showing Manvi the Villa. Father Daughter making Pasta. Poor Kitchen. Nandini's mood swings & getting upset but controls herself cause she knows they were here for Manvi.
Nandini asking Manik if he remembered about the last time they came here. And Manik teasing her. Nandini's shyness will never go away even if they get old. Manik stopped drinking Alcohol when Manvi seen him, that shows how much he respects her wishes & never wants her innocence tarnished. Another beautiful night for MaNan.
Manik again & again proves why he is the best husband & father. Their cute father-daughter talks in the Garden. Manik never gets tired of all her Questions & keeps answering her politely. Their family time in the beach! Manik telling Nandini to forget about the past! Not to get upset by thinking over it again & again.
Nandini's day finally arrived. Manik even though acting all calm he too was he'll worried. Baby Boy & I love the name Neyan. Manvi is so cute. She planned a lot but didn't know her brother was so small. Her Question of whether MaNan will love him more? How can they differentiate as Manik said they all are his Gems.

I'm going to miss this story a lot! Will be waiting for an Epilogue. Do come out with it soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb long update.
But Story finished ho gayi...
Thank you so much for beautiful story...
Love it very much...
Manvi is sooo cute,
I' ll miss Manvi alot..
Neyan is awesome name...
All part just amazing
MaNan moments was very nice.
Once again thanks for this story.
Keep writing.
Keep smiling
Stay blessed

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Posted: 9 years ago
Hayee! It was an amazingly beautiful update!
Will surely miss Manvi and Neyan!
The update was super duper long loved reading it from top to bottom!
You potraited manvi's fears very good!
The cuteness you have depicted was awesome!
I am seriously gonna miss this story a lot!
Manan were really superb!
Thanks for this fabulous story!
You are an amazing writer in all the ways!
Keep writing !
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hiii Mawara,
Yar tum toh mujhe bilkul bhool gayi...

Chalo about the update...it was the most waited update and tum ispe puri tarha se khari utri...it was awesome Mawara...loved it so much...cute Manvi, naughty Manik, moody Nandini, responsible parents MaNan..everything u presented very beautifully...

Manik and Manvi scene was nice...Manvi is so sensitive...she always wants attention...papa ki ladli...haha..Manvi wants to take Smurfy to school...very cute scene yar.
Nandini k mood swings...but Manik is handling her so beautifully...MaNan discussion about Manvi was lovely...hmm toh Nandini ko pani puri khane hai...bechara Manik...he arranged it but she doesn't want it now...MaNan scene was really very beautiful.

MaNan Manvi scene was amazing...u presented Manvi's condition so beautifully...the trio scene was lovely..MaNan doctor scene was serious..haye chhoti si Manvi aur itna complicated problem...Manvi chocolate icecream k naam se kitni khush ho gayi...the scene was nice.
"Mama..! Bhaiya ko kesy pta chala ya sab?"...I loved the line...Manvi is so cute and innocent na...MaNan scene was beautiful..it was a little bit emotional and also very romantic..loved it.

Mr.Malhotra and Manvi scene was awesome...hehe maza aa gaya..bechara Smurfy ko daant par rahi hai...villa is so beautiful...hehe pasta scene was lovely..Manik's pasta experience was hilarious.. MaNan scene was lovely..Manik ko pata hai Manvi is peeping.
MaNan scene was hell romantic...the nighty was beautiful...the scene was so amazing...the define true love..
The beech was beautiful...Manvi with sand castle pic was so cute and adorable...I loved it Mawara...Smurfy ne bahat parishan kia Mano ko...not fair han...

Last part was beautiful...Nandini's labour pain...Manik's restlessness...everything was beautiful..MaNan ko beta hua...Manvi's reaction was priceless...hehe..she is disappointed...uske sapne toot gaye...MaNan, Manvi and new addition Neyan...a happy family...loved it.

Thanks for pm Mawara...I will really miss this story so much...I will be eagerly waiting for the epilogue...please come soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Unfortunately last chappy..
Bt its too beautiful...
So much of manvi..
Bt i love her...
She is tooo cute n understanding...
I m going to miss this story.. Manvi
Smurfy 😭
Thanks for awesome story
Waiting for epilogue ⭐️
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Posted: 9 years ago
1st of all i am gonna miss dis sunsathiyaa!!!
nd end was awesome...
lovely...
u made a awesome ending...
starting 4rm manvi's prob...
nd manan's tlc towards manvi...
nd nandini pregnant mood swing...
hoho manik...u handled everything in a smooth way...
u r such a caring nd loving husband nd father yar...
gonna miss u soo much...
nd nandini ur tantrums ,ur pouts ,ur smile...miss u more...
nd cmg 2 manvi...my cutie pie...
she is such a sweetheart...miss u more dr...
nd goa trip was awesome...lovely...loved it soo much...
gonna miss sunsathiyaa more😭
d journey of sunsatiyaa was awesome...
nd i wanna thank u for giving such a wonderful journey...
keep doing ur work...
nd all d best 4r ur future work!!!!

keep smiling!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome story.. ⭐️

lovely.. 👏

Pls keep writing! 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
first of all thanks a lot for this super story
i have no words to describe my feelings for this beautiful romantic ff
going to miss dear manvi and obviously our lovely manan
i have never read itna lamba sa update u did a great job as always
the ending was superb u didn't miss anything coved all the angles perfectly
thanks for this amazing story which is my favourite from your index
waiting for more keep writing like this
with lots of love
zoia kanwal
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Posted: 9 years ago
I m new so directly commenting on last part but ur ff was really awesomee

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