#3 Devil's Bride manan ff link of thread 4 on pg 1 - Page 6

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Posted: 9 years ago
#51
Hy guys i know you all are waiting for update desperately bhai thoda patience dete hai but i really wanted to tell you one thing if you are a warm hearted person or you were with me in this journey just for romance or comedy than after two updates you should leave i know i m hurting you but i got a comment
Like i ruined manan's defination
I am good writer but i should stop writing this crap if i dont like manan i m not a manan fan which i know i am
I showed only hatered in all 30 parts

Atlast i will come with that sorry session than boom sb sort out


Well according to me devil's was whole package with each emotion comedy romance and pain hatered to ab ayi hai story me ab tak to yhi sb tha and i m not mentioning her name here i really dont want to bash her and plz listen to me i wont take a single comment against her
I was aware from all this bashing negative and possitive comments are the parts of the story
Har kisi ki apni soch hoti hai and i m glad you feel bad for my characters coz you are attached with them being an writer thats the biggest victory for me
You felt what i want to you to feel that means i was successful to penned it down

And why i am writting this note because what you saw in last update
It was just the glimps of dark parts in upcoming future parts
Some time you will burst into tears
Sometime you will be like we cant take it anymore height of patheticness it is ridiculous
Some time you will bash me for making nandini suffer so much
Some time you will be angry on me for making manik's character like this

Some time you will feel let her died after this he will realise his mistake manik really dont deserve her in his life

Well thats the concept now you understand why this dark zone of story i didnt show you all in past track because i want to keep you away from this dark zone devil's is not a completely dark story but character has different shades like we have in our personal life

There are so many womans who are suffering from this kinda things so its not unrealistic just a bit dark and manik one mere sorry wont be enough i have gradual process for this or if you want sad ending still i am ready for this his deed are unforgotable but i am bound by you all

Devil's bride is based on how a devil turn into a human
What happend when a person whom you love tha most gave you immense pain how it feels
Devil's has only one villain and the villain is manik malhotra so beaware from devil's
I am really not responsible for anything
Still negative comments or bashers most welcome
I wont stop writting this truth you want to leave plz go ahead sorry if its sounds rude but i m helpless in this devil's is for cold heart person who are ready to accept the truth of life
I really dont wants to hurt you but somewhere it hurts me anyways life cant be all time lovey dovey of full happiness sweet bitter things are the part of the story

Some of you are confused was manik wasnt in his senses nope he was yes he was drunk he was aware from all this
Only the thing is ke he wanted to ask her if she dont wants to be with him why she didnt stop him
Hope your all doubts are clear now

And heartly thanks to you for making my journey so beautiful half journey is complete
It was a beautifull journey for me and i couldnt quote you all in last update page are not allowing me so sorry for this
Chlo ab me apni bakbak band karti hu bye bye and one more thing
devil's is on the way beaware from this story and i will update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#52
don't worry dear... kuch toh log kahenge... logon ka kaam h kehna ... so don't take tension... tum bohot acha likhti ho... tumahri story SB se alg h... or hr story mein AGR ek hi concept mile toh dusri story read krne ka kya fayda... hai na?,,, so logo ko chodo... or dil ki suno... and update soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#53
TO BE HONEST,I LUV THIS FF AND MANAN DOES NOT ONLY MEANS BEING HAPPY AND ROMANTIC ALL THE TIME,A REAL MANAN FAN OR SOMETHING CANNOT BE JUDGED ON THE BASIS OF WHAT U WRITE COZ ITS UR IMAGINATION AND MOST IMPORTANTLY ITS JUST A STORY...ITS NOT HAPPENING FOR REAL...UR STORY IS AWESOME
I DONT FIND IT ETHICAL AT ALL WHEN PPL JUDGE UR LIKING TOWARDS A PARTICULAR COUPLE ON THE BASIS OF WHAT U WRITE.
...I LUV UR STORY VERY MUCH AND ITS A VERY DIFFERENT STORY AND M WAITUNG TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS FURTHER
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Posted: 9 years ago
#54
Seriously. ... U r awesome writer... yaaa life is not about romance... n masti..ya fun.. life has dark side too.. n m ready to see.. some love stories. .kayi zone se gujrana pdta h... n I believe in u.. u r just incredible writer.. but plss sad ending nhi ha.. me bhot calmly ye story read karugi.. but I want in end a beautiful happy ending. . n I trust u ... u would do that. ... soo just remember that u r doing great job.. n I luv that. . itss a beautiful. . sooo alwayss write likee this.. waiting for next update eagerly impatiently. ... update soon. . :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-):-) -
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Posted: 9 years ago
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der will be bashers always... dnt wry dr... keep updating story... nd am njoying ur story whole heartedly... sooo keep posting... nd plzz add me... nd cngrts fr ur new thread... bst of luck...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#56
I love all the parts especially 6 7 8 9
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Posted: 9 years ago
#57
This story is very different...it will take time for a devil to turn into human..so in this process there will be many painful incidents...it is obvious..
yes u are true there are many women how are suffereing like nandini...

waiting for next update...😊




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Posted: 9 years ago
#58
Hey Its Ok We Trust You.You're Right Life Is Not About Happiness,Fun & All We Have To Face Up & Downs In Every Stage Of Life,Title Itself tell Us About Story So It Will Be a Bit Dark.A Story Should Have All Types Of Emotions Thats Whats Makes A Perfect Story.And I Like Your Story Because It Have All Types Of Emotions.For Manik Bad Deeds He Should Be Punished He Should Realize His Mistakes But Their Should Be Happy Ending Too.Take Your Time & I Trust You For Good Ending As You Writes Very Well.& About Dark Parts Which Are Coming I'm Excited To Read Them :)
Stay Blessed!!
Edited by M_R3 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#59
kuch bhi karlo bt don't stop...
continue we r with you...
we like it n keep writing for us...
n yeah I m eagerly waiting for next update so plz update soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hey its ok i just luv ur story bas vo comedy kbhi abhi thodi zada dirty hojati hai bt
i dont hv any problemn with d track
yar our lyf is always nt neatiful smtymes white black
grey n m glad u r showing ol dese n diff shades of manik
he always need not be d majnu malhotra
devil malhotra is also imp
n ill always b here suporting u in d story
i simply luv it
n ya plz whnever u reply u my comment if possible pm me as mrko pata hi ni \chaklta :P

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