MANAN FF== {PHIR LE AAYA DILL} cghapter 7 (page21) - Page 7

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Posted: 9 years ago
#61
tnx u...finally u update it...plz manan ka beache jo misunderstanding ha wo clear karo...& plz post next part asap..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#62
loved the update
amazing concept
nandini will be maan mother
continue soon
and haan do pm me
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Posted: 9 years ago
#63
Really curious to know why nandini left manik...
Do update soon
Waiting eagerly
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Posted: 9 years ago
#64
Amazing update.
Desperately waiting Nandni's reaction after watching maan beside her.
I can imagine how cute it will be a cute baby with another cute baby sleeping cuddling each other.
How sweet.
Next part soon plz. But this time don't be late plzzz dear.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#65
Nice update...
What happened in d past? Y they both broke up?
Waiting to see Nandini's reaction after seeing maan...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#66
Short ho v lekin plzzz dailyyy update kia karooo plzzz n jaldi jaldi Man n Nandini k attachment karwa dooo then usk Mom patwa looo fir Manan k accidental unwilling romance dikhaooo plzzz plzzz
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Posted: 9 years ago
#67
dude i love your story and the plot you have chosen is very hatke!

please do update regularly and give longer updates at times! 😊


your story is very awesome. please update and give a proper closure!

eagerly waiting for the next part! 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#68
Unique concept
Beautiful story plz update soon
Eagerly waiting for next part
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Posted: 9 years ago
#69
CHAPTER 5B
NANDINI'S POV
It was around 3A.M when I get up from sleep bcz of the voice of a baby who was crying badly and was pulling my hair with his tiny little hands..I opend my eyes slowly just to see from where this sound is coming.Coz as far as I know there No baby in my house...When I see the room!! oh shit yea kis ka ghar hai? mai yeaha kaise aye? mujha kon laaya yaha? so many qus hitted on my mind..But then I saw big photo of manik with a baby..Ok,that means this is manik's home..But how do I came here! but before I culd think anything more again that baby's voice..Oh crap! that baby is beside me...when I saw the baby oh my god! he is so cute.he is so adorable I just couldn't stop myself to take him on my lap..But what is this hes full body is burning! he has a fever..Oh shit! I need to do something..Manik where is he..I started to search for him..There he is,sleeping,how can he sleep like this! he's son is not well nd he is sleeping!! how eresponsible!! But wait where is Naira! she should be here na..Nd beside thise there is not even a single thing or photo of her in this room..Where is she?? anyways Atfirst I have to concentrate on baby.. Baby ka madicines kaha rakha hoga..There it is on the bed side table, I take the mdcns nd feed it to baby..But still baby was crying then I took him on lap and started to walk in the room to make him sleep..After few min I felt like he don't have that much fever right now..Thank god! then me nd baby both sit on the bed nd started to play with each other..We both were so happy on that time that I forgot about everything..I even forgot that I'm in manik's home..and I need to go anyhow before manik wakes up..But I can't left baby alone.I have wake mnik up..Oh god I have to face him again..It's ok..Nandu u can do it..Ye,yes.. "Chalo beta ap k papa k pass chalte hai..Chlo,I take baby with me nd go near to Manik.. And started to call him but how can he wakeup so easily that's why I took a glass of water nd throug it on his face..And yes,he woke up finelly..With a angry face..I nd baby couldn't controll our laugh nd we burst into laughter... " What the hell!! are u mad?? manik get up with a jerk and shout in anger.." ==MANIK'S POV== I wake up with a jerk when nandini through water on my face.. I shouted on her but in the middle I stoped when I saw Maan with her and they both were smilling..They both were looking so adorable together..I felt this is what I wanted since 2years..Maan was looking so happy with her.. But but suddenly I came out of my dream land when I heard her voice... " Wo actually manik,you were sleeping..That's y..I.. Nandini said all this in a low voice.." " Yea right that'S Y you through water on my face..I mean how can u be so dumb..Manik said in a sturn voice." "Listen mr. I have called u zillion times but tum kumbkaran k tarah sou rahe the toh isme mari kaya galti..Nd what kind of dad u are yaha your son is sick nd you r sleeping so peacefully WOW..Nandini said.." "Oh shit! How can I forgot he had fever..Manik take Maan from Nandini and started to cheak his temparature.." "Don't worry he don't have fever now..Maine ussa medicines da dia hain..He is fine now..Nandini said." Manik was very pleased to nandini's concern for Maan..And at the same time he was guilty too bcz the person who took care of his son he showed anger on her with out any reason.. "Thank you..Manik said in a low voice.." "It's ok anything for him..If u don't mind may I ask 1qus? what is his name..I really wanted to know..If you.. Nandini said." "Maan Malhotra.Hes name,Manik said" "Ohh..Nice name..Ammm I think I shold leave..Take care of him..Bye..Bye Maan..Nandini said." "What the f**k!! is she mad!! itne raat ko wo akeli kaise jaa sakti hai..I sould stop her..But I can't stop her directly..need to do something.Soch manik soch..Manik thought.." But before manik do anything Maan started to cry For nandini not to go..He started to jump in manik's lap..Maan was about to fall..But Manik nd Nandini both hold him before fall..And nandini's lips touch with manik's cheak...There eyes met..They both were lost in eachother...Maan is betwen them and was playing with nandini's hair...But there were someone else who was standing infront of door ndwatching this beautiful momemnt very happily..It was Nyonika... " Mujha lagta hai meri vagwan ne meri sun lii unhone kisiko veej diya mere Maan aur Manik ka zindegi mai ujaala varne..Noyonika thought that nd left from there bcz she don't wnted to ruin this momemnt.."
Edited by FarialoveManan - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#70
loved it
awesome update
loved nandini's care for maan
continue soon and haan do pm me

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