Hi,
Friends
Today I am just listening Jalte Diya song from Prem Ratan dhan payo.
Then I have an idea writing MaNan Story on Rajshree Stlye.
So me & my Friend Stuti just trying to write it. It's 2shot
and its basis on old concept
their are some oldd concepts which we love alot
like
kkkg
and hum sath sath hai
so basically its an full family drama OS
njoy
It's Also for gift for u all on our SRK b'day hope u all Like it.
MaNan : Pyaar Ek Intezaar
Palke bichaye intezaar kar rahe hai jinki Barsho se
Haar raat Didar karte hai jinhe sapno mai
Aaj ai hai o ghari unse rubaru hone ki
Par hal y dil baya karu kaise unsse
nandini stop blushing girl
if someone will see you like thi naa
toh will pakka tease you
Nandini murmers to herself
while looking into the mirror
navya:omg nandu shadi hmari hai and gaal lal lal tumhare ho rahe hai
nandu:kya bhabhi aap bhi
navya:haa haa hume pta hai
kiske baare mein soch ke tumhare gaal laal ho rhe hai
cabir ji gya hai unhe lene
meanwhile nyonika enters the room
arre tum dono abhi tk yahi ho
chalo only you girls are left for applying mehndi
chalo jaldi
navya:haa mom we are coming
some info (cabir is nandini's big bro
navya is manik's younger sister
both cavya were getting married
manan were engaged in childhood
when manik left India
they had a fight isliye all these 10yrs they didnt hv any type of convo
but yes they both love each other like anything)
(its nandini first karwachauth for manik and today manik will return mumbai)
both the girls were having gala time with alya mukti and everyone but nandini's eyes were stuck on main door
alya mukti navya were dancing
and nandini sitting alone sinked in her own thoughts
Hato main racha liya hai mehndi teri nam ki.
palke jhukake kar rehi hu intezaar teri Didar ki
ab toh aja piya or na sata mujhe
sirf teri hone ki ek hi arzoo hai meri
nandu pov:
kb aange aap manik
kya ab bhi uss bt se woh naraj honge
lekin glti unki bhi thi
all these 10 yrs he nvr contacted me
kahin unhe kisi aur se pyar toh ni hua hga naa
kahin woh mujhe bhool toh ni gye hnge
her thoughts were broken by navya voice
who was calling her for singing
everybody insists her to sing so she started singing
Aaj agar milan ki raat hoti,
Jaane kya baat hoti, toh kya baat hoti
she was singing
as if asking her answere
Sunte hai jab pyar ho toh,
Diye jal utthte hain
Tann mein, mann mein aur nayan mein
Diye jal utthte hain
remembering their childhood
remembering how much she has missed her all these years
Aaja piya aaja, aaja piya aaja ho..
Aaja piya aaja, tere hi tere liye jalte diye
Be- paani tere saaye mein saaye mein
Zindagaani bitaayi tere saaye mein saaye mein
she was just in deep thougts of manik
on the other side
someone plane just landed
the time has now arrived for which he was waiting from so long
cabir:so finally you are here saaleji
manik:apki shaadi ho aur m na aau jijaji
esa ho skta hai
cabir:haa haa pta kiske liye aaya tu
woh bhi badi besabr ho rhi tujhse milne ke liye
even she kept fast for you man
her first karwachauth
manik:chale cabir
and by the way where is abhi n dhruv
didnt they came to pick me up
cabir:aaye hai
they are waiting in the car
parking:
dhruv alya n abhi mukti are married
dhruv:finally man you are here
missed you alot
abhi:scchi bro
they hugged.
manik was on his way to malhotra mansion
when he was imaging nandini everywhere
he started singing
Tu hi tu har jagah, aaj kal kyun hai
Tu hi tu har jagah, aaj kal kyun hai
imagination
nandini sitting on a bike and laughing
Raaste har dafaa, sirf tera pataa
Mujhse pooche bhala kyun hai
Naa main apna raha, naa kisi aur ka
Aisa mere Khuda kyun hai
she is playing with small children
she is eating icecream while licking her fingers
manik is just admiring her
Dheeemi dheemi aanch pe jaise
Dheere dheere jalta hai dil ye,
Beqarari kyun hai ye khumari
Kyun hai awaargi kyun hai har mod par
Naa main apna raha
Naa kisi aur ka
Aisa mere Khuda kyun hai
again he imagins her sitting beside him in car and resting her head on hi shoulder
Tu hi tu har jagah, aaj kal kyun hai
Tu hi tu har jagah, aaj kal kyun hai
Raaste har dafaa, sirf tera pataa
Mujhse pooche bhala kyun hai..
