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ruchi116

@ruchi116

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#201

Awesome update just read they have planned something for manan kahi ulta na pad Jaye anyways waiting for next part update soon

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Zoha Sadaqat

@zohasad2.0

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#202

probably some party or date?! whatever it is...really excited

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sosweetsumi

@sosweetsumi

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#203

good one

my evil twins are awesome

please do continue

bye sumi

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reet0143

@reet0143

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#204

awesome promo dear...

and pls don't be disheartened ...it happens sometimes...we are always here for u...

and u r not bad at all...i must say u r a flawless writer dear,,,,,,

and i to love ur ff...i just have one complain k ap bhut late update krte ho...

i know u r busy but pls apna thoda sa precious time hamein bhi de do...

and i want manan romance ...manik ki teasing nandu ki blushing and of'course possessive manik...

because i love it...

ab pls jaldi se update kardo...

and keep in mind that u r the best...

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sweetheart2110

@sweetheart2110

Explorer

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#205

hello guys...didn't expected me so early henna...but kya karu...I got so many complaints that I update so much late so here I am with another PROMO...please don't kill me for this...I know all are waiting for the update but update is quite long to it will take a bit time...I will surely update by tomorrow evening...till then enjoooy the promo and tell me what do you guys think...

keep smiling <3

Manik was thinking about Nandu...he doesn't know why but an urge to see her and to make her feel special after their kiss-miss had developed in him and ALAS!!...an idea struck him and he smirked...and Cabir got his idea to send Manik away so he can execute his plan...

Ca - Aree Manik...

Ma - hmmm (he just hmmed as he was busy in planning something...)

Ca - Aree sun to...

Ma - tu bolega to sununga naa... (he mocked)

Ca - yaar tu na shopping ja na thoda...kuch requirements hai preparation ke lie...

Firstly Manik thought to deny but then he agreed as he also want to buy something... ;)

Ma - fine...laa kya lana hai...

Ca - tu itni jaldi maan gaya?? (he was shocked that how come the shopping hater Manik itni jaldi man gaya...he was planning to manofy him for shopping but he just chucked the thoughts as he was concentrating on his plan but he didn't knew uska plan flop ho jaega.. :P)

Ma - kyo? Nahi manu? (he yelle in irritation)

Hearing their noises Dhruv who was so much engrossed in his planning came out of trance and looked at them in confusion...and asked

D - buddy kya hua? Chilla kyo raha hai?

Ca - aree Dhruv kuch nahi..pata hai na tujhe Manik kesa hai.. (he just eyed manik not say anything now)

Ma - kuch nahi voo voo mai abhi aya...

SO...kya karna chah raha hai Manik? why he want to make Nandu special? Is there any feelings budding between these two souls? if yes then what are the feelings? what will happen...?? to get to know..keep reading and commenting...I won't post if I didn't get comments and likes...it hurts man...thoda to samjho naa...I have more than 50,000 viewers and only few comments...that's not fair...so do hit like and pakka se comment...