Originally posted by: arshuaar
awesome...
beautifully written,...
thanx for PM😊
loved all of them...
Manan...
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Originally posted by: arshuaar
awesome...
beautifully written,...
thanx for PM😊
loved all of them...
Manan...
MaNan OS: Manaofying Nandini
"I want to watch that look on your face when you see me..." He said to himself and disconnected Her call. Unaware of the fact that She imagines Him and this time when She will see him in reality, She will ignore Him thinking that she is imagining him.
Fab5 were all set to perform... They went on the stage and they were nervous... nervous because for the first time, they are gonna perform all alone without their Manik and Cabir.. They were sad... They were shattered but they had to do this... This was their Manik's dream... They wished to complete it...
Gosh! How much did they missed them specially Manik... Dhruv and Aliya were guilty for whatever they said and did with Manik... They wanted to apologize once and say "That yes... they do believe in Fab5 and they aare back" but unfortunatly they didn't got that single chance...
Nandini was sitting back stage crying missing Her Manik but she was happy that finally she is able to complete his dream... His dream- Fab5 stays together always... and here it is they are together...
Manik reached the concert... he looked at his watch.. and there was just 5 minutes left for the concert... He quickly ran towards the back stage but what he saw left him shattered... He saw someone else singing at his place and Fab3 were completely enjoying and Nandini was smiling looking at them...
Nandini felt as if Manik is near... She turned around and saw a dejacted Manik standing there... As soon as Manik saw her face, a smile formed on his face and he pulled out his hand towards her but she thought she is again dreaming so she without giving any smile or without saying anything turned around and smiled looking at the performance which again saddened Manik and he felt miserable.
His friends replaced him... His Nandini replaced him with someother guy when he saw her standing with Maddy smiling and thanking him... To which Maddy pulled her in a friendly hug and she too hugged him back...
(Before you all start hitting me with chappals... main pehle hi bata deti hun... Maddy is a nice guy with no attitude problem... In fact he offered his help to sing as his voice could resemble Manik's voice and he was a good friend of all of them now... Maddy was like Nandini's brother now... Please no hard feelings.)
As soon as they hug each other... Manik couldn't control and said "Nandini..." Nandini broke the hug and everyone turned to look at the place from where this jaani pehchaani voice came... It didn't took all of them a second to realize this is their Manik's voice... A small smile crept on all their faces and they all looked at him but Manik... nor he was smiling nor he looked happy...
He looked sad, shattered, miserable and dejected... As soon as Nandini saw him... she smiled and was really happy... and she realised few minutes before she wasn't hallucinating Manik but she really saw him.
She ran to him and was about to touch his cheek when he held her hand and stopped her... she was shocked... There were unshed tears in both of their eyes... Manik couldn't control and tears made their way out of his eyes... he just turned back and walked away to the cab and asked the driver to take him to Malhotra Mansion...
Manik reached Malhotra Mansion and went straight towards his room. Whereas Fab3 and Nandini were shocked to see the way Manik behaved... they were confused... They had questions in their mind but didn't had any sense to ask... they were in shock on seeing Manik whom they thought to be dead...
Nandini was the first one to come out of the shock and decided to go to Malhotra Mansion as she knew Manik would have gone there only... Manik was crying hard sobbing... He was shattered... He was missing Nandini... He couldn't believe Nandini replaced him with some other guy... How could she? At that time he decided... he will forget Nandini and be the old Monster Manik again.
Nandini changed into her jeans and top and left for Malhotra Mansion... She was in the cab when she received a message from Manik's number which left her shock and shattered... "Its all over between us Miss Nandini Moorthy... Manik and Nandini are over... No more stars and fireflies love story... its OVER." Nandini was shocked and tears started flowing down her cheeks.
Paas aaye
Dooriyaan phir bhi kam na huyi
Ek adhoori si hamari kahani rahi
Jaan le jaan le Ishq saccha wahi
Jisko milti nahin manzilein manzilein
Rang thhe noor tha
Jab kareeb tu tha
Ek jannat sa tha yeh jahaan
Manik unpalmed his face and started writing Nandini on the table covered with dust while crying like hell... Here Nandini was moving towards his room slowly trying to digest everything which happened right now...
Waqt ki ret pe kuchh mere naam sa
Likh ke chhod gaya tu kahaan
Manik took his phone and was carressing her pictures in his mobile while crying and sobbing hard... It hurts a lot when you see the one you love in arms of some stranger smiling... and same was with Manik... Nandini reached his room...
Hamari adhoori kahani
Hamari adhoori kahani
Hamari adhoori kahani
Hamari adhoori kahani
Nandini tried opening his room but she realised he had locked the room from inside... She banged the door but he didn't opened the door... "Manik please open the door please" She stammered controlling her tears... Manik was shocked to hear her voice... HE thought is she moved on then why she is crying. He guessed it that she is crying from her tone.
Manik wiped his face and his tears and opened the door just to see a completely broken Nandini in front on his door crying really hard looking at him. Manik hold her shoulders and brought her inside and make her sit on the couch and himself sits on his knees in front of her. Manik was about touch her face when Nandini shooked his hand away and slapped him really hard making him shock.
"Nandini" this was the only word he could utter at that very moment. He was slapped by his love not once but twice.
"What? Kya Nandini haan? How could you just say its all over between us... Huh... How could you? Oh yes! I forgot... You always have to hurt me right? You love watching me breaking down in pieces... How could you say no more stars and fireflies love story? How?" Nandini asked him clutching his shirt collar tightly pulling him closer to him. Manik was speechless... He was confused...
"Nandini... I know our breakup doesn't matters to you. I know you have moved on.." Manik started speaking but before he could complete, Nandini again slapped him tight making him shock again...
