#4MaNanSS:SunSathiyaa..!LastChpA/PG58/LastChpB,C,D,E,F,G,H/PG59/9th-1

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Sidhi

@ArtThouTheBest

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Posted: 9 years ago

#611

Superb 😊
Will miss zis ss really very much
Fank u 4 such a beautiful ss

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mishghan

@mishghan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#612

Hi Mawara!!!

first of all Thank you very much for such a beautiful story...

i have something to confess! this story of yours was the first story i swear the first one among a couple of them i choose to read on this forum!!! i was a damn silent reader and silently used to admire your work till you got angry and started threatening that you won't update and all that ghussa!

your story is beautiful loved the separation in the first few chapters and then the love blossoms!!!

i loved Manvi to the core!!! she was damn adorable!

honestly like all other girls of the world i am not a daddy's girl but still i adored the bond Manik and Manvi had! i wished if i could have such a loving father there was no need of friends in this world!

their love and concern for each other made me cry i don't remember how many times! always loved the way he used to tolerate her question her tantrums her requests and fulfilling them was his first priority. i dream of having such a father for my kids lol

i loved the way Nandini managed her love for her husband and her baby simultaneously! she was indeed a very loving and caring mother like all mothers of the world... she was mature yet immature at the same time...

i love the transition and progress of events... each and every character of this story was very well imagined and penned down! 👏👏👏

everyone whether it be Smurfy or Abeer as guest appearances hold an individual importance in the story!

the way Manik forgave Nyonika was so touching... the way you described for that dahi shakar rasm i had tears in my eyes too...

i'm a very emotional person honestly and this story of your has immensely touched me!

i don't know how many times i have read this story...this is on my wattpad account too and i have saved it so that whenever i feel like i read all the chapters once again and slip into the la- la land again!

in the end i would only say that a very big Thank you to you for giving us such a beautiful fantasy to live in! 😳

Thanks again!

God bless! and please continue writing...

waiting for the epilogue soon...😃

ab usmei der matt lagana please!!!

aur epilogue bhi itna hi lamba dena 😛

lol zyada hogaya kya? sorrryyy 😳

#okthanksbye

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Sutapa Sarbabhom

@sutapasarbabhom

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Posted: 9 years ago

#613

Tanx for long updt
we will this stry
Nyan is butiful name
manan r adorable
tanx for pm

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mananpreet21

@mananpreet21

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#614

OH MY GOD
Such a long long long part.
First of all thanks for the long update and thank u for the pm
Part padne se pehle hi mai emotional ho gy ye soch kar ki ye last part ha.
I will this stry and manvi a lot .
Her cute antics. Her cute si language everything
The part was awsme
Poor manik usse dono ko sambhal na padh rh ha
Poor manvi manan ko khone ka fear ha
But wo unhe kbhi ni khoge bcoz they love her a lot
Wow mananvi vacation.
Poor smurfy baar baar manvi ka gussa jhel na padhta ha
Manan ne itne easily aur swt way mai manvi ko samjhaya ki wo usse kbhi ni chodege
Manvi is such a understanding daughter wo apni mumma ko bilkul bhi pareshan ni karti
She is vry swt and cute
Wow trip mai manan hot moment bhi.
The name of the new baby is ao gud neyan
Iloved the name
I wish ye stry kbhi khatm na hoti but anyways
Thanka a ton for this beautiful story and for giving us manvi

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mylifeplf

@mylifeplf

Explorer

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#615

Love u
And thanks for giving wonderful story
We also loved manvi and especially parent manan
Thanks once again
Lots of love to u

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suraiya77

@suraiya77

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#616

The longest chapter I have ever read till date!!!
.
The story was really amazin'
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It is one of my favourite stories
.
Will miss it a lot
.
U are a fabulous writer
.
Ur all stories are so beautiful
.
Thank u for giving us an amazin' story
.
Will miss Manvi a lot

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sneha_glamarous

@sneha_glamarous

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#617

Loved d update sooo much...

