MaNan FF - I WILL MAKE YOU MINE U/P CHP 20 20/02 page73 - Page 22

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Posted: 9 years ago
AWESOME promo...
Luved it...
Really lukng forward to the upcoming update...
Plz continue soon...
Take care...
Stay blessed...
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Posted: 9 years ago
WAW its an amazing FF I read it in one go
waiting for your update eagerly😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Hello guys...so here the next chapter...I hope this time I will get some good amount of comments...

Keep smiling <3

Chapter 9(A)

As the trio had pulled their socks up to prepare the SPECIAL date for Dhrulya (or unintentionally for MaNan, matlab MukBir ko pata hai naa bas to unintentionally hi hua na bakiyo ke lie to...:p) and here on the other hand at Aliya's place Muqti had called NavNi too to cheer up Aliya and of course for the evil but cute plan for MaNan...

N - Muqti kya hua? Aliya ese ro kyo rahi hai? Matlab is everything okay?

Na - Haa Muqti tumne hume ese achanak kyo bulwaya? Hum to dar hi gae the...

Mu - yaar guys...I called you too help me not to eat my head more...she had a fight with Dhruv and now is crying kyoki she herself don't know what is happening to her...now please...HELP!!

NavNi exchanged looks and hide their smiles and then looked at Aliya who was still sobbing...and an idea clicked into Nandu's mind and she said faking sadness...

N - Guys,... I too need help...

Mu - ab tujhe ya hua choti? Don't tell me tub hi mera sar khaegi...

N - (Chuckled) nahi yaar Muqu...actually naa mujhe kuch shopping karni thi...you know wedding hai naa ghar mai...(ghar boleto wedding of Dhrulya as she has also gelled up with everyone u know ;)) she winked at MuqNi and they understood what she is tryng to do and ALAS!!! It worked...

A - OMG!...how can I forget that...meri shadi hai and I am here sobbing and sniffing...and hell...look at me man..I am looking like a mess...

And MuqNavNi hide their smiles and said faking panic and agreeing with Aliya..

Mu - haa yaar...mai to kabse yai keh rahi hoo...tu sun hi nahi rahi thi...

Na - Hai Mata Rani...hum bhi bool gae...hume bhi to bahut sare kapde lane hai..aur sirf kapde hi kyo...makeup, accessories, footwear or bhi sara saman...ab kya hoga...

A - Guys...we are going shopping NOW...get up...pull up your socks man...It's my wedding..I have to look best...c'mon get up...

With that all got up and get ready for shopping and some gala time...on the other hand boys were working very hard to think what they should do for making Dhrulya's date special...but Manik and Cabir were thinking something else to...Cabir was thinking about their plan and Manik was thinking about Nandu...he doesn't know why but an urge to see her and to make her feel special after their kiss-miss had developed in him and ALAS!!...an idea struck him and he smirked...and Cabir got his idea to send Manik away so he can execute his plan...

Ca - Aree Manik...

Ma - hmmm (he just hmmed as he was busy in planning something...)

Ca - Aree sun to...

Ma - tu bolega to sununga naa... (he mocked)

Ca - yaar tu na shopping ja na thoda...kuch requirements hai preparation ke lie...

Firstly Manik thought to deny but then he agreed as he also want to buy something... ;)

Ma - fine...laa kya lana hai...

Ca - tu itni jaldi maan gaya?? (he was shocked that how come the shopping hater Manik itni jaldi man gaya...he was planning to manofy him for shopping but he just chucked the thoughts as he was concentrating on his plan but he didn't knew uska plan flop ho jaega.. :P)

Ma - kyo? Nahi manu? (he yelle in irritation)

Hearing their noises Dhruv who was so much engrossed in his planning came out of trance and looked at them in confusion...and asked

D - buddy kya hua? Chilla kyo raha hai?

Ca - aree Dhruv kuch nahi..pata hai na tujhe Manik kesa hai.. (he just eyed manik not say anything now)

Ma - kuch nahi voo voo mai abhi aya...

With that he went out and texted Cabir to text him the materials he want and drove to the shopping mall for his and of course the list Cabir had texted...

On the other hand a tall, handsome and charming guy was working in his office and was thinking about someone...someone he feel for, someone who doesn't give any response to his sweet gestures and always indirectly rejected him and told to be friends only...the guy was none other than Aryaman and of course he was thinking about Nandini as they had not talked from a long time neither they had met as they only met trough Navya as she knew about Aryaman's feelings about Nandu and want Nandu to be happy with him but Nandini never encouraged him nor she showed any interest other than friendship not with him but with any guy she met or is friends with...she never told her reason of avoiding such things and whenever MuqVya confront her she would just shrug off...huhhh...

