#3 MANAN FF LOVE IS MY LIFE NOTE & LINK TO THREAD 4 ON 148

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sharon.babu

@sharon.babu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#971

awesome update...

loved it so much...

loved their intense session in their car...

i think the confession will be after their engagement...as both are too stubborn to confess...

the will probably do it together...plan something for the sae day...

can't wait to see what happens next...

keep up the good work and continue soon...

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Waghalekar

@Waghalekar

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Posted: 9 years ago

#972

A very nice update gusse mein bhi kya kyya karte he heheheh but the update was good

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samreen

@Manansamkhan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#973

nice ..

sagayie tho hogie confession ke bad ho yah bina confession ke ..

cont soon..

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nikitanaik96

@nikitanaik96

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Posted: 9 years ago

#974

U r really an amazing writer yaar...srsly nailed it...eagerly waitinv for the confession part...plz update soon..!:)

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assuuu

@assuuu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#975

wen will u update the nxt part

... we r waiting...

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dhillon90

@dhillon90

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Posted: 9 years ago

#976

Wowww awesome
Amazing
Superb
Mindblowing
Fantastic
Wonderful
Super duper jhakaasss update
Donno hi stubborn hai koi phle nhi bolega pr sunna ek dusre se phle chahte hai...hahahahaha manik ne apne sasur ko draa diya...lovd it
Continue soon

Edited by dhillon90 - 9 years ago

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Sakshi_maheta

@Sakshi_maheta

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Posted: 9 years ago

#977

What an update dear😳

So much of romance and aggressive

Love this part very much

Manan fight... Hahaha

Manik is being so naughty

Update soon

Happy Diwali dear

Take care dear😊

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Ammu

@Entwined_Fates

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Posted: 9 years ago

#978

wow sweets.. congratulations in advance for the brand new thread...baby you completed this thread in just 12 days...I'm so happy for you...finally you got what you deserve...happy diwali sweets...I'll next comment in new thread only...ho sake toh plss post 2nd chappy of your another ff... and pm me whenever you post...I'll give my reviews tomorrow or day after tomorrow.. coz I've an imp meeting to attend..so i may be out of town...take care stay blessed

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flo205

@flo205

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Posted: 9 years ago

#979

Congratulations u finished this thread also.
U deserve every bit of it.
I hope u complete many more. 👍🏼

Happy DIWALI 😊

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anumanan

@anumanan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#980

PART 170 :

She beats on his chest continuously fisting her hands while he happily chews her lips smiling

She again and again tries to push him not allowing him to enter inside her mouth but manik being manik slowly inserting his hands inside her top traces her skin lazily with his index finger from her stomach to upwards making her gasp

Taking this as a chance he enters inside her mouth and smiles naughtily while she frowns closing her eyes.

He smiles more hugely seeing her expression and starts playing inside her mouth while she too accepting her defeat responds to him with equal fervour

After a very long time they break the kiss breathing heavily resting their foreheads on each other

She pulls back herself opening her eyes getting reality stuck while he looks her smiling like an idiot

She pouts and tries to push him but he pulls her close with his one hand and madam punishment abi pura nahi hua hain

She looks him confused while he continuous you tho slapped me two times na ummm

She simply once again tries to push him but he once again moves his fingers inside her top making her bite her lips closing her eyes tightly

He looks her intently and the very next second takes her lips into his.

Lost in his touch she responds to him instantly and their tongues soon start fighting dominating each other.