"Manik.. you idiot.. Tum aisa soch bhi kaise sakte ho. All the time jab tum yahan nahi the, I was thinking about you... Main paagal ho rahi thi..Sab kehte ki tum kabhi waapis nahi aaoge par mera dil yeh humesha kehta tha ki nhi tum waapis aaoge.. mere lie apni Nandini ke liye apne star keliye apne friends ke lie aur tum soch rahe ho ki I moved on... I started to hallucinate you .. so how can you expect me to react when I saw you in real.. I thought I am again hallucinating you. Aur tum ho ki bina sab kuch jaane hi kehdia its over... How could you? If you really want this to be over.. Then fine... Mr. Manik Malhotra.. Its over between us... MaNan is over.." Nandini said in anger and opened the MaNan bracelet and throwed on his face. She stood up and ran fastly from there leaving a confused, shocked and sad Manik... He understood everything and this time he had really messed it up...
Tears again started flowing from his eyes but he had a big smile... He knew Nandini still loves him... Its not over yet between them... His charm can still manaofy her... This is the time he need to fix this... But first he need to talk to his friends... He now knew if Nandini couldn't move on then his friends would have also missed him...
He send a message in fab 5 group to meet him at his home... He looked around his room... It was dirty... He called kaka and asked him to clean his room... Kaka came and started cleaning his room telling Manik to rest in another room...
After 20 minutes, Fab 3 with Navya and Abir came at Manik's home... though Manik only called Fab 3 but Navya too came to meet Manik...
"MANIK" Dhruv shouted and in the next minute Manik came with a big smile on his face... and All of them smiled... Dhruv went and gave a tight hug to him... Then Mukti and Alya too went and hug them... And Manik took them into the famous Fab 5 hug...
They broke the hug... Navya had tears on seeing him.. Though they fought a lot... but some where deep down Navya found a brother in him and Manik found a sister in her... Manik didn't noticed Abir sittng in his baby pram...
Navya went towards him and forwarded her hand for a handshake but Manik took her in a hug... "I missed you Navya.." "I missed you to Manik"
They broke the hug and that's when Manik noticed Abir... He looked at him and then at Navya.. as if asking if he is her baby... He had few tears in his eyes... Happy tears for his sister... Navya nodded...
Manik went towards the pram and picked up Abir in his arms and kissed his forehead lovingly.. "Abir..." Navya told his name... On listening his name, Manik smiled and he remembered Cabir...
They all spent time when Navya remembered Nandini...She asked about her and Manik got a little sad but he knew this time he really screwed it up and he need to fix it...
He told everyone about what all happened... And in return he got punches and slaps from all of them... And Abir was laughing seeing it while he was in Manik's arms...
After the hitting session Manik told them his plan to manaofy Nandini...
NEXT DAY:~~~~
Manik, Alya, Mukti and Dhruv came together to college with a big smile on their faces though they missed Cabir but they wanted to be happy for him...
Navya too joined them and Manik gave a side hug to her...
They all saw Nandini entering college with a angry sad balloon face... They knew the reason... They looked at Manik who was looking at Nandini sheepishly...
Manik looked at them and signaled them to start the plan...
~~'
Mukti and Dhruv came with the guitars and Alya with the keyboard.. And from somewhere someone entered with his cool personality...wearing neon green shots with white collored shirt with neon green tie... with drum sticks with his hands...
Who could it be...
Our COOL CABIRA... Manik saw him and hugged him... Yes... they both were alive... Manik called everyone there and they were shocked and happy.. all hugged him... Navya had tears in her eyes... She came and hugged Cabir really tight... They broke hug after few minutes and Cabir wiped his tears...
Cabir asked about Nandini... they all pointed towards the table she was sitting angrily.. Manik told about yesterday to Cabir yesterday on call...
All now started with the plan... Guitars... drums... and keyboard started playing behind Nandini... She knew its Manik and Fab5... She was getting irritated but didn't said anything... For a change even Navya was with Fab5 playing keyboard with Alya... Other students started clapping with the sync...
Manik suddenly came from behind Nadini and sang in her ears... This time he wasn't playing guitar but just singing and dancing... He sang widing his eyes cutely...
He pointed towards Nandini's eyes.. and came in front... He started playing with her hairs tangling them... He acted like he is standing below her tearrace... Everyone was enjoying...
Manik did the signature step coming in front of her... Nandini irritatedly turned and started moving... But she stopped in between as she saw Cabir playing drums. She was happy seeing him... Manik took it a chance and again came infront of her...
(Instrumental Break)
Manik acted like he is shooted by the gun of her eyes... He asked her why she trapped him saying all that lies...
Manik did the signature step and now Dhruv Mukti and Navya too joined him... Nandini was smiling inside but gave an angry glare to Manik to which he stopped dancing and smiling...
(Anusha Mani Begins)
Now Alya Mukti and Navya took the lead and came towards Nandini and started dancing and singing trying to make her dance too... Then suddenly Manik came with a big posted of Nandini in his hand and showed her...
(Instrumental Break)
Now again Manik came and said... Nandini was walking...
All were walking besides her pointing at her walk... Suddenly Manik hold her waist and jerked her towards himself and started tracing her face with his finger... Nandini was loosing it but then she pushed him... Manik made a cute angry pout...
Nandini thought its enough of being angry with Manik... So she too sang now... Everyone heard her sing and they jumped and danced happily...
Manik again came from back and sang... He pointed towards Nandini's eyes.. and came in front... He started playing with her hairs tangling them... He acted like he is standing below her tearrace... Everyone was enjoying... Everyone was happy...
Everyone enjoyed... Throwed colour sheets pieces in the air... Manik hold Nandini and pulled her in a hug... She too hugged him happily... Everyone else too hugged them in a group...
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