Hello dear...Just got to know about ur story...
I read all ur parts... i was like mujhe phele kyu nhi pata chala...
Seriously...
''Life partner by destiny '' i really like the name...
Very very beautiful concept...
Each character of ur story...was beautifully penned...
The way u describe na ... everything is so real...
Manan first met... nandini ka shy nature ...
Manik is so understanding... their engagement part...their first date... then nandini ke dad hospital m hote hai. .. and the way manik console her... Then manik ka confession part was beautiful...
Actually i love each and every bit of it...
Manan moments was blissful...
The way u describe each and everything was perfect... fantastic dear...
u did a fabulous job dear... u nailed it...
Plz continue soon... um waiting...
keep writing...
Keep smiling...
Stay blessed...
lots of love