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anumanan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#821

Originally posted by: Pravallika69
Awww such a jealous Wala n romantic Wala part... Liked the way nandu said UR mine only mine... Awww superb baby.. U always b the best... Continue soon

Thnxx a ton dear...

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Pravallika69

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Posted: 9 years ago

#822

Awww lovely wat a romantic part... Hot sizzling Manik being full to naughty... N loved it wen he said jab door lock nahi tha tabhi itna kuch kar diya n jab door lock kar diya tho how vl I let u go... Lovely n can't wait for next part dear... Update soon

Love you
Pravallika aka PraNi

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anumanan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#823

Originally posted by: Sakshi_maheta
Super Duper romantic Update dear😳😳
I've Goosebumps while reading your story
Each and every part is written so beautifully
Manan romance scenes, their silly fights,
Their family time, Fabe 5 and nandini scenes...
I love is very very much
Your this story is so close to may heart
Love is so much
Keep Writing
Next part update soon
Take care dear😊

Thnxxx alot dear 😊

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anumanan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#824

Originally posted by: Cutegirl_2002
Hey di am back...all the updates were osm...loved them...the way Nandu claimed him as hers...and he returened the favour...ufff...itna hot koi kaise likh sakta hai...hhmmm...di...u again left the update on a nail biting scne...ab mai kya karun...wait nhii ho raha...chlo ab plz jldi se update krna...aur plz reply...bye
Loads of love
Keep smiling
Stay blessed
Manavi

Hey so ur finally back haa gud to know and don't worry I am going to update soon thnx alot luv uu...

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anumanan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#825

PART 168 :

Manik lifts her top and slowly moving his hand inside it near her stomach inserts his index finger inside her belly button.

Nandu pushes him and turns opposite to him breathing heavily while manik being manik pulls her back making her collide with his chest holding her bare stomach.

Her body becomes jelly and not being able to utter a word she closes her eyes tightly breathing more heavily.

He slowly places her hairs towards her right side and nuzzling his nose on her shoulder starts moving his fingers seductively around her belly button encircling it making her shiver like hell

Not being able to control she turns towards him suddenly and slams her lips on his making him startled for sometime.

He soon after realising starts responding to her by biting her upper lip while she busily chews his lips.

He was continously caressing her bare stomach while kissing and as usual getting into naughty mood pinches her belly button making her moan loudly inside his mouth.

He smirks but soon gets shocked feeling her hand inside his shirt just above his pant.

She smiles and while trying to tease him unknowingly brushes her fingers on his lower abdomen making him groan ever so loudly inside her mouth.

Knock knock knock

Both break the kiss breathing heavily taking back their hands and without wasting a second nandu turns opposite to him and walks towards another side of the table while he stands like a blushing statue.

Knock knock knock

Nandu wears her duppatta and stands leaning to table of course facing her back towards him while he slowly takes steps towards door composing himself and opens it.

MOHAN : manikkk

Manik just smiles and simply walks inside again facing his back to mohan not wanting to get caught blushing

Mohan walks inside slowly and acha hua tu bi yahi par hain

Taking a deep breath manik turns towards mohan and nandu too lazily turns towards them.

MOHAN : tum dono ko ek meeting attend karni hogi abi

Manan were looking mohan but were busy thinking something else aur ab kya mujhe bathana padega ki wo log kis bare main sochre the

MOHAN : meeting ek hotel main hain jiska address main tujhe thodi der main forward kar dunga

Manan were still lost which was not got unnoticed by mohan and cough cough

Manan come into senses and simply look down

MOHAN : umm tho teek hain na

Manik just nods while nandu was still looking everywhere except them

Mohan doesn't say anything and walks out smiling

Nandu takes a file and acts busy reading it while he smiles looking her from corner of his eye

He doesn't say anything and walks out simply while she palms her face realising her breath.

MOHAN : cough cough

NANDINI : papaaa

MOHAN : hmmm

NANDINI : kya hua aap vapas kyu aye

MOHAN : wo kuch kehna bul gaya tha

NANDINI : kyaa

Mohan walks towards nandu and yehi ki kaafi acha lagra hai

NANDINI : kyaa papa

MOHAN : ye chamak tha hua tera chehra

NANDINI : papaaa and looks down smiling

He smiles and kissing her temple hugs her

MOHIT : hellooo

Mohan breaks hug

NANDINI : uncle aap ayiye na

MOHIT : am sry if I disturbed you

NANDINI : nahi aisa kuch nahi hain

MOHIT : wo actually kuch bath karni thi thoo

"Aisi kya bath thi bai jo tu mera sham thak intezar nahi kar saka" saying this raj enters