he imagins her dancing in rain
everybody was in puja ghar
doing final aarti before moon thing
except nandini
she is in manan room
(they in childhood only had this room for both of them)
all move towards lawn
everybody was standing in a queue
and in fornt of them their husbands
except for navya alya mukti
a car stops in front of mansion gate
manik got down from the car
and runs
(just like SRK in kkkg)
he reaches in front of manan balcony
when someone shouted
chand nikal aya
khoob tez hawa chalti hai
nandini looks down
their eyes met
but before fireworks happen
nandini hide behind curtains
as soon as nyonika sees manik
she runs to hug him
same with raj (his dad)
navya to runs to hug his bhai
navya:ohh bhai i missed you so much
kse ho aap
manik:i missed you too choti
by time everybody hugs him
but his eyes were searching for nandini
navya notice this
and whispers in his ear
aap jisse dhund rhe ho woh yha ni h
apko pta toh hga woh kha h
manik shyly smiles
he was going towards manan room
when someone ask him where he is going
manik:apne chand se milne
thode der mein milta hoon
everybody laughs on his statement
but nandini who was listening blushes like anything
manik enters in their room
which was lighten only with diyas
both were feeling each other presence
nandini was hiding behind the curtains which were of net
Chand Chupa Badal Mein, Sharma Ke Meri Jaana ,
Seene Se Lag Ja Tu, Balkha Ke Meri Jaana,
Gumsum Sa Hai, Gupchup Sa Hai, Madhosh Hai,
Khamosh Hai, Haan Ye Sama Haan Ye Sama Kuch Aur Hai,
Han Han Han Chand Chupa
she firstly sees moon through that curtain then manik
manik was slowly slowly moving towards nandini
Nazdikiyan Badh Jaane De,
Arre Nahin Baba Nahin, Abhi Nahin Nahin Nahin,
Door Se Hi Tum Jee Bhar Ke Dekho, Tum Hi Kaho Kaise Door Se Dekhoon,
Chaand Ko Jaise Dekhta Chakor Hai,
Aye, Gumsum Sa Hai, Ye Sama Kuch Aur Hai
Ho Ho Ho, Chand Chupa Badal Mein
both were facing eachother
only curtain was between them
manik slowly slowly removes urtain and nandini adjusts sideways
when curtain was fully removed
nandini palms her face
manik removes her hand
nandini closes her eyes
Aanchal Mein Tu Chup Jaane De, Arre Nahin Baba Nahin, Abhi Nahin Nahin Nahin,
Julfon Mein Tum Kho Jaane Do, Arre Nahin Baba Nahin, Abhi Nahin Nahin Nahin,
Pyaar To Naam Hai, Sabra Ka Humdam, Woh Bhala Bolo Kaise Karen Hum,
Sawan Ki Raah Jaise Dekhe Mor Hai,
He Rehne Bhi
both were looking ethernal under moonlight
manik:open your eyes nandu
nandu didnt knw how to react
listening her name after 10 yrs
was bliss
nandini:manik
she took his name like a prayer
both were looking into each others eyes
and coming close
their lips were inches apart
when manik kept his lips on her lips
it was a slow kiss
yet paasionate
manik was bsy with her lower lip toh nandini with his upper lip
after sometime both broke apart
manik:wow
unique way of breaking fast
nandini blushes and hugs him tightly
manik:so you are still the same haan
both were hugging each other
and looking like angels
who came to earth from heaven
meanwhile in a room
phone convo
man:saara intezaam ho gya
good mujhe kal kisi bhi haal mein nandini chahiye
you should do that otherwise you knw me
good
call ends
bass thoda time aur nandini then you will be mine
he laughs evily
so guys here is the 1st part
think what will happen nxt
i knw its a old concept
but we love this concept
Maine do gisi piti shayari bhi likhi hai jhel lena.
Part-2
Adhoori Saans Thi Dhadkan Adhoori Thi Adhooren Hum
Magar Ab Chaand Poora Hain Falak Pe Aur Ab Pooren Hain Ham
[from Fannah]
manik and nandini were lying on couch (just like confession night)
both were happy
feeling each other after 10 yrs
manik:shona
nandini:hmm
manik:tumne mujhe bilkul yaad ni kia na
inn 10 saalo mein ek bhi call ni msg ni
aur toh aur jb m yha 2 baar aya toh tum manglore chali gyi
q
nandini:esa ni h manik
esa ek second ni jb maine apko yaad ni kia
apke bina saans ni le jaati thi
Kaise Bataye inn duriyan kiyaa kai meri haal
haar dhadkan main basa tha terahi nam
Har saans main thi srif teraha hi ehsaas
teri chehre ko niharne ki thi baas ek aas
aaj chand k sath jab nazaro k samne tujhe paya
duniya ki har khushi mujhe mahsus ho gaya
maut bhi aaye abh toh na rahe koi gham.
