MANAN FS-Mysterious Kiss LAST PART-114Epilogue-143(Completed)

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shoana

@shoana

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#1031

thanks for early update dear😊
loved the epilogue very muchh...awesome
manik's munchkin😆loved that name😊
and they got engaged
loved manik's pov
got embarrassed in front of his sis😆
thanks for giving epilogue for fs😉
loved whole fs very much
good work dear
keep smiling 😃
and keep entertaining us👍🏼
take care

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Arunima

@jesse93

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#1032

Simply love it,
it was so beautiful.

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sophia

@sophiaclarens97

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#1033

i loved nandu's pov...kavya.epilogue was superb!!!👏.the hide and seek wala thing by mukti was just hilarious one for me😆.nice short wala wala character description for aryamann...true friend...😊.munchkin by manik to nandu was so cute and adorable to read😳.u nicely penned their growing love with time which did betterment in their lives⭐️.the last line by nandu was cherry on top!!! u first attempt was a superb one!!!keep writing like this!!!!😊

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Pragya

@pragyas1192

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#1034

it ws jz perfect dea...

loved ol 3 povs...mukti's wss amzing...

manan's mysterious kiss journey ws beautiful...

lovedd it dear...

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Vandyandy

@Vandyandy

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#1035

Hey Kavya

U nailed it again, so beautiful

Just loved every part of it

Mukti is such a tease

But couldn't they go to a room instead of classroom,Gosh!!!😉

So embarrassing kissing like he will never ever get to kiss her again

That to in college, in front of his sister, awww!!!

What a sweet n different name that Manik had given to nandani

MUNCHKIN 👏 .

Keep writing.

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Nandini_goyal

@Nandini_goyal

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#1036

Mukti's PoV was my favourite
Beautiful story and very nicely written

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smartgirls

@smartgirls

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#1037

Amazing...simple yet beautifully written...yaar yeh itna jaldi kyun khatam hogaya...well loved all three pov...but my fav was manik's pov...keep writing...

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mehak_ahuja

@mehak_ahuja

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#1038

Beyond awesome...

Loved it so so so much... Amazing amazing it was

N multi ka POV was the best coz two things I really like her in every story of urs ... She is usually the best part after manan of course.. N second coz this this the first time I'm reading in her POV...

Thank u for such an amazing journey

Keep writing

Be happy always

Stay blessed

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