Part A
Nandu z so much worried about manvi crying baselessly...😲
Manik hd to handle 2 babies no 3 babies...including smurfy😊... heheee

Pani puri wo b 1 at d nyt... luckily he got some which ws impossible task of getting...
then her crying... pregnancy tantrums... awww
luckily they didn't get any constable... heheheee😃

PartB
manvi z crying n crying... can understand manan condition at that tym..
she z scared of losing them... manvi z going 4m so much turmoil...

PART C

manviz fav z Chinese... mine too... same pinch...
Manvi want ol d balloons... awww.. sweet si request...

Whn she finds her parents with her in bed she sighs a relief... hw much pain she hd with her...

Nanduz way of distracting manvi 4m her fear... by telling her abt her brother... awww

best word MANO DI ...how cute does it sounds...
manan early morning talk about upcoming baby...awww
n their romance... as always best

PART D
Manvi n Mr Malhotra r so cute... he doesn't know hw 2 become horse... hawww n that upsets our manvi... so bad Mr grandpa...

their car scene... awww ..
manik hs really very much patience with him... he answers evey question of her so patiently...
mano z very understanding she didn't clapped instead she kissed nandu...awww👏

manik carried nandu n mano smurfy rather dragged him... poor Smurfy..

Mano z veryy excited with hte thought that she z going to beaches, will make castles... any kid would love to do ... rather evn i would also get excited with this thought only... hehee

mano shouting on Smurfy to get his mood theek ... hahaaa😃
nandu self talk with d baby...aww😊
n remembering about their passionate nyt n blushing...awww😉😉

i wonder how she would hv handled ol things ol alone at manoz tym...

duo making pasta...
mano peeping inside to know about her momz health...awww

Part E
manik left alcohol... for manvi...awww ... everyone shld left...
n their nyt as usual passionate...😉😉

PART F
manik n mano morning garden scene... blissful moment...
n their beach fun... so good... manofy mano z so fun...

Part g
mano n smurfy fight... heheehee
manik knows hw to divert his baby attention..
finally manvi got cured... yayieee

Part H
how cute... manik didn't go for office in 9 month of her pregnancy..
sitting in front of the labour room as promised with Nandini... wow
whn mano came to hospital crying i thought she again strtd hving tht phobia...

baby kinna chotu sa h...awww
"Aray but ap ny tou bola tha he will play with me..! You tou chalta bhi ni hai..!"... mano love u...

"manvi n her plans with her bhai... all in vain for sone tym...

Neyan Malhotra... nice n unique name...

Finally story ended... im in tears... i don't know why? through it ws happy ending...

epilogue one day soon 😉... would b waiting...😊

I think this z THE BIGGEST comment that i hv commented...lolz...
Im sure this makes u equally happy as u made me by giving longest update in the history of updating chapters...

loved the entire story so much...

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Atharsha

@atharsha

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#618

Mawara Sun Sathiyaa is on of my fav stry👏👏👏 i m disappointed😭😭😭 that it is ending soon coz i m so attached to manvi she is so adorobale i luv her a alot😳😳. if possible plz write a another story with manan babies i just loved tis family. A big hug 🤗🤗🤗 for you for writing such an amzing story.

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PILU123

@PILU123

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#619

THANK U FOR THIS STORY

THIS STORY IS LOVE

MANAN AND MANVI S BOND IS VERY CUTE

ALSO MANVI AND GRAND PA S BOND

LAST MANVI S DIALOGUE I AM VARY DISAPPOINTED YE BOHOT CHOTA HAIN

I WILL MISS MANVI

PLZ WRITE MORE STORIES LIKE THIS

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twenkling

@twenkling

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Posted: 9 years ago

#620

omg! last chapter! !!
loved it to the core. ...
gonna miss manvi a lot. ...
The cutie pie was too much adorable. ...
how much she loves manan nd her chotu bhai. ..
Their family vacation was too much good. ...
happy ending. ...
waiting for ur others update. ..
continue soon. ..
stay blessed nd take care. ..
Thanks for pm. ..

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