Teri baho mai baas chute mera akhri dam...[it's my lines]
After listening this manik don't stop him self kiss her lips and ...hehugged her more tightly then they were rested there forehead with each other
Nandini - Manik mujhe himmat nahi hui, aap itta naraz ho gye ki aapne bhi ek br contact ni kia
manik:galti toh tumhari thi naa
m toh sirf tumse woh sunna chahta tha lekin you being stubborn
boli he ni
toh gussa toh ayega na
nandini:manik isme bolne wali kya bt thi apko smjna chahiye naa
manik:har baat smjhi ni jaati kuch baate btani bhi padhti hai
ab toh bol do
i already waited 10 yrs
n agr tumne ab ni bola na toh m phr se london chala jaunga n wapas bhi...
before he completes nandini puts her palm on his mouth
nandini:manik esa mt boliye
m ab apke bina ni reh skti
m he jnti hu yh 10 saal apke bina kaise guzre hai
manik kisses her palm
she removs her palm
manik:toh bol do phr
jo m sunna chahta hoon
before they continue
navya knocks the door
they straightns themselves
navya mukti alya enters the room
navya:bhai agr aapne apni chaand ko dekh liya ho toh
dinner ke liye chaliye
sb wait kr rahe hai
at dining table
everybody was having the dinner
manik was holding nandini's hand under table
all were teasing each other
after dinner
mukti:guys lets play something
alya:no not playing n all
boys will do something for us
cabir:what do you mean
navya:we mean
hmlogo ne aap logo ke liye fast rakha
toh ab apko bhi kuch karna chahiye naa
manik:aur woh kya
mukti:sing for us
dedicate a song to your partner
manik was just admiring nandini
and in trance
he was the 1st one to agree
cabir:ok so dad (nandu's chacha vishwa) aap start kro
(guys we will just write 1 line or 2 of every song)
vishwa: Toh Shanno ji aap ke liye aapki SRK ki song
Tujhe dekha toh yeh jana sanam Pyar hota hai divana sanam Tujhe dekha toh yeh jana sanam ((tujhe dekha toh yeh jana sanam Pyar hota hai divana sanam) - Abb yaha se kaha jaye ham Teree baho me mar jaye ham) - Tujhe dekha toh yeh jana sanam
shanno:Kaiya ji app bhi na
[all r teasing them]
then chachi start singing
Manwa laage.. o manwa laage
Laage re sanware
Laage re sanware
Le khela maine jiya ka, jiya ka, jiya ka
hai daav re
Musaafir hoon main door ka
Deewana hoon main dhoop ka
Mujhe na bhaye.. na bhaye, na bhaye chaanv re
Manwa laage.. o manwa laage
Laage re sanware
Laage re sanware
Le tera hua jiya ka, jiya ka, jiya ka ye gaanv re
Dhruv : raj uncle abhi apki bari hai.
tum sab continue karo mujhe thodi kam hai says Nyonika about to go
then..
raj: Bekarar karke hume yu naa jayiye, aapko hamari kasam laut aayiye
Nyonika stop to Her place.
Navya - Maa aap bhi kuch gayi na papa k liye
Nyonika - start singing..
Meree saanso me too hai samaya, meraa jivan toh hai teraa saya... (2)
Teree puja karu mai toh har dam
Yeh hai tere karam, kabhee khushee kabhee gham
Naa juda honge ham, kabhee khushee kabhee gham...
Nyonika - baccho u all continue hum chalte hai shaadi wala ghar hai bohot kam hai.
[ Then Nyenika, Raj, Chachi and chacha ji chale jate hai.]
cabir: Chalo bhai abhi sirf hum bache hai toh Dhruv teri bari...
Dhruv - Gulaabi aankhen jo teri dekhi
Sharaabi yeh dil ho gayaa
Sambhaalo mujhko o mere yaaron
Sambhalna mushkil ho gayaa
aliya start blushing and starts dancing and singing
Aliya - Bole Chudiyan, Bole Kangna
Haai Main Ho Gayi Teri Saajna
Tere Bin Jiyo Naiyo Lag Da Main Te Margaiya
cabir : abhi tu bhi apni mukti k liye kuch gaa de banta tujhe uski maar se koi nehi bacha sakta.
