TERE MERE DARMIYAAN(CHAP 27 PAGE NO.166 on 6/3) - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
#11
Awwwesome
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Update Chapters ASAP
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Don't Stop plzzz
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Posted: 9 years ago
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IMPORTANT NOTE:

I change my my story little bit. it was not dhruv who left nandu but its aryamaan who left nandu on marriage. bcoz its good for my story line I hope you guys understand. I will update chareacter sketch and chap 1 also.

hey guys I know you all are waiting for my updates I will update tonight 2 stories..

love you all
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting.
Thanks for the note.
Hope you continue soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Waiting for update..
When will u post plz.. tell... n do pm for next update...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#15
The concept of story sounds interesting...
Want to read more, update soon
You are an amazing writer, I just read your 3 stories today and loved all of them... Seriously all 3 stories have such an interesting and attractive concept... Hope you will continue soon...
Waiting eagerly...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#16

CHARACTER SKETCH:

MANIK MALHOTRA: A 29 yrs old no.1 business man of India very rude, arrogant, short tempered and very aggressive person. He hates relationship. He loves his family and friends so much.

NANDINI MURTHY: A 21 yrs old girl. She is Simple and very calm girl. She is sister of leading business RISHABH MURTHY. She is very traditional girl.

ARYAMAAN MALHOTRA: Brother of Manik Malhotra. He loves music a lot nothing else and loves his family a lot. He is Friend of Nandini Murthy and fab5.

CABIR DHAWAN: Best friend of Manik Malhotra. He loves Nandini a lot like his sister. He loves his wife Navya. He is Business partner with Manik.

ARYAN AND NYONIKA MALHOTRA: parents of Manik and Aryamaan.

MUKTI AND ABHIMANYU engaged with each other. DHRUV AND ALIYA also engaged with each other.

RISHABH MURTHY: He is brother of Nandini loves his sister so much. Rishabh always loves her like a daughter and pampered her like a princess.

Other members I will revealed in between my story.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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CHAP 1:

Nandini woke up due to constant buzz of her phone. She woke up and picks her phone. It was from her Brother. Nandini saw manik was sleeping so she went to the balcony. "Good morning bhai kaise ho aap?" Nandini tried to speak in cheerful voice. "nandu beta tere bina morning good kaise ho skta hai? Kaisa hai mera baccha?" Rishabh asked her and Nandini wiped her tears and she said "bhai I am fine. Main thik hoon, aur main happy hoon bhai don't worry aur bhabhi ka khayal rakhna bhai main phone rakhti hoon bhai." And she cut her call.

Nandini came to her room and saw Manik was still sleeping. Nandini went to bathroom and wear a yellow ananrkali and she was drying her hair and manik woke up and saw her and went to bathroom. Nandini was arranging his bed and manik came from bathroom and threw his wet towel on the bed and threw her all dresses in the room. Nandini saw this and picked her all dresses and put her all dresses again in cupboard. Nandini was about to go but manik clutch her dupatta and pulled her with a jerk and her back banged into his chest. Manik placed her hair on one side and nuzzled his nose in her neck and Nandini clutched her duptta. "What happened biwi? Kya hua darr lag raha hai mujse, haan a6i baat hai aise hi darti rehna because ye to abhi shuruat hai tumhe to puri life bitani hai mere sath" ans he left her with a jerk and went down. Nandini also came down.

"Hi mom and dad good morning" Manik wished his parents and Nandini also wished them and sat on the dining table but manik said "Are Nandini dekho na meri sandwich bikul thandi ho gyi pls aaj muje paratha khana hai garam" but nyonika interrupted him "beta tum to kbhi paratha nhi khate to" but manik again said "are mom to kya hua aaj tak nhi khata tha to go Nandini make paratha for me" Nandini went to kitchen. Nyonika and aryan helplessly looked at each other.

Manik was eating his paratha and he said "mom aaj maine farm house pe party rakhi hai fab 5 navya aur abhi ke liye so aaj raat hum farm house pe rahenge okay mom so dad chale late ho rahe hai aur nandu plz be ready sham ko I will pick you." And Nandini just nodded her head and manik left the house.

IN THE EVENING:

Manik came home and he saw Nandini was ready in black sari. She was reading magazine. He came in his room and saw his clothes were kept on the couch but he throw them away and came down and left with Nandini for party. Manik parked his car in front of farm house and both get down from car manik stand near her and clutched her waist and pulled her towards him and both went in to the hall. Fab5 ,navya and abhi were already present there. Everyone went towards them and wished them and hugged them cabir and abhi kissed her forehead and manik tighten his hold on her waist. Manik joined his friends on the bar and Nandini was talking to girls. manik came and back hugged her and said "oh doll I was missing you come with me na" everyone was watching him and they knew that manik was upto something. Manik dragged her towards bar and said "come on nandu drink banao sab ke liye chalo" everyone was shocked and cabir said "manik stop it what are you saying do you have any idea?" manik was about to say something but Nandini take glasses and make drink for everyone and served to his friends. Cabir, abhi and dhruv left the bar without saying anything.