Aryaman's POV -

Oh god Nandini...why you are doing this to me? Can't you see my feelings? Aren't my gestures telling you? Huhhh...c'mon arya beta...get up,...its lunch time...

With that he got up and went to nearby mall to have his lunch...Aryaman worked in a reputed company as an assistant manager... he has a family but he live alone here, in Mumbai...so he always go to the shopping mall which is at walking distance from his company to have his lunch...his lunch will be like any single dish as he had to have it alone...so he just went...

On the other hand all the girls were just following Aliya as she was going crazy and was going here and there all where to buy her dresses and also dragging them with her...as she have only two days to go for her engagement ceremony...as it has to happen on Sunday as they have decided...it was like she was shopping for her entire life...wandering in a particular shop for a single thing...and this was making Muqti hell annoyed and she glared Nandu and said finally fading up with this nonsense...

Mu - choti kya kia ye...marwa dia naa...uska mood to thik ho gaya but ab mai thik nahi bachungi...my legs hurt man...

Na - haa yaar Muqti hum bhi bahut thak gae hai...ab ya kare...ye to shopping ese kar rahi hai jese wedding nahi puri life ki kar rahi ho...

N - sorry guys...but us time bas yahi sujha...shollyyy... (she said with a crying face and a pout and how can someone resist such a cutie...)

Mu - chal chal..ab don't make such faces...you know we can't be angry with you...

Listening this the trio giggled and heard Aliya calling them for shopping and they started to walk and suddenly BOOM...Nandu kisi se takra gai...guess guess kaun hai??? Nahi aya samajh?? Is bar no Manik...is bari it was Aryaman and when she backed off after rubbing her forehead and looked at the person for sorry she got shocked and MuqVya also get shocked on finding Aryaman here...

Ar - hello ladies...hii Nandini...(he said with a sweet smile)

All replied in unison - hii...

With that he hugged Navya as she is his best friend and shook hand with Muqti and when he turned towards Nandu and forwarded his hand she reculantly gave her hand for the hand shake but to her shock he holded her hand and pecked her knuckles...she was going to faint because of shock...but they all were unknown to the fact that Manik was there too...he came to the mall as that was the best mall in the city and that is why Fab 5 girls were there too but as he entered and was going to the shop his eyes caught the girls and he was about to go towards them and suddenly a guy bumped with his Nandu and he was angry then and their only...he was again going towards them but again that guy's the kiss gestured made him hell angry and he was burning with rage...he decided not to go there and went away...

Manik's POV -

How dare he,...he kissed her hand...I will kill him...how could he...and she allowed? She didn't said anything..but Manik you saw she was not comfortable with him and by the behaviour I guess he was someone close to Navya as they shared a hug...but what the hwll...jab sabhi se hand shake kia to Nandu ko kiss kyo kia..vo kitna shock lag rahi thi...and that moron...how dare he...who the hell he is to kiss my Nandu...don't worry Manik you can rectify his touch by yours...just wait for the night...his heart tried to calm him down but still he was angry...so much angry that he will burn the whole mall but his Nandu is there...he can't hurt her...he just calmed himself down but again his mind started questioning that why he is jealous and why the hell Nandu is HIS? Why she affect him so much and why he wants to do something for her...

His questions will get answered by the time itself...density will play it's card and two broken souls will get their solace very soon...


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Edited by sweetheart2110 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awsmmm

Awsmmm

Awsmmm

Want manan part

Awsmmm writing

Lovely friends

Coun sooon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow wat a amazing update...
Manan nd der r restlessness to meet each other...
Manik planning for nandu... Nd manik's jealousy to c nandu's hand in aryaman nd his kiss to nandu...
Plzzz update new part soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesomee update
Hahahaha aliya ka moid theek ho gea baakio ka off ho gea...jealous manik...lovd it
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
WOW!!!!! JEALOUS MANIK... AB AYEGA MAZA...
PLZ NEXT PART ASAP...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wowww Amazing story beautifully penned each and every word

Just randomly picked ur story and read all ur chapters in one go

must say ur story is sooo interesting

Sooo different concept
Different manan

I would love to see more yr

Do accept my buddy request and plz pm me next part pretty pretty please

With best wishes to your story
Vidhi
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update bas manan jaldi mil Jaye n that aryaman manik should beat him how dare he kiss her waiting for manans date update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nyc update..
Haha nandu ka idea usi pe bhari padh gya...
Aryamans entry is necessary. . I hope manik jealousy mei aa ke confess karde..
Really excited for next
Do update soon
Waiting eagerly
Take care 😊

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