Aiyoo Ayyappa- FF- Chapter 23- Updated on Pg 149 - Page 13

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: shoana

amazing story...👏
read all 5 parts in one go
loved cute nandu n manik's convo
manik is not in nandu's list😆
nandini is scared of manik in her dreams too🤣
OMG...she cried for manik...poor soul
manik wants to meet her for accepting her apology😎...have some patience MM😆
thanks for back to back updates
plzz continue soon...


Thanks a lot dear Shoana...I'm happy that U loved the story!😉

Oh yes yes..Manik is not on Nandu's list..Poor Manik😛

Yes...Manik manages to scare Nandini in dreams too!😆

Yes...and Manik wants direct apology! Warna phone pe hi sorry bolke chapter khatm ho jaayega..haina? Phir FF bandh karne padenge! 🤣

Continuing soon...and possibly by tonight!😉😛
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: _Samthanian_

When r u gonna post d next,???
Eagerly waiting...


Hii yaar...possibly within today evening or tonight...or perhaps in a few minutes?? 😆 Watch this space!😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey priya nice updates the story is awesome can you pm me the next time i have send a buddy request
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Posted: 9 years ago

Chapter 6

Fab 5

"She...she is so cute" Manik thought as he opened the car door and sat in the driver's seat. "Her voice so sweet..and her attitudewaala talk, her sobbing over the phone...I really got to meet her. But how? Maine tho bol diye..ke aake milo...magar she is in Chennai. Will she come all the way here to apologize?"😕 Manik thought as he continued to sit on the driver's seat looking into blank space.😆


"Manik...yaar...tu chalayega ke main chalaaoon?" Kabir asked seeing the completely lost Manik.


"But...she did sound like she really wanted to apologize. Tho raasta tho usko hi dhoondna padega..mujh tak pahunchne ke liye..ya phir main Chennai chala jaaaoon?? Magar uska pata bhi tho maloom nahi hai..." Manik continued his musings.


"No...Kabir, tu kyon chalayega...main chalaaoongi..waise bhi ek phone call se Manik aisa ho gaya hai..pata nahi kya chal raha hai iske dimaag main?" Mukti replied moving forward a bit from the back seat and giving a light tap on Manik's cheek. That tap woke Manik up from his dazed mood and he quickly put in the switch key and started the car.😆


"Yaar...tu kaunse duniya main khoya hua hai? Aaj poore din tujhe hi dekh raha tha main" Kabir replied.


"No...nothing...its just...that I was not getting Mr. Williams on phone" Manik made up an excuse.😛


"Ah...the event manager for the show abroad. Did U get his correct number or not?" Alya asked passing her fingers through her shiny hair.


"No...I think...I need to re-check the number..yesterday I dialed up a wrong number".. Manik replied shaking his head a bit wanting to not allow Fab 5 members to notice the change that came over him.


"Haan wrong number dial karne ke baad hi iska aisa haal ho gaya hai. Williams ke jagah pe kisi Lucy se baat karne lag gaye honge aur uske yaad main kho gaya hai" Kabir teased Manik. 😛


"Stop it, Kabir. Manik won't fall for any Lucy" Alya retorted feeling jealous hearing the mention of a girl's name getting connected to Manik.


"Haan haan...Alya...agar Lucy ke nahi tho phir kisi local Nancy ke number lage honge..tabhi tho hamara Manik aisa ban gaya hai...abhi replies bhi nahi de raha hai" Kabir continued with a smile.


"Nothing of the sort, Kabir. Stop teasing, ok??" Manik retorted with a little smile.

"Achcha?? Lucy nahi..Nancy nahi?? Dhruv tho bol raha tha ke koi ladki hai..kaun hai yaar woh?? Bata tho sahi..Dhruv ne bola ke phone pe tu bhadak raha tha kal raat kisi pe." Kabir continued letting Manik know that the story is out.

Manik looked sharply at Dhruv through the rearview mirror. Dhruv looked back at Manik through the rearview mirror with a apologetic expression.


"Koi ladki??? Who is she??" Alya's attention was now all on Manik.


"No Alya...nothing of the sort...its just some girl who I got on a wrong number call" Manik brushed off the question with a light reply.

"No..Manik tell me...what was she speaking? What did she say to upset you?? Who is she?? " Alya raised her voice.

"Ok calm down..Alya..chill yaar" Mukti calmed down Alya. "Its just a wrong number. Don't loose your cool, yaar"


Manik continued driving...but looked at Alya through rear view mirror and she was fuming...fuming with anger. Manik felt restless..."what will happen when Alya comes to know of Nandu? Should I really allow Nandini to meet me? If Alya gets to know...she will be upset that I had such a long conversation with a girl..other than her." Manik thought as he swerved the car into the adjoining street. 😛

Chapter 7 is updated and on ---> pg 23 of this thread

Edited by priakachan - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Oh god
Just read the whole story when I was going to comment you updated the next chappy
It is really fantastic
I just loved it
It looks like a story
Which just started from the wrong call
I am very much in love with this story
Please pm me next time
Continue soon
And ya me first

Love you
Ekta
Edited by manan_eku - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Goshhh... Finally uh posted...
I was just waiting for an update...
Hayeee... Mardala with the update...
But No Nandu and her bubbly talks in the update...
Chal koi ni...
But I need it in next update...
N I liked Cabir's teasing session...
N yeh kyaa Alya ko beech mei kyuu layaa mere Manan ke...
I can file a case against uh for that...
Beware of me...
N I need next part soon...
This time M threatening uh...
Coz there was No manan in the part...
Babyeee ... Cya... stay blessed...
Btw may I get your name...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: priakachan



<font size="3" color="#990000">Hii yaar...possibly within today evening or tonight...or perhaps in a few minutes??😆Watch this space!😛</font>

Its okayyy... uh can give a part now, then a part in evening and after that at night... I wont mind... 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

Thanks a lot, yaar and next part is also updated! Keep reading and commenting!😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: nara26

Hey priya nice updates the story is awesome can you pm me the next time i have send a buddy request


Hey Nara...thanks a lot and I will! My latest update is already up! Do read and comment!😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: manan_eku

Oh god

Just read the whole story when I was going to comment you updated the next chappy
It is really fantastic
I just loved it
It looks like a story
Which just started from the wrong call
I am very much in love with this story
Please pm me next time
Continue soon
And ya me first

Love you
Ekta


Hii Ekta,

Thanks a lot yaar! I'm happy that U loved the story! I will try to continue to update as frequent as I can! Do keep watching this space,

Love you too,
Priya😉

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