MaNan FF - Heaven DISCONTINUED ON IF - Page 18

Awesome update.

I think i shud just stop giving amy replies anymore coz with every chapter i go speechless
I juts cant think of anything to reply
I actually fall short of words
I've never read a story which seemed to be as realistic as this one when u read it
Its just fantastic,mindblowing,out of the world and what not...
I just luv ur story

i dont lyk arymn flirting with nandini

nyc update..

Heheh Manik freaked out totally
Hope these two understand abt their feelings
I loved the way u portrayed Nandu and Manik
Kudos to u gal
One awesome update

Originally posted by: deepanksha

I think i shud just stop giving amy replies anymore coz with every chapter i go speechless
I juts cant think of anything to reply
I actually fall short of words
I've never read a story which seemed to be as realistic as this one when u read it
Its just fantastic,mindblowing,out of the world and what not...
I just luv ur story

Originally posted by: bhagupur

Amazing awesome update.

Both are in hospital .

I like the way manik behaved to see her in pain

He just freaked out. .aww.

You penned very beautifully.

Every body emotions was amazing.

Very very beautiful chapter.

Always waiting for more.

Please try to update Greek God. ..

Stay blessed dear.

Thanks.

Originally posted by: shoana

awesome update...👏
i didn't liked aryamann in this story as i hought he will be 'kabab me haddi" for manan😉
but today i liked him very much...
loved the way he protected nandini...
there are high chances of nandini falling for him..but please don't do that😉
loved the way manik freaked out seeing nandini😃
they are really true friends can't see each other in pain...
last line was superbbb...
hope they realise their feelings soon😊
thanks for the pm dear...⭐️
plzz try to update greek god also...
and about the story it's really amazing...i liked it from chapter one...and the way it is progressing is little slow but it's nice as we can't just rush it without making any sense
continue the way you are going
and updates are really long...thanks for it😊

Originally posted by: anupandey

i dont lyk arymn flirting with nandini

hw could he huhhh😡

but ya loved the way u wrote

thnk u for pm love u

Originally posted by: Tammy18

nyc update..

i really lyk how u giv space to characters to grow wid the story.. reasons behind their reactions n ol..

loved the update..

waiting fr nxt one

sry fr late comment

thanks fr pm