manan FF linked by destiny part 17 B/pg 139 (23 FEB) - Page 14

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Nice promo hai kaun jisse far the hai sab kahi harshad to nhi

Originally posted by: manan_eku

Suspense a big suspense

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Continue soon

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Originally posted by: khadupam

Suspense promo 😃

PART 8 (A)

After a lot of practice they all settled near the pool side for some relaxation. All were chit chatting and suddenly there was a knock on the door and cabir became worried

C: kaun hosaktha hey??

M: wait let me check

Na: nahi manik thum ruko I will check

C: wait navya I will also come

CaVya left from there

M: yeh esa kyu react kiya tha some thing is fishy

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Cabir opened the door and found courier boy who came to deliver a parcel and cabir took it and the boy left. He was shocked by thinking who can send the courier to this address. Seeing him tensed navya kept hand on his shoulder

Na: cabir pehle toh kolo courier

Cabir opened the courier and what he saw made him hell horrified. It was a note which reads

"u want to run away from me but remember u cant do it because always there is my eye on u and u cant escape from me. Accept the truth baby and ur bf cant do any thing in this matter and if u think any thing na u cant see him alive. He will be killed by me. As your request I will give a break baby and wont disturb u till your performance is completed. U know I wont give false promises to u so chill and practice for your performance and all the best."

navya and cabir were shocked to core.

Na: cabir vusko pata chalgaya ki we were here.wht if he comes and attack

C: he said na it's a promise aur itna mey janthi hu vo nahi ayega

Na: cabir mujhe daar lagarahi hey

C: don't worry I am here na

Cabir hugged navya and she too hugged him back.

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Cabir reached the pool side

M: who was it cabir??

C: courier boy

M: hoo...is address mey kaun bejha tha??

C: iss house owners ne kuch papers bejha tha mujhe joh woh bul gaya jab this house is registering on my name

M: hooo...acha theek hey where is navya???

C: she is sleeping

M: wht??? Itni odd timing pey??vo theek hey na??

C: manik tu na CID join karo na, vus ACP prathyuman ki jaise sawal karthihu

M: shut up cabir and say is she fine?

C: haa baba she is fine just a little headache that's it.

M: acha theek hey

Nandini understood that there is something fishy and messages to cabir.

N: sab theek hey na bhai??

C: haa ladoo just vusne ek letter beja tha and gabraneka koi baat nahi hey

N: bhai r u sure ki kuch nahi hoga??

C: I hope so

Nandini then decides to go to navya and leaves from there

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N: navya thum theek ho na??

Na: haa nandu hum bilkul theek hey...cabir kaisa hey???

N: bhai ko kya hua vo bilkul theek hey

Na: nahi nandu I know him woh hum dono ki samna strong banna chatha hey lekin vo bahot dar rahihey andar sey

N: sach mey thum meri bhai keliye perfect ho and jab tak hum dono hey na vusko kuch nahi hoga and hum kuch hone nahi denge na

Na: haa because he is the light of my life

Nandini became happy and immediately hugged navya, to which she replied with equal fervor.

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All settled for the lunch and nandini and navya were serving the lunch.

M: thum dono bhi baito na

N: nahi manik hum dono baad mey kaalungi

A: arey esa kaise chalega thum dono bhi baitogi warna mey nahi kane vala

M: mey bhi nahi

D: mey bhi

Ab: arey mey bhi nahi

C: mey bhi nahi kalungi and if u will come late na then I will eat u only along with monster

M: mey ney kya kiya beech mey??

C: arey monster na they will eat raw meat only na

M: but not me na he said with a cute pout

C: thum thumari looks se hi sabko katahey

M: wht??mey kaha looks dete hey??

C: thum nahi dongi kya??

M: nahi bilkul bhi nahi

C: yeh sab ko pata hey ki thum looks dete hey nahi

Cabir looks towards others and all nodded their heads in yes and manik sits there with a cute pout. Nandini feels to peck on his pout but stops and diverts his mind.

N: yeh baate baad mey bhi hosakthahey so now lets eat

M: haa thum dono bhi baito

N: nahi manik plz

C: if u don't come na then

He was searching for words

Na: thum kuch nahi karsaktey hey

C: kyu??/ mey nahi kavungi and practice will get spoiled because of me I think both of u don't want that??do u ???

Na: nahi

N: noo

They both shouted and all smiled

M: seriously cabir only u can make them understand

C: wht did u think of me and now r u both coming or u want me to spoil the practice

They both nodded their heads and settled down and all had their lunch together and left for practice.

i konow there was no manan in this part

but this is needed for the story

and this time i request u all to comment

and tell ur views

about the story

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prathyusha

It was wonderful di

Awesome but confused about that mistry

Originally posted by: Lovelylav7

Lovely update..but no manan

Originally posted by: analji

Awesome update

Originally posted by: khadupam

Fabulous 👏

nice update