Saware~MaNan(His Shared Possession)

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* dancing *

That's all what she wanted to do today . Her heart sang in joy. She had this amazing feeling inside her .

She had never felt so happy or excited before . She did not know why every part of her heart was singing and her body wanted to dance in the tunes of the her heart .

It had been years she had seen him but yet his charm had marked beneath her clothes beneath the fake mask that she was carrying all around .

7 years she had waited for ... 7 years to be in his arms , 7 years to see love for her in his eyes . 7 years to be his completely , only his . May the world say thousands , may hundred feel for her , may million times the fate tried to separate them , she had and always be his .

She did not care all the maidens and all the girls who were after him , who would run after him with varmala in their hands, she knew that he only belonged to her like she only belonged to him .

It was always

~Nandini 's Manik and Manik's Nandini ~

...

Hell !

All day he tried to concentrate on his work only he ended up thinking about the night .

He was so damn annoyed for that feeling ! He did not know what was he feeling but the feeling was a new one . Not actually it was the feeling he had when he had first seen her , seven years ago . The feeling was there inside him but deep down hidden .

Millions girls were after him , thousands he knew , hundreds were on him yet only one , only one girl ruled his hearts . He tried so much , so much to get that girl out of his heart but he failed every time . Even his girlfriends over the past seven years could not take the place of that one girl , who was always his no matter what .

Manik had left her . With him ... Manik left her in his arms ...

This thing always haunted him . Whatever he tried , how much he tried she would always remain his

His shared Possession .

Hope you all like it . Do give yoru opinions on whether I should continue or not .


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Posted: 9 years ago
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interesting. continue soon. Thanks for pm.
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Hey dear
Interesting start
Looking forward to read more
So do continue soon
thanks for the PM and do PM me whenever u update next
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So how do ou get such amazing ideas? I am reading your second work and this seems just as amazing as the one before!
Please continue soon, I love this!
And if possible PM me😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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lovely start dear
continue soon
thanxx for the pm
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I THINK YOU SHOULD CONTINUE THE BOTH... JUST A SUGGESTION KEEP THEM TWO SHOTS OR THREE OR RATHER FOUR... PLEASE TRY TO CONTINUE... LOVED THE BOTH... LOVE YOU...
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looking forward for it dear :)
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Like your prologue. Interesting to see how the story unfold. You should definitely continue. Soon 😛
Thank you n looking forward to it. Please PM me if possible.
Stay blessed!!!!
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Seems really interesting.
I would love to read more.
Please do pm me whenever you update next.

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