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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hiii,
interesting... again soha huhhh... samir is so cute.. update fast please...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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chapter 3

while heading back towards home the driver was driving and manik and sameer were sitting in the backseat.manik was looking outside the window thinking something and lost in his own thoughts. Sameer was observing all this."chachu us doctor nandini k bare me soch rahe ho?"asked sameer seriously."hmm"replied manik still lost in nandini's thoughts."aap unhe pehele se jante ho na"asked sameer again with mischief in his eyes."hmm"manik again hmmed."app aaj unhe aaj mil kar propose karne wale ho na..." "hmmm" "aur kiss bhi karoge?" "hmm...wait what!!...SAMEER!"by the time realization dawned upon manik that what sameer had said and was going to catch him it was too late.the car was now parked outside their mansion and sameer hoped out of the car laughing and running to save himself from the wrath of his monster chachu.
"sameer WAIT I AM NOT GOING TO LEAVE U TODAY "said maink running behind sameer but poor manik the kid was too fast.sameer ran inside the mansion and hid behind a man."dad see chachu is trying to kill your masoom sa chotu sa pyara sa bachha"said sameer dramatically to the man. "sameer!"by the time manik also came panting and sow the man and said"cabir ye tu kya sikha raha h isko kuch bhi bolta h!". "kya ab kya kar diya isne"asked cabir to manik curiously."kya kiya...yeh pooch k kya bola...bol raha h k mai us pe flat ho gaya hu...aur aaj use propose karne wala hu...aur kya bol raha tha...haaa...aur use kiss bhi kar ne wala hu."said manik complainingly in one go.cabir who was listening to all this bust out laughing and cabir and sameer hi-fived each other and laughed again.

"tu has raha h...seriously."said maink looking at the duo disbelievingly. "to aur kya karo...wait pehele ye bata k wo ladki kaun thi?..aur tu aaj milne ja raha h usse?"asked cabir."are ha me tujhe batana bhool hi gaya aaj nandini mili thi mujhe...ussi se milne ja raha hu aaj"said maink."what nandini mili thi par vo to usa me thi na aur itne dino se koi contact bhi nai tha uske achanak se kaise?"asked cabir curiously and nandini were very good friends more like a brother and sister both enjoyed each other's company."pata nahi yaar achanak se dikh gayi aur use kaam tha to baat nai ho payi aaj 6 baje mlne jaa raha hu usse"said manik explaining everything to cabir."kya yaar 6 baje meri to abhi flight h delhi jana h navya k ghar jana h "said cabir disappointingly."dad mom k paas kal calejaenge ajj nandini se milne jate h na mujhe bhi milna h unse"said sameer as he was exited to meet nandini again."no beta zarori h jana aur nandini se hum ane k bad millenge ab to vo yahi pe h na cholo jao car me baith jao airport jana h na"said cabir to sameer."ok dad...bye chachu"said sameer and hugged manik "bye champ see you soon."said manik hugging him back.manik and cabir also hugged and cabir and sameer went to the car.before sitting in the car they both turned towards manik and shouted "enjoy the KISS"both of them laughed and hi-fived each other as the car drove off while manik was standing there with a shocked expression on his face and the his lips curved into a smile.





i am sorry i could not pm some ppl( _Samthanian_ mananneetu Maramkhan Angel_66 eetu shindesweety)as i have exceeded the number of posts😆 so i will pm tomorrow hope you dont mind😕
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33
Awesome pls do pm from next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34

awesome update...

loved it so much...

glad that manik decided to share every thing with cabir...

cabir and samba are ditto carbon copy of each other...jokes wise as well as teasing wise...to get all the info out of manik unknowingly...

can't wait to see what happens next...

keep up the good work and continue soon...

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Posted: 9 years ago
#35
Aww such cute update.
Waiting for manan face off.

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Posted: 9 years ago
#36
Seriously loved it.
And please wanna see jealous manik.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hii pragya... Wow your name is so nice... Thanks for the pm... And i really loved update... Cute baccha... Apne chaachu ka full on mazak udaa rahe hai...manik is so lost ki sirf hmm karte jaa rahe hai...hehehe... I was right... Sameer is cabir's son...full carbon copy... Omg madhubala's son too... This is unexpected... Hehehe...enjoy your KISS...part was cute...not fair cliff hanger pe chor kar chale gaye...continue soonish na can't wait more... Take care stay blessed
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38
Hahaha... sameer is so sweet...
Amazing update...
Cont soon...

LOVE,
AAROHI...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39
Awesome update waiting for manans meet
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Posted: 9 years ago
#40
Yea wont mind
its totally okay
m 24/7 on if :-Ptoh no.need to send pm
but i wanted this part manan wala
it ws nice bt
manan chahiye
waiting fr nxt part
takrcare

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