Aiyoo Ayyappa- FF- Chapter 23- Updated on Pg 149 - Page 10

nice story
please update soon dear!

I read 3 chapters in a go nd it Ahaaa-mazing ;D ;D
Even though manik is a restless idiot soul .. bt hez cutee! nd nandu super cute!
Milwao bhai dono ko .. ;D dhamaka krwao :D kidding .. .. keep updating aise hi fasty fasty..


-nim

i just came across your story...

Read all the chapters in one go
and its an amazin' story
loving the story very much
u are a briliant writer
waiting for the next part

Originally posted by: Amrafatima

Yup I have enjoyed it too much👏👏

Originally posted by: sws2

This is such a cute story.

Loving this cute innocent Nandu and attitude wala Manik.

hehehe

Thanks for the update.

😊

Originally posted by: _Samthanian_

Goshhh... Amazingly penned it down...
I very mch liked this Nandini who had "Manik ka khoof" 😆
U nailed it...

Originally posted by: Adeebaayub

Okay .. The new story I am getting hooked to .
A phone call and the madness begins. Keep writing
-God bless

Originally posted by: Lovelylav7

This not fair..u updated 3 chapters at a time..u didn't pm me..

Coming to update

.all new 3 chapters r awesome..Ur a good writer darling..keep it up..I'm excited ki nandini will go come n meet manik..Waiting for manan faceoff..

Good morning..priya

Originally posted by: Pagalpinky

This story is super cute

Like that you softened Manik
I was scared he's going to be monsterish

Nandani so cute scared of a ring emotional at him upset
Hehe

Very nice story
Excited to read the next part
This is the first Manik nandani story I read
What an amazing start for me!
Please send me a link to others if you have
Thanks!