MANAN FF== {PHIR LE AAYA DILL} cghapter 7 (page21) - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
#31
Nyc concept
Awesome story

Keep writing

Eagerly waiting for the next update

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Posted: 9 years ago
#32
sorry for commenting late
story is very interesting
read all parts in a go
manan already know each other
cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Sorry,Sorry guyzz I know I'm supper late...But what do I do Frnds. I was feeling very low..because my boyfriend cheated me...that's why I was bezy in cursing him..Sala..Mujha dhoka diya...Upps sry...!!Anyways you guyz enjoy this part..And plz plz share your views...

CHAPTER 3B

Nandini's pov

I was so nervouse that was sewating very badly so I thought to have some sofdrinks then I go to the counter and ordered a juice but when harshad is around me how can I live in peace phir se aagaya mujha tortucher karne oh god!
HAR: hey,nandu..drink lane aaye ho?
NAN: tumse matlab!
HAR: ok,chill..I'll bring that to u..Juice or bear? UPPS! sory I forgot tum to bear nahi peeti ho..it's ok u wait here mai juice lake aata hu.
NAN: thanks,
pata nahi isse mere waiter banna mai itna intrest kyun hai..whatever.mujha bass jaldi se iss party se nikalna hai mai manik k samne aur nahi reh sakti.
HAR: here is ur juice.,
NAN: thanks.
Manik's Pov
I know after that dance my friends will,come and shower their ques on e..And here it stats. ALIYA: mnik,u were dancing wd nandini like srsly!! CABIR: yea,,and that to soo closely!![ cabir said this in a naughty way and manik gives him a glare] DHRUV: manik,,did u forgive nandini?? MANIK: noo guyz.. nothing like that...wo to bass pata nahi kaise hoo gaya. I don't know... MUKTI: Acha its ok hoo jata hai...choro yea sab ghar chale??MANIK: yeaa bohoot late ho gaya hai...lets go guyz. they were about to leave but suddenly manik's eyes fell on Harshad..He was mixeing somthing in some once juice..Manik was waiting to see that for whom he is taking that drink... Manik's pov I was waiting to se that whose drink has spiked that jerk. But when i saw that he gives that glass to nandini..I was shoked!!I was just wanted to kill that jerk right there only...I was going to stop nandini not to drink that..But my friends came..Again..CABIR: manik khara kaya hai,,chall na... MNIK: wo guyzz mujha kuch kam hai tum log jao. mai sabko bolke aata hu..u guyzz go dont worry..CABIR: r u sure? MANIK: yea yea!! CABIR: ok... I sigh a relife bcz finelly they have gone..I turn to see nandini but But I was late she had already drunk that juice..and she was not able to stand on her feet.. and harshad was trying to hold her in wrong way...But I can't let this happend...she was about to fall but I rush to hold her before harshad.. Writters Pov:- When we love some one truely We can never forgot that person..No matter how wrong that person has done with us...whenever we see that person is suffering we just go and try to rescue that person from trouble.. No matter how many time u say yourself that u hate him/her...because only your heart knows that how much you love him/her...Nandini was about to fell and harshad was trying to hold her but before that manik caught her by weast...Maniks one hand is on nandinis weast and other hand is on harshads coller..Manik looked at harshad in blood red angry eyes...don't you dare to touch her or else I will break your boons...manik said to harshad..HAR: hey dude,,relex!! why so serious!! look.she is drunk..so give her to me...I'll drop her home..Come nandini... NAN: noo!! I don't wanted to go with you..tum gande ho...I don't like u..I like manik...Mujha manik k sath jana hai... ( Nandini said this in a childish tone) MANIK: sunliya tune now go...or else mai sabko baata dunga that you spiked her drink..HAR: listen bro..agar tu chahe to we both can.. (but before he can complete manik gave him a tight punch on his face...) MANIK: how dare u!! I'm telling u..Don't push me to the level where I don't wanna go..AND I'm sure you dont wanna see that Monster's face...So u better back of... Harshad looked at manik angryly and said tujha to mai dakhlunga Manik Malhotra yea tune acha nahi kiya..And he left after saying this..NAN: yeaa...manik na devil ko vaaga diya yeaaa!!! ( nandini was clapping and jumping like a baby) MANIK: nandu chup! sab dakhange to kaya sochange...!! let's go from here..- Pheww...finelly finish...ok I'm done.. Now aap log bohot sara like coment kar do.. Kyunki mere tute hua dill ko srif app logo ki bohot sare like cmnt heee jor sakti hai..Hehe bye..
Edited by FarialoveManan - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34
plz update kitne din ho gaye ap ne update nh kiya