After sometime everyone were sitting on the dining table Nandini was sitting near manik. Servant was about to served the food but manik stop him and he said "Nandini sab ko serve karegi , pata hai she loved it usse bahot pasand hai ye sab karna hai na jaan come on sab wait kar rahe hai" Nandini was about to get up but abhi held her hand and said " are manik rehne dena hum khud sab serve kar lenge hai na cabir?" and everyone nodded their head in yes.

"come on yaar abhi tum manik Malhotra ke party mein aaye ho aur mein tumhe khud serve doon nhi..!!haina nandu..bolo apne bhai ko k tum serve karogi." Manik said and Nandini nodded her head in yes and served everyone.

Nandini was eating and manik said "sorry doll can you please pass the daal?" and Nandini served him daal and he intentionally pour daal on his shoes and said "tch..tch..tch.." everyone was looking at him very confusingly and he showed his shoes and said "ab kya karoon mere shoes gande ho gaye ab koi servant bhi to nhi hai yahan pr shit.." and he looked at Nandini. Everyone was staring at him and manik said to Nandini " nandu sorry yaar pls mera shoes saaf kr do warna you know ganda ho jayega" Nandini was just looking at him in disbelief. "come on what are you waiting for?" manik said in high pitch and Nandini grabbed a tissue. cabir was about to stop him but navya held his hand and nodded her head in no.

Nandini kneeled down in front of him and wiped his shoes with the tissue. Everyone was looking at each other helplessly. Nandini wiped his shoes and again sat on the dining table. Everyone was quiet only manik was happy. Manik took forward steps towards Nandini and Nandini took backwards steps. Manik again took steps forwards but Nandini hit the table manik dangerously came near her and asked "thak gyi ho?" and playing with her hair. Everyone noticed this and went near them. Nandini said "no". manik again asked her "thak gyi ho yaa nahin?" and traced his fingers on her arms. Nandini again said "no". manik again asked her "thak gy ho yaan nhi?" and this time Nandini said "yes, haan..main thak gyi hoon" and manik smirked evilly and left the place and came with wine.

Manik pour wine in a glass and said "ye lo Nandini ye energy drink hai tumhe energy milegi tum thak gyi ho na come on drink this" and Nandini pushed glass away "manik aapko pata hai main drink nhi krti plz" this time all his friends tried to stop him but how someone can stop a monster? But manik was forcefully trying her to drink Nandini pushed him away and ran from there cabir also ran behind him and manik throw the glass on the floor.

Nandini was crying and cabir placed his hand on her shoulder Nandini saw him and hugged him tightly and cabir was patting her head. After sometime Nandini calm down and broke the hug and cabir said "main kal hi ye sab Rishabh ko aur uncle aunty ko bataunga." But Nandini stopped him and said "no bhai aapko meri kasam hai agar aapne kisi ko ku6 bhi bataya to aur aap fab5 aur navya aur abhi bhai sab ko stop karnge k wo bhi ku6 na bole, manik is my husband jaise bhi he chose me unhone haan boli mujse shadi krne liye us ladki se jisse uska bhai shadi ke din 6od ke chala gya tha is liye muje to thankful hona chahiye manik ka aur iske baad wo jaise bhi behave kre I will tolerate it plz bhai aap ko meri kasam hai" and again hugged him manik saw this and without saying anything he pulled her from cabir pushed her in the car and came to his home.

Manik came in his room and throw his blazer on the floor and Nandini went in the bathroom. When she came out she saw that manik was sleeping on the bed she took of his shoes and covered him with comforter and she slept on the couch.

SO TELL ME HOW'S IT???

SORRY FOR LATE UPDATE GUYS REALLY VERY SORRY...

VERY SOON YOU CAME TO KNOW THAT WHY NANDINI IS BEHAVING LIKE THIS AND WHY MANIK IS TREATING HER LIKE THAT?

DO LIKE AND COMMENT...

I WILL ALSO UPDATE MY TWO OTHER STORIES SORRY FOR LATE UPDATE GUYS BUT I WAS STUCK IN MY WORK BUT NOW I AM FREE I WILL UPDATE REGULARLY...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update manik will soon fall in love with her hatred n anger is first step of love. Glad that fab5 n abhi r supporting her. Can't wait to read next part update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#19
Awesome work dear...
Loved the monster manik...
Aryaman left her on the day of their marriage...
Loved the fact that fab5 and abhi accepts her...
Cabini was awesome...
I guess manik loves nandu and he is hurt dat she cried for arya makes him angry...
I dont know...maybe I am wrong...
I am very poor in this business..

Anyways continue soon
And cn u tell abt ur other stories plz...wanna read them too...


LOVE
SANJANA
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Posted: 9 years ago
#20
A very good start.
Monster manik is torturing nandini very badly
I really pity her.
Waiting to know the cause.
Eagerly anticipating an interesting turn where Monster becomes a Romeo.
Glad to know that you'll update regularly.
Keep up your good work.
Waiting for the next part.

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