Breathless they both get apart and look each other lovingly

MANIK : one more

Manikkk... and she turns her face blushing

He kisses her cheek and only one

Manikkk please and blushes more and more

"U know na I can never get enough of this" saying this he traces his thumb on her lips passing shiver run down her spine

Maaa...nniii and her lips were once again inside her mouth

After a very good session of biting and chewing they slowly pull back themselves breathing very heavily

MANIK : nandiniii

NANDINI : hmmm

MANIK : hamari sagayi parsu hain

She opens her eyes immediately and looks him while he nods his head innocently

She hits him pouting while he laughs loud happily

Seeing her hands getting tired he slowly moves his hand out from her top and pulls her into his embrace

NANDINI : manikkk

MANIK : shhh

NANDINI : manik tumhara phone

MANIK : bajne do

manik utao and she breaks the hug

yaarrr iss cell ki tho main and stops seeing caller id and then papa

NANDINI : dekh kya rahe ho utao na and before he could accept call cuts off

MANIK : main phirse call kartha hoon

nandu cell starts ringing...

NANDINI : hellooo

MOHAN : nandu manik tumhare sath hi hain na

NANDINI : haan papa wo

MOHAN : tum log jaldi se gar ajao main raj aur reshma ke sath hoon

NANDINI : gar lekin papa wo meeting

MOHAN : wo post pone kardiya maine ab tum log jaldi se yaha ajao moorthy mansion

NANDINI : kya hua papa aap

MOHAN : nandu tum log gar ajao uske baad ham sari bathe karenge

NANDINI : teek hain papa

MANIK : kyaa hua

NANDINI : gar chelo

MANIK : gar par kyu

nandu glares him and then tum itni jaldi bhul gaye

MANIK : kyaa

NANDINI : hamari sagayi...tumne khud thay ki na...

MANIK : arey haan wo and stops making his eyes widened

NANDINI : arey arey kya hua tum gabra kyu rahe ho

MANIK : main maa se kya kahunga maa ko chodo papa se kya kahunga maine tho gusse main

NANDINI : wowww finally haaa

MANIK : listen nandini

NANDINI : mujhe kuch bi sune main interest nahi hain papa ne jaldi ane ko kaha hain tho ab bas chelo

not having any option he sighs and simply starts the car.

MOORTHY MANSION :

MANIK : suno

NANDINI : main tumhari koyi help nahi karne vali hoon jo kuch bi karna hain tum khud karlo

MANIK : arey par listen ohhh madam and she goes inside happily leaving him behind

He follows her and soon they both find raj, rehma and mohan sitting in hall discussing something seriously

Manan exchange looks and go near them

NANDINI : papaaa

Mohan just smiles and turns his gaze immediately

MANIK : maaa

Reshma gets up and nandu tu andar jaa

NANDINI : kya hua maa

RESHMA : kuch nahi tu bas andar jaa

NANDINI : lekin maa

RAJ : beta please bas thodi der ke liye

NANDINI : par

MOHAN : nanduuu

She looks him and he blinks his eyes.

Manan look each other and nandu blinks her eyes to which manik smiles slightly blinking his eyes again.

Nandu leaves giving one last look to raj and reshma while they sit calmly

MANIK : maaa

RESHMA : ye kya sunri hoon main

MANIK : maa wooo

RESHMA : kyaaa sab sach hain

MANIK : woo maa

RESHMA : kyaa maa wooo...wooo maa... aage bol

Raj stands and suno tho tum

RESHMA : aap beech main math boliye

RAJ : rehma

RESHMA : please raj apko sab office main hi bath karna chahiye tha par nahi

RAJ : arey bath karne ka mouka hi nahi mila manik ne tho bas and stops looking manik coldly

RESHMA : chodiye aur manik tu bol kya kehna chahtha hain

Manik remains silent and looks raj and reshma

RAJ : aise chup rahega tho kuch nahi hoga

RESHMA : haan aur shayad office main tho thu chillara tha na phir ab kya hua

Manik takes a deep breath and then maa wo aryaman ke dad nandu aur aryaman ki shadi karvana chahthe the aur