MOHIT : hain ek bath jo main jal se jal tujhse karna chahtha hoon

RAJ : hooo

MANIK : papa

RAJ : agaya tu

MANIK : aap ne bulaya

RAJ : haan wo kuch bath karni thi ek deal ke bare main tujhse aur nandu se isliye tujhe yahi par bulaya

MANIK : hmmm

Manan were looking each other silently from their corner of eyes

MOHIT : raj if you don't mind kya ham bath kar sakthe hain

RAJ : haan bol na kya bath hain

MOHIT : wo darasal mujhe akele main bath karni hain tujhse

MOHAN : raj tum log bath karo main aur manik abi athe hain

RAJ : arey nahi uski zarurath nahi hain

MOHAN : par

RAJ : maine kaha na

Manik slowly walks towards mohan and ye hain kon

MOHAN : aryaman ke dad

MANIK : ooo

RAJ : mohit tu tho jantha hain na main mohan se kuch nahi chupatha hoon aur

Chel kya raha hain bai yaha par and aryaman enters

MOHIT : kuch kaas nahi

ARYAMAN : dad aap yaha achanak mujhe bathaya bi nahi ki aap aare hain

MOHIT : haan wo raj se milne aaya

ARYAMAN : kyu kya bath hain

MOHIT : tu jantha hain

ARYAMAN : main jantha hooo and after sometime daddd pleaseee

RAJ : bai hame koyi batayega ki bath kya hain

MOHIT : wo raj main darasal aryaman aur nandini ke bare main bath karne aaya

Manan immediately look each other

ARYAMAN : dad mujhe aapse bath karni hain

MOHIT : tu jantha hain na raj nandu aur aryaman kitne time se ek sath hain

ARYAMAN : daddd

RAJ : aryaman let me talk to him mohit bath ye hain ki

MOHIT : main jantha hoon ki tujhe iss cheez se problem ho hi nahi sakthi hain kyuki tu bi jantha hain aryaman nandu se kitna pyar kartha hain

Manik closes his eyes tightly fisting his hands

Nandu looks mohan helplessly and he soon jumps into conversation

MOHAN : am sry beech main bolne ke liye par mohit hame sab soch samaj kar faisla lena hoga aur

MOHIT : aur isliye main soch samaj ke hi ye sab kehra hoon

Manik grits his teeth and slowly opening his eyes looks nandu who was already looking him

ARYAMAN : dad aap meri bath suniye

MOHIT : jantha hoon tujhe badi jaldi hain nandu ko hamare gar lane ki par thoda tho sabar rak bath kara hoon na main

Nandu rubs her forhead while manik was staring her without blinking his eyes

RAJ : mohit jaisa tu sochra hain

MOHIT : vaisa hi hoga...mujhe patha tha tu yehi kahega magar phir bi main sari bathe clearly karna chahtha hoon

RAJ : dekh mohit

MOHIT : wo actually hamare pandit ne kaha ki parsu bahuth achi muhurath hain

Everyone look each other talking through their eyes

MOHIT : unhone kaha ki jo log iss muhurath main ek dusre ke sath rehne ka vachan lethe hain wo log zindagi bar ek sath hothe hain

Manik badly wanted to make mohit shut his mouth but nandu was pleading him through her eyes to stay calm

MOHIT : isliye main sochra tha ki agar parsu aryaman aur nandini ki sagayi karva diya jaye tho dono ki aage ki zindagi bohuth achi hogi

Manik nods his head in anger and moves towards mohit but nandu comes in between and uncle ye aap kya kehre hain...sagayi...parsu

MOHIT : I know beta kaafi jaldi hain par kya kare muhurath itna acha hain tho

RAJ : mohit parsu sagayi nahi ho sakthi

MOHIT : dekh tu kisi bi cheez ki tension math le sari thayariya main dekh lunga

MOHAN : mohit ek baar uski bath tho sunle

MOHIT : main jantha hoon mohan use bahuth bade bade kwab hain nandu ki shaadi ko lekar isliye wo mujhe kuch bi karne nahi dega

Manik palms his face trying to control himself while everyone was looking him worriedly

Mohit moves close to nandu and holding her hand pulls her along with him and makes her stand beside aryaman

"Kya lagri hain jodi kisi ki nazar na lage" and smiles hugely

MANIK : enoughhh

Raj and mohan look each other noding their heads while nandu and aryaman close their eyes tightly

Manik walks towards mohit and soon stands between nandu and aryaman

Nandu and aryaman open their eyes

MANIK : khud hi bolne ke alawa kabi kabi dusro ki bath bi sunliya kariye

MOHIT : tum?????

MANIK : manik malhotra

MOHIT : mohan ke bete???

