manan FF linked by destiny part 17 B/pg 139 (23 FEB) - Page 65

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Posted: 9 years ago
too gd update... mujhe pta tha vo manik hi hoga... just too gd... waiting for next part ... update asap
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb update...
Luved it...
Thnx 4 d pm...
Plz continue soon...
Will be waiting anxiously 4 d next update...
Take care...
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Posted: 9 years ago
it was some wht expected while reading ..
waiting for next ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice update...
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Posted: 9 years ago
CHAPTER 16 A

N: manik thum yeha??

M: haa mey toh ek business meeting ke liya ayatha and saw u so stopped

N: haa my mom send me here to meet a guy

M: which guy???

N: vo she has searched a boy for me and send me here to meet him

Manik was shocked as well as sad listening to this.

M: kk meet him and I will leave

He said these words and moved from there dialing the number given by mukti. When he moved he heard nandini phone ringing and he stopped and looked towards her. Nandini took out her phone and was shocked to see manik name flashing on the screen. Nandini looked towards manik and showed him her phone. Now manik was also hell confused how this number gets connected to nandini.

M: yee number kiska hey??

N: mom gave me in the morning because she said that she gave that guy this number.

M: wht??then y did mom gave this number to me and said u r client

N: wht r u saying manik

Both of them were hell confused and were not able to understand anything. Both were looking here and there. They heard some voice

Voice: r u shocked??

Both of them turned back and were shocked to see both families along with Fab 4. Both were shocked to the core.

C: how is the guy that mom selected for u??

N: wht??manik is the boy mom selected

Shilpa: yes beta

Nandini happiness was now no bounds. Her heart was jumping in joy.

C: agar thum kal raat photo deka hotha toh thumko kal raat hi pata hota

M: please can anyone explain me in a proper way

D: wait I will tell nandini parents have decided nandini to get married and the guy they selected was u only

N: but how did this happen

Ny: nandu beta thumari parents humara business partners hey London mey

N: hoo lekin yeh idea kaise aya

Ny: yeh toh mera idea hey

M: wht?? Mom thumara plan

Ny: yes beta

M: then say y u did this

Ny: when I went to London 2 months ago I came to know that nandini is daughter of shilpa and viren then I thought that I will ask them about ur marriage and here we are standing infront of u

M: aur thum sab ko kaise pata??

He asked pointing towards fab4

C: maa showed me the pic of the boy yesterday




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FLASHBACK

C: maa yeh toh manik hey

Shilpa: yes cabir we think he is perfect for nandu

Cabir becomes more than happy to listen to this. He hugged both her maa and papa together.

C: maa tujhe pata hey ki nandu is in love

Shilpa: wht?? Then wht will I tell to neyonika??

She was walking to and fro in the hall but was stopped between by cabir words.

C: she loves manik

Shilpa: cabir beta wht u said is right na

C: haa mom and even u know manik too loves her but they didn't propose because they are afraid of losing their friendship

Shilpa: then lets surprise them tomorrow

Neyonika called at that time and shilpa tells her that nandini loves manik and neyonika feels happy and agrees for the plan to surprise them. After that cabir went and talked to nandini and went to his room. He took out his phone and got all his friends in conference call except manan.

C: guys nandini marriage is fixed

All: WHAT

C: yeah mom told me just now

A: but wht about manik

Mu: bhai loves her very much

C: voi mera sheer mukti meri baat to sunlo pehle

Mu: say fastly na

C: and that guy is none other than manik only

All: WHAT

C: yeah even I was shocked when I know about it

D: kaminey say fastly wht happened

Cabir narrated the whole incident and all were very happy listening to this and decided not to disclose to them now let them only get surprised tomorrow.

FLASHBACK ENDS

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M: toh u all know and didn't say to me how dare u??

He moved forward to hit them but all pulled him to a hug and then all pulled NH3 in the hug.

All broke the hug after feeling like ages.

C: guys I think we should go and give these would be couple a good time

A: for the first time u said a good one

All laughed seeing cabir face. All moved one by one slowly and only manan were left there.

M: lets sit and eat

N: yeah

M: do u know about this??

He spoke with hesitation thinking she might be uncomfortable while talking about it.

N: yeah mom told me that she found a boy and gave me a pic but I didn't see the pic and threw it away

M: hoo but y did u threw the pic away??

He asked the question raising his eyebrows while nandini decided to say to him atleast now

N: vo isiliye manik ki I LOVE...

She was cut by manik who placed his hand on her lips which sent a shiver in nandini. She gave him a questioning look

M: I know wht u want to say but its not the time I would love to hear it from u in the evening remember we have a date today.

Nandini blushed listening to his words and imagining what is going to come in the evening. Seeing her like this manik then stood up and came towards her and nandini breath became uneven by now only. manik came still closer to her and came near her ear and spoke huskily

M: if u blush like this na I swear I will forget that this a public place and I am gonna do a work which u don't me to do in front of all

Nandini understood his words but still she tried to act innocent

N: wht I don't want u to do in public??

M: really...(he made her to stand up and pulled her closer) I will say that tonight to u infact I will show u

All the people in the restaurant were seeing them as if they were aliens and nandini observed this but manik he is not in a mood to keep an eye on them.

N: manik leave me all were seeing us only

She separated from him but manik kept a cute look.

N: don't feel I would love to see the answer from u but for that we should go na so chale??

She asked and manik puts his hand around her shoulder

M: ab we will go

Nandini smiled at his cute antics and left from the restaurant.


SO here is the update

hope u like it

do tell me ur views

there are still some more parts to end it

so atleast now please comment

and tell me what was ur fav

confession will be in 17 A

from here u will have only manan

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prathyusha


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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow.. nyc..
Haha the way their own family surprises them was fab...
Really excited for next
Do update soon
Waiting eagerly
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Posted: 9 years ago
Lovely update...continue soon waiting eagerly
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb update..
Pls update next chap soon.. Can't wait to read manan confession..

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