NEW SS:THE HATE STORY By Mawara And Rits Link To Thread2/PG144/20-11 - Page 10

Clapping. ...
u both did a really grt job. ...
kasam se it was vety very good...
d story is gonna b really amazing... I can already guess it...
d chapter was very impressive. ...
seriously. ...
writing dark is not at all easy especially while writing manan...
but d chapter was really very good. ..
thier frst kids.. n the darkness in manik's character. ...
manik calling nandini sl*t... n d bomb. ... nandini lvs manik...
all was well worth reading...
waiting for d next update

keep writing
continue soon
Avneet. ... (Avi)

Hieee awsm start... something new i like it... Now that was something unexpected Manik ka behaviour towards Nandini... I just can't see him like this b'coz romance ki adat ho gayi hai... so its Aliya jiski vajah se Manik hurt hai... poor Nandu bechari ko muft me itna sunana pada & that kiss OMG how can he... how can Manik use such words for Nandu I know he is hurt n will regret one day... ohhh so Nandu loves Manik... feeling bad for her... love the concept... would love to read more interesting storyline... Ritu Di & Mawara amazing job... no more words... love you both bohot sara... waiting for next update soon... ok... bye...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Nice and interesting
Manik is too much monster type
And Nandu is too much sweet.
Manik is hurt and Nandu is going to heal
And u know I'm waiting for next dhamake wala update
Becoz its so thrilling
Thanks for pm
Come back soon

Congratulations to both of you for collaboration and Thankyou for putting g so much of efforts to give us a wonderful story !

Omg
This was amazing
U guys are superb writers
Stay blessed
Take care
Do continue soon
M waiting...

Awesome updates...your efforts can be clearly seen...suspense aliya ne kya kiya??????? ...and now abb nandu... what she will do????? Can't wait... update soon.

Wohhh dis is awsmeee...

Oh gosh that I'd seriously awesome
I loved the story
Nandi is always accused for nothing
Hope Manik let her heal him


God bless uh both
Loads f love
Please update soon

Awesome start 👏👏👏...