MANIK : mohan ka beta aur uske sath sath raj ka bi

MOHIT : tum aise kyu bath kare ho aur raj ye

MANIK : main jaisa bi bath karu wo meri marzi hain

MOHIT : am sry mohan par tera beta bada hi batameez hain kair jo bi ho mujhe usse kya raj ek kaam karthe hain ham abi nikal the hain aur sagayi ke liye hall book karthe hain

RAJ : mohit nandu aur aryaman ki sagayi nahi ho sakthi hain

MOHIT : dekh mazak math kar

RAJ : main koyi mazak nahi karra hoon mohit

MOHIT : tu na chod and holds nandu hand main jantha hoon tu bi aryaman se pyar karthi hain isliye tujhe gabraneki zarurath nahi hain

NANDINI : uncle main aryaman se

MOHIT : mujhe na bath karke yaha time waste nahi karni hain

RAJ : mohit dekh

MOHIT : aryaman tu nandu ko leke shopping ko ja

ARYAMAN : dadd aap ye

MOHIT : mohan tu na please office ko sambal le vaise bi tera beta tho vapas aya hi am sure tujhe koyi problem nahi hogi

MOHAN : mohit suno tum samaj nahi rahe ho nandu aur aryaman ki sagayi nahi ho sakthi hain

MOHIT : nandini aur aryaman ki sagayi hogi

"nahi nahi nahi...!!!! nahi hogi nandini ki sagayi aryaman ke sath" shouts manik on top if his voice making everyone scared inside as well as outside the cabin

Out of curiosity people slowly peep into cabin trying to listen their conversation

Aryaman slowly goes and closes the door warning everyone to do their work

MOHIT : kuuu kuuu kyuuu

Manik raises his eyebrows while mohit continuous kyu nahi hogi nandini aur aryaman ki sagayi

"Kyuki nandini ki sagayi mere sath hori hain" says manik calmly without any expression

"Aur vo bi parsu hi" and he completes his sentence making everyone present their look him with wide eyes

MANIK : yaha sab thabse aapko yehi bathana chahthe hain par aap kisiki suno tho thab na

MOHIT : jhut bolre ho tum

MANIK : venue ki address forward kar dunga parsu aake dekh lena main jhut bolra hoon ya sach

MOHIT : raj ye

RAJ : mohit main jantha hoon tu nandu ko apne gar lejana chahtha hain usse bahu banakar par hamare hath main thodi na sab hotha hain

MOHIT : tune kabi mana nahi kiya in dono ke rishte ke bare main

RAJ : aur na hi maine haan kaha

Mohit remains silent while raj continues am sry mohit mujhe shayad sab pehle hi batha dena chahiye tha par main tujhe hurt nahi karna chahtha tha isliye jab bi tu nandu aur aryaman ke bare main bath kartha tha main chup rehtha tha lekin shayad meri chupi ka tune galath matlab leliya

MOHIT : nandu aur aryaman ki shadi nahi ho sakthi tho teek hain lekin tu nandu ki sagayi iss batameez ke sath kyu karwa raha hain

RAJ : mohit

MOHIT : nandu iss batameez ki nahi ho sakthi main meri nandu ke liye sabse acha dulha laonga

"nandu ki sagayi tho mere sath hi hogi kyuki wo meri hain aur sirf aur sirf meri" manik confesses and before anyone could say anything continues holding nandu hand "papa sagayi ki sari thayariyan main khud deklunga aap tension math lijiye"

Raj and mohan exchange looks

MANIK : ham meeting ke liye jare hain jaldi vapas ayenge uske baad wo naye deal ke bare discuss karenge

Manik after giving one final glare to mohit simply turns and walks out of cabin along with nandu...

Kaisa laga kaisa laga bolo bolo jaldiii am waiting...

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rimsha01

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Posted: 9 years ago

#826

Bahut acha laga.

Kaise hain aryamann ke Dad. He never lets anyone speak. Leave others he wasnot even listening to his own son and was just continuously blabbering jaise koi train ho.

Nd finally The Volcano named Manik Malhotra erupted.

"nandu ki sagayi tho mere sath hi hogi kyuki wo meri hain aur sirf aur sirf meri" manik confesses.

These lines took my heart away.

Nd manik ka romance to hamesha awesome hota hi hai. What i liked the most was nandu wasnt shy like other times. She too took a step.

Lovely update.

Thankyou Anu. :)

Edited by rimsha01 - 9 years ago

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-angelchandni-

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Posted: 9 years ago

#827

Yeah finally they are getting engaged

Thora sa khatarnak tha par humko chalega humare liye bahut hi acha tha update

Seriously it was awesome update

Thank-you for the pm

Plz Continue soon...😊

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vaishnavi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#828

amazing update
manan romance is awesome
manik finally confessed in front
of everyone that nandu belongs to him
waiting for the engagement update
pls post next part today only
cont soon