Manan ff- Love me Like u do part 4 pg 5 - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
#21
awesome update ...its fun reading ur story ...cont soon..!! 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#22
awesome
manik kya kya krega nandu k liyee
heheheh
nyc one yrr
continue soon :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#23

awesome update...

loved it so much...

loved the innocent nano...her hero tom cruise...amazing...

nandu has a wam and cuddly family that is closely knitted together...

happy to see that everyone is enjoying manik's company and happily accepting him...

can't wait to see what happens next...

keep up the good work and continue soon...

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Posted: 9 years ago
#24
Nyc update
Keep writing

Plz gv updates regularly

Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#25
Its just awsome.
I love the story
And manik awww
Update soon .
Pls PM me pls pls pls pls 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi dear now only saw ur story read all 3parts in one go it is amazing manik to majunu ban gaya nandu ki liye uske gar me shift hoya pls update soon next part pls pm also
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Posted: 9 years ago
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part 4

manan first encounter

nandu place:

n's mom:nandu could u go and pls check on the new guy manik..if he is in the flat or went to bring his stuff

nandu:mom me i cant please im busy studying.. send

abhay

mom:nandu abhay and ur dad went outside on some work..pls ur my cute girl na,he is new to this place so we have help him...ask him if he need anything...go baby

nandu pov:

o god how can i go,i cant face him again and again..my heartbeat raises and i cant control my feelings towards him... mom hw can i explain u..

nandu:ok im going happy manik was in the flat,

he was eagerly waiting for cabir to share his feelings and passion towards nandini which is never happened to him in his past life...

manik was standing near the window and enjoying the cool breeze coming through the window..

.he was lost in the thoughts of nandini... it was around 7clock..and rain was stopped..the weather was so pleasant..

nandu hesistastingly enters maniks flat and calls him

nandu:hello excuse me is someone is there.. no response as u know he was lost in dreams she again calls him

nan:manik...man ik r u there

he comes out of his thoughts and listens the voice and recognises that its nandini... omg she came here...he was so happy and anxious..jumpin g like kid not able to control himself...

he cool downs himself and replies ya im coming wait...he jumps towards her as if school kid do when they see some amazing thing.. both stood face to face and there heartbeats are rising like hell..both were trying to talk but both were stammering.. so now they started communicating with eyes...it was long eyelock... a cool breeze was flowing through them.. a pleasing climate...both were glaring at each other as if they meet after a long long years... but after sometime they both come to senses

..its was akward situation for both of them...to broke this silence...manik started teasing her..

manik:so nandini u bro said u r great fan of tom cruise and u want to marry him

nand:what rubbish i gonna kill my brother and he always speaks stupid things only ...never give that importance to his words.. he always talk stupid things..i just admire tom cruise.. okay what did he say about me other than this...

manik was not hearing anything but just staring at her...her cheeks was red..her eyes were filled with angry and her pink lips were straining ... bcoz she was talking like hell fast...

manik pov:yaar yeh baatein kaarte...hi rahete hain

nan:manik r u listening

man:yes ofcourse.. ur bro said u r good at studies and tum bahut bak bak karte ho..

nan:what..i see him ... suddenly current goes off...nandu was tensed..as it was so dark ...

nan:r u there manik(in tensed voice)

manik understood that she is scared by dark..and replied dont worry nandu im here only..just stand still..i will switch on torch in the cell okay..but he searches for mobile but then he realises that he kept it near the window ...so he moves to bring it..

nan:where r u going leaving me...

man:dont fear im going to bring my cell..just wait ..

manik was moving suddenly something strucks to his leg and trembles ,falls on nandini and both falls on floor but manik catch her tightly so that she cant be hurt by anything.. both were coupling on the floor and accidently manik kisses nandini on her lips..

it was the moment to cherish...both were in a sensual state..both there bodies were touching each others creating warmness in this chilling weather...it was like a fragrance of flowers spread all over the room... like a small raindrop on thirsty flower.. like this kiss... both were relishing the moment...like heaven on earth...

background music: mujhe teri anankhon ki gehrai mein doobne de.. mujhe teri baahon ki jannat mein khone de... tere bina yeh jeewan jaise suna sapna... tera bina tujhko har pal dhundhee yeh dil mera...

both were not in senses.. nandini suddenly realises and tries to getup but she again falls on manik...

manik whispers near her ears r u okay..wait i will help u and stay cool.. he makes her to standup gently and caringly and comforts her.. they both composes themselves.. manik says something to comfort her.. bcoz she was silent.. she was saying nothing... manik understood that she was feeling bad ...

manik:nandini iam extremely sorry,actually it was so dark that i not able see anything...i think u can understrand... she was tensed and she was all sweating as it was merely first time for her..she was not able control her emotions and her eyes was filled with tears... then suddenly current came and manik noticed nandini teary eyes and tears were rolling on her cheeks...he felt very bad..

man: r u okay nandu

nan:ya im okay ... im leaving .. as i came here to ask u if u need any help ...if u want anything just call us...(she said all this in bitter voice)...

manik pov:o god what have i done to her...she never see my face again.. she was worried and she all about to cry... hw can i explain her...

if guys like it then im gonna continue...pls comment... ur comments r precious to me... if guys feels bored with this story ...just comment i will make changes in next part...


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Posted: 9 years ago
#28
All part in one go
Its was super
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29
Very nice story
Plz continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#30
wow
amzing

bt nandini felt bad

she is ryt at her place though

she is soo innocent😳

continue soon :)

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