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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Poushi

such a nice cute story...

thanks a lot
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Poushi

waiting next part...plz asap

in 15 mins
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thanks for the response guys here is the next chapter without any delay enjoy reading



PART 13 A


Mukti was sitting and crying on the pool side and kept her legs in the pool.

Mu: wht does he think about himself??? How will I be able to live without seeing him and he didn't even say anything and moreover how can he disappear like this??

She was continuously crying when she felt a hand on her shoulder, she looked up and saw abhi standing there. She immediately stood up and hugged him as tight as she can. Abhi was taken aback with the sudden hug but responded equally. After sometime mukti broke the hug and started to scold him

Mu: wht do u think??? How can u disappear like this?? And even u didn't say a word to me??...

Her words were broken by abhi who kept his hand on her mouth.

Ab: do u want answers to ur questions then come with me

Abhi took mukti with him and left from nandini house.

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Nandini entered cabir room and found him sleeping so she went and checked him and was about to leave when cabir holded her hand and stopped her.

C: ladoo

N: haa bhai

C: mujhe thumse baat karna hey

N: haa kaho

Nandini slept in his lap and cabir was caressing her hair.

C: thum manik ko I love u bolo na

N: bhai I will but right now mukti is my priority and I hope mera plan kaam kare

C: thum thumari barime kaab sochogi?

N: thum hona sochne keliye meri barimey

Cabir smiled

C: acha thumse ek baat batadu manik has planned to propose u but same din mera accident hogaya tha and he was not able to propose u and ...

Cabir turned towards nandini to see her reaction and found her sleeping peacefully in his lap. He adjusted her on the bed properly and slept beside her holding her hand protectively.

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Abhi took mukti to a isolated place. She was not scared because she has abhi with him.

Ab: thum me thumari answers chahiye na to vo dekho

Mukti turned to the side he pointed and was speechless to see the scene infront of her eyes.

It was I LOVE U written with golden letters on the board and hanging to a tree. Mukti cant believe her eyes. She turned towards abhi and found him kneeling infront of her with a ring in his hands.

Ab: I know it may be fast for u but to say seriously I want it to say from the last 10 months and could not say it because I don't know wht were ur frrlings for me and this two days mey mujhe pata chala ki thumari feelings ki barimey and it was all planned by me, druv and nandu. I am sry for making u cry but I promise I wont do it again and never let a single drop come from your face. So Ms. Mukti Malhotra will u be mine forever and ever??

Mukti was surprised and happy to hear these words from abhi and in a reply she just nodded her head in a yes. Abhi became so happy and took her hand and kept the ring to her finger. Mukti hugged him and abhi also responded equally. After breaking the hug they both kissed each other passionately. Both were sucking each other lips as hardly as they can after some time they broke the kiss. Abhi made her sit on a bench and sat beside her and mukti kept her head on his shoulder.

Ab: I don't know that u can be this much bold??

Mu: wht??

Ab: mera lips dekho kitna swell hogaya sirf ek kiss ki vajese

Mukti blushed listening to his words and hided her face in his chest while abhi smiled.

Ab: acha ab blush karna bandh karo and tell me how did u realize ur feelings as love??

Mu: its because when I came to know u left to America forever I am afraid because I thought I wont be able to see you forever and I even thought ki I lost u forever

Mukti started to cry and abhi holded her face and said

Ab: I will be there for u and with u forever

Mu: I know

Abhi smiled and hugged her tightly.

Ab: acha chalo agar late hogaya na toh thumari bhai meri jaan lelegi

Mukti smiled and nodded and they both left from there.

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Mukti reached home and went to her room when she was about to sleep her door got opened and she found manik there.

Mu: bhai u didn't sleep till now

M: nahi waiting for u

Mu: kyu???

M: thumse ek baat puchna tha

Mu: haa pucho

M: thum abhi se pyaar kartha hu na??

Mu: haa bhai bahot vo bilkul thumari jaisa hey

M: hmm u r happy with your decision then I am very happy with it

Mu: how do u know I am happy bhai??

M: mukku mey thumari bhai hu mujhe sab pata chalgatha hey

Mukti smiled and hugged him.

M: mukku thumari lips ko kya hogaya???kisi insect ne bite kiya hey kya???

Mukti blushed to his comments and murmered

Mu: haa bahot badi insect

M: kuch kaha

Mu: nahi kuch nahi mey na ice cream kate vakth lips bite kiya tha

M: mujhe pata hey vo ice cream kya tha

He said with his famous smirk and mukti blushed to the deeper shade of red and manik smiled

M: acha now sleep and plz stop blushing

Manik left the room

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Manik reached his room and slept on the bed and took his phone and dialed the most important person in his life i.e. Nandini. She answered the call immediately to know about her plan progress

N: manik did mukti come and was she happy?? And did she accept abhi???

M: hello express train give me a chance to speak

N: then say fastly na

M: listen mukti is happy and she accepted abhi also

Nandini becomes very happy by listening to this

N: manik I am so happy cant express it

M: acha how u will if u get a chance

N: I will hug u tightly

M: wht

Nandini realized now what she spoke so to hide herself from more embarrassment she spoke

N: manik I am sleepy byee

Without waiting for his answer she cuts the call and manik smiled seeing her cuteness and shyness. He too drifted to sleep thinking about her and same is the case with nandini also she too slept thinking about manik.





i know there is less manan

but this was a teaser for manan confession

do say how was it

based on your response about confession

i will add or delete parts in manan confession

and do anyone have any problem if it was too romantic

if say now so that i can edit them

now its your turn

love u all

prathyusha

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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice waiting for next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update. Cabir and nandini's convo was blissful. Mukbhi's part was amazing especially the confession part.manik and mukti's convo was fab.wow manan's confession is on the way.waiting for next update. Thanks for pm.
Keep writing.
Stay blessed😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update manan ka confession kab hoga baki Sab ka to ho gaya
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Posted: 9 years ago
mukbhi settle ho gaya...manan kab settle hoga??
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Posted: 9 years ago
hey soo cute
mukbhi sorted
hoping for manan union
ty for pm!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Bond between cabir and nandini was too cute...
Happy for mukhbi
Excited for manan.
Do update soon
Waiting eagerly
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Posted: 9 years ago
superb update mukbi was awesome manan so cute thanks for pm excited for manan confession continue soon

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