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qamarkhan87

@qamarkhan87

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#191

Nice update

Loved manans bond

Waiting for nxt

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kyy_lover

@kyy_lover

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#192

I really love the way the story is going :DDD
Awesome job you are doing :)
but a small question when will you update your other story ?! The Greek God ??
please can you update that also ?

Edited by kyy_lover - 9 years ago

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Lizbeth

@Lizbeth

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#193

Awww am in soo mch luv wid ds manan. Totally different.. Manik, hez sooo cute n nandini toh bold..

D stry z goin slow, nd i evn undrstnd ki its needed.. V ll wait fr manan scenes lyk u knw, serious wala.. Dont mke us wait fr too lng.. Thnks fr d pm

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shoana

@shoana

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#194

superb update..👏
i'm really liking manik's character...
though he is cool and calm but is very matured...😳
loved the way how he controlled nandini's anger and made her calm
manik is scared of nandu's father😉🤣
their bond is sooo adorable...nandini fought with her own father for manik 😲
the promise part was really heart touching
continue soon
and thanks for pm..⭐️
thanks for long update too😊
if aryamann will be the one who will act as love guru..than i don't have any problem with him😉😆
let nandu fall for him...
but at the end we will be getting manan only😉

Edited by shoana - 9 years ago

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Sid

@BrightNSparkle

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#195

You have captured all the human emotions so effortlessly

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All their conversation... Were very brilliant... Their love for each other even Nandini and her dads was very nice...

Its nice she can't take any words about Manik even of it was his dad... She was this from the beginning atom bomb proved...

Oh that poor dog who has grown old now... Vijay his description very nice...

Everything was very well penned...

Thanks for this wonderful update...

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Cooldude101

@Cooldude101

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#196

I truly feel for Nandini in this story.
She is stuck between a society which is so full of bullshit.
Her family is so dysfunctional.
And she only has one person in her life to set it straight, Manik.
I really want it all to be solved soon, just for her.
She has had her share of bad times now its time for the good ones which should last forever.
I love your work. There are no two ways about it.

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Tammy18

@Tammy18

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#197

Oh my gosh.. another fabulous episode of ur story..

Lov this kickass bold nandu..

Manik is mature guy here..

So dey gonna do som dubmash

I actually lov manan relation ovr here.. dey r lyk true companions.. together through thick n thin..

Yr u weave words lyk magic.. frm evry dialogue to d reactions to d reasons.. its ol vry gripping..

Ssly dude u write lyk american sitcoms..

So realistic..so captivating..

Lov ur story..

Waiting fr nxt chap eagerly..

Ty fr pm

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Jyoti

@bhagupur

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#198

Amazing amazing update. .

Appa was quite a strict man..

He did bad with manik. .

I am happy nandni standby him.

Their talk. are amazing intense and hilarious at the

same time.

Very very interesting update.

Stay blessed dear.

Thanks.

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Adeeba

@Aadee04

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#199

Woah
Nandini
Those guts to stand up for your friend .
Kick-ass
😉

And Manik is so cute

😳

I am just wondering how will you shape up the story
So far so fantastic .

Kudos
-God bless