Abhi- Aankhon ke panno pe
Maine likha tha sau dafaa
Lafzon mein jo ishq tha
Hua naa hothon se bayaan
Khud se naraaz hoon
Kyun be-aawaaz hoon
Meri khamoshiyan hain sazaa
Dil hai yeh sochta
Phir bhi nahi pataa
Kis haq se kahun bataa
Ke Main Hoon Hero Tera (x4)
(Main hoon hero hero tera)
Mukti - O uh ho o o ho..
O uh ho o o ho..
Dil ka dimaag se
Jhagda lagaaya kise
Peechhe ke darwaaze se ae..
Dabe paanv aaya kaise
Thoda sa kameena
Thoda bechara hai
Ishq bhoot sahi par yeh
Bhoot bada hi pyaara hai
Offo! Isey.. isey daant ke bhagaaun
Offo! Ya.. ya seene se lagaaun
Offo! Isey.. isey daant ke bhagaaun
Offo! Ya.. ya seene se lagaaun
Sar pe bithaaun, ya thappad lagaaun
Offo O...
Cabir :so it's meri bari toh Madhubala ji aapke liye kiya gaya jai.
hmmm
Hey surma lagaa ke
Latein uljha ke
Haath jiya pe mal-mal
Tere chhajje ke niche khade hain
Phans gaye jaise dal-dal
Tere chhajje ke niche hi khade hain
Phans gaye jaise dal-dal
Gulabo.. zara itr gira do
Gulabo.. zara itr gira do
Navya- Navya starting her song with her blush
(Yeh ladka hai allah kaisa hai divana Kitna mushkil hai tauba isko samjhana Ke dhire dhire dil bekarar hota hai Hote hote hote, pyar hota hai)
Now its time for our manan. Manik just waiting for this moments...
Manik - Mere Rang Mein Rangne Waali
Pari Ho Ya Ho Pariyon Ki Rani
Ya Ho Meri Prem Kahaani
Mere Savaalon Ka Jawaab Do
Do Na
Mere Rang Mein Rangne Waali
Pari Ho Ya Ho Pariyon Ki Rani
Ya Ho Meri Prem Kahaani
Mere Savaalon Ka Jawaab Do
Do Na
After listening Manik's song nandini close her eyes and take a breath she starts her song or her dil ki baat for Manik
Nandini - I Love You
Kaate Nahi Katate Ye Din Ye Raat
Kehni Thi Tumse Jo Dil Ki Baat
Lo Aaj Main Kehta Hoon I Love You
I Love You, I Love You
I Love You, I Love You
I Love You, I Love You
I Love You, I Love You
Koi Nahi Bas Tum Ho Saath
Kehni Thi Tumse Jo Dil Ki Baat
Koi Nahi Bas Tum Ho Saath
Kehni Thi Tumse Jo Dil Ki Baat
Lo Aaj Main Kehti Hoon I Love You
I Love You, I Love You
I Love You, I Love You
I Love You, I Love You
I Love You, I Love You
manik was on cloud 11 after listening nandini's song
elders were already in their rooms
and as this game was over
everyone else also decided to move
manik was searching for nandini to spend some time
but she was no where
he searched her on terrace his room her room their room
washroom
kitchen
storeroom
hall
now he starts to panic
as she nvr do sch kind of act
in an isolated place
a girl was dressed in a red bridal dress
crying
sitting in a mandap
priest was chanting the mantras
seems like
someone is forcing her for this marriage
she was just crying
priest asked them for pheras
girl was protesting alot
but it seems like boy was in no mood to stop
6 pheras were done
suddenly flung open and enters (my SRK )
matlab manik guys
with cops
girl jerks that boys hand and runs towards her manik
yes the girl was nandini
manik immediately hugs nandini
but after that he punches that boy so harshly that he falls down on the ground with a THUDDD
manik:aryaman how dare you
doing this
that too with my nandini
ab tu soch rha hga nujhe kse pta nandini tre pass kse toh sun
flashback
manik was seaching for nandini
when his eyes fell on a hand band
which was lying on their backyard door
manik immediately recognized that band
coz from childhood
aryaman used to wear that band
and with the help of tracking device i tracked you and see m here
ends
sir le jayiye isse
cops left with aryamann
now it was manik and nandini
nandini was crying n crying
manik kisses her forehead
manik:stop crying baby
m here ssb thk ho gya hai
bs kro
nandini stops crying
manik to make her smile
manik:arre ab to smile kar de
tera hero aa gya hai
nandini fully smiles
nandini:manik I love you
alot
manik:I love you more baby
hamesha
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. . . this musical part Rajshree or yash Raj, dharm production movies ki speciality hai.
Hope u all enjoy full filmy type story.
Edited by Angel_manan - 9 years ago
Shiv Shakti