Originally posted by: FarialoveManan

PART 3A

Cabir: What was that guyz vo nandini thi na nd she is an actress
Aliya: yaa vo actress kaise ban gaye wo mujse better dikhti hai kaya
Mukti: kaya alia kaise baat kar rahi hai bad news to yea hai we sung for her film!
Dhruv: yea hume kuch pata bhi nahi tha or else we will never sing for that...
MANIK: enough yaar kabse ak he nam liya ja rahe ho can we just don't talk about this topic? plz
CABIR: yea sure..let's enjoy the party why we are spoiling r moods.
(Host of d event get in to the stage)
HOST: so ladies n gentlmans good evening we all know why we are here for ofcourse to celebrate our films victry.pls give a hugeround of appluase for full cast dn't u guyz thnk prty is going very borng dn lets do 1thng evrybody pls come on d dnce floor n make d evening more memorable
HAR: come nandini kets dnce
NAN: no,mere mood nahi hai
DRCTR: oh comon nandu jst go n enjoy its your day go go harshad pls take her
harshad nd nandini go into the dancefloor harshad touch nandinis waist nd nandinis hand is in harshads soulder nandini is feeling very unfortable whic was clearly visible on her face Manik's pov: why is this harshad is trying to get cozy wd her if she is not comfortble uss,k face se hi pata chal raha hai..nd nandini wo khud se bhi to boll sakti hai..bt no dumb girl whatever mujha kaya huhMUKTI: guyzz chalo na let's dance.. MANIK: ya ya lets go..hum kyun khare rahenga!! Cabir's pov: aab isse kaya ho gaya itna ajib kyun behav kar raha hai!fab5 go into the dance floor nd saw that nandini is dancing wd harshad ALIYA: may be he is nandinis bf.. MUKTI: yea agta to bahi ai..chaa hume kaya.. manik heard there converstion nd was thinking Manik's pov: kaya aliya sahi to nahi keh rahi hai? is harshad is her bf! bt how she is s unfortble wd him..Arrrgghhh what i m thinking..[ Everybody was dancing nd changing there partners one by one nd the moment comes when nandini an mnik came infrontof eachother after a long time finelly there eyes met) B.G-SONG- kuch khass hai Nandini was about to leave but manik hold her hand nd pull her she bang on manik's arms.. Manik takes nandini's left hand and keep that on his shoulder he hold her waist tightly nd again pull her on him there is not even a single space left betwen them they were close wd eachother very close...That they both was able to hear there heart beat... MANIK: kaya hua mujse nazre mila,ne ki himmat nahi ho rahi hai? NAN: Wo..mai..nahi isa kuch nahi hai.. MANIK: Acha,then why u were leaving?NAN: Wo mai.. nandini was trying to give some excuzed bt manik cut her in the middle.. MANIK: oh.. plz nandini don't give any excuze..say it straightly that tumhare to adat he mujha chor k jane ki..hai na.. After hearing this from manik nandini couldn't stop her nd a drop of tear fall on her cheaks..Manik saw that nd was not able to himself he get close on her cheaks nd suck her tear..Nd nandini closed her eyes.... Manik take his face from her cheaks nd he get close to her lips..Nadini's eyes is still closed.Manik was about to touch her lips but sudenly lights on nd nandini ralize there position nd straighten her self manik also understand the situation and left her waist.. her self They both didn't see at eachothers eyes for once nd walk away in diffrent direction.. Manik pov: oh..God what the hell i was doing..I cant get attract on her agaIn..No,no,...I have to controll myself.. Nandini's pov: Aiyaappaa..Mai yeaa kaya karne ja rahi thi..manik is someones huzband nd i was about to kiss him..How could I!! I need to stay away from him..

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: neku

plz update kitne din ho gaye ap ne update nh kiya

I have updated Chapter 3B in page 5 plz do cheak..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#36
awsm updates
loved it
ty for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37
Amazing
Awesome update
Thnks for pm me
Wowww drunk nandu
Lovd it
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38
Awwwesome Update
I Luved it...



I wasss sooo dying to read this ff n i was waiting waitin n waitin n tumne ajj update kia...whyyy sooo late?????


Plzzz Update fast fast fast...plzzplzzz
Update Dailyyy or atleast Update 3 tyms i a week plzzz
Its new n fresh I luved it
Plzzz Update Next part ASAP plzzz with lots of Manan scenes n Nandu's confesion n Manik's POV...plzzz Update next plzzz


n Plzzz tum IF m Jooo v ffs read karte ho unn pages pe Iss FF ko Promot karooo then only more... readers ll come across it plzzz
Edited by A12609z - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: A12609z

Awwwesome Update
I Luved it...



I wasss sooo dying to read this ff n i was waiting waitin n waitin n tumne ajj update kia...whyyy sooo late?????


Plzzz Update fast fast fast...plzzplzzz
Update Dailyyy or atleast Update 3 tyms i a week plzzz
Its new n fresh I luved it
Plzzz Update Next part ASAP plzzz with lots of Manan scenes n Nandu's confesion n Manik's POV...plzzz Update next plzzz


n Plzzz tum IF m Jooo v ffs read karte ho unn pages pe Iss FF ko Promot karooo then only more... readers ll come across it plzzz



thank u soo much for your sugetion..I will definetly do it..And I'll try my best to update next part as soon as possible..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Please yaar update eagerly waiting for it.pretty please really looking forward to it.if possible update it daily.😊😛😉

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