RESHMA : parsu unki sagayi karvane ke liye kahi
Manik nods his head

RESHMA : thooo

MANIK : tho kya nandu ki sagayi uske sath kaise ho sakthi hain isliye

RESHMA : kyu nahi ho sakthi

MANIK : haaa

RESHMA : sagayi...nandu ki sagayi aryaman ke sath kyu nahi ho sakthi hain

MANIK : kyu nahi ho sakthi hain isliye kyu ki and stops in between

RESHMA : kyuki nandu ki sagayi tho tere sath hori hain na parsu hmmm

MANIK : wo maa hamari sagayi

RESHMA : kya hua tune wohi kaha tha na shayad office main

Manik closes his eyes tightly and then taking a deep breath opens them again

He looks them and slowly moving close to them makes them sit on couch

He sits on his knees and takes reshma's right hand and raj's left hand into his hands

He looks them and ye sari bathe karne main zyada acha nahi hoon lekin koshish karunga

He looks mohan who was now wearing a slight smile and then again looking raj and reshma "pehle tho thank you"

Raj and reshma look him confused
While he continuous boli si aur bohuth hi pyari si gudiya ko nandu ko iss duniya main lane ke liye

Raj and reshma look him lovingly while he continuous patha hain jab se vo meri zindagi main dad ki zindagi main ayi hain na thab se hamari sari duniya badal gayi hain

He looks down and I know aap shayad ye keh sakthe hain ki bale hi usne hame kushi di hain hamne usse sirf dukh diya hain

He looks them and am sryyy main kabi nahi chahtha tha ki meri vajah se usse koyi bi dukh pahunche

Jo kuch bi hua na main usse badal nahi saktha aur isliye uske bare main bath bi nahi karna chahtha hoon

He stops for a while and again maa... papa... nandini meri zindagi hain... meri sab kuch hain... main uske bina kuch nahi hoon and making his grip tighter on thier hands aur ye meri zindagi ki sabse badi sach hain...

Main aapko ye vada nahi kar saktha ki uske mere zindagi main ane se usse mushkile nahi hongi lekin main aapko ye vada zarur kar saktha hoon ki usse koyi bi mushkil akele samna nahi karna padega

Chahe koyi bi mushkil kyu na ho main uska sath dunga... hamesha...

Maa main nandu ki shadi kisi aur ke sath hone ki bath mazak main bi nahi sun saktha hoon aur shayad isliye office main gussa hogaya aur papa am sry mujhe bina soche samje sagayi ka faisla and stops and then again kya aap please meri sagayi nandu ke sath karvayenge

RESHMA : nanduuu nanduuu

Manik looks her and kya hua maa

RESHMA : nanduuu

Maaa agar aapko nandu ke liye main teek nahi lagtha hoon tho ham is bare main baad main bath karthe hain lekin aap please nandu ko kuch math kehna

"Agar mujhe nandu ko kuch kehna hotha tho main usse usi din kehthi jis din wo apne hath main anguti pehen kar ayi thi tumhare gar se" says reshma

MANIK : matlab???

Matlab ye ki agar tum ye sari bathe uss din kehthe na jis din pehli baar hamare gar aye the tho thab and stops raj looking manik restless

MANIK : thab

"Thab bi hum haan hi kehthe shayad" says raj and reshma in unison looking manik calmly

Understanding their words manik looks them surprised, shocked and what not while they simply pull him close taking him into bone crashing hug...

Mohan who was controlling himself from a very long time smiles hugely with tears

Reshma breaks the hug and kissing manik forhead lovingly tere alawa mere nandu ke liye koyi aur sahi ho hi nahi saktha hain

Manik kisses her hands and looking raj and reshma thank you..

Ufff finally kaisa laga sach sach bolna kyuki i hate liers hehehe and am sry I'll send pm later wo actually diwali hain na tho busy in work aur haan mera dusra ff bi maine update kardiya hain tho if u can please do check it aur aur aur vaise tho Maine kal hi wish kar diya par asal main diwali aaj hain tho once again wish u all a vey very very happy and safe diwali luv u alot thnx for luving me vaise tho story lamba likthi hoon par asal main kuch bolne ke time pe speechless ho jathi hoon jaise ki ab so isliye kuch zyada nahi kehpaongi thank u bada vala dil se...

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