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Posted: 9 years ago
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KAAABBB!!
WHEN YOU'RE UPDATING?
DON'T YOU THINK ABHE TORTURE ZIADA HORAHA HAI :P

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Posted: 9 years ago
#32
Amazing start.
I read this book. But im really excited to read ur story.
Continue soon n send me pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wooo it's seems interesting yar. Nandu's reaction was described very nicely. It will b fun. Update soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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first of all, thank you for the pm!
The second I read the titile, I knew it was going to be something like 50 shades of grey ;)

I'm glad that the story line is different, though :P
So aryaman is the butler or what?.. Manik already seems to be enthralled by nandini's presence! Nandini was portrayed very well too, with regard to her character!

Looking forward to the next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hey...i loved the update//..!!
the first part is itself so good.when the story will proceed it will become awesome..!!
loved the way u described nandini nd the way she was ogling at manik...
update soon..!!will be waiting fr it.. 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awww...
i love it sooo much
plzz update na
pm me plz
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37
Heheheh... Fifty shades version of manan...;)
Interesting!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Oh my gosh! ! I'm in love with part 1...
Seriously it's tooo goood. ..
Like amazing ...
Updateee sooon. ..
And please pm mee. ..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39
Owww such an amazing first meeting...
This is definitely going to be super duper awesome story that's for sure...
Please please please continue soon Can't wait further for next update Please continue asap...
Love you a lottt for this amazing story...
Keep smiling and rocking as always...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hola guys am back with an update and a new banner for my FF hows it? the response you gave on the first one was over whelming for me love you guys for that ...hope you like and response the some for this ...it's a request please comment i need to know your views either good or bad but do comment only likes won't help as it's you reading it and enjoying i want to know your response which i can only get by comments so silent readers comment too...i love to read your long comments ...so enjoy this update and shower your love...

This won't be like FSOG as many have asked me it will be totally change so enjoy the story

one more thing new readers until you don't buddy me i can't PM u so send me requests so i can PM my next update to u ...,,,

Mr Malhotra will see you now Part 2

"Nandini" he said my name as his lips curled each other and I try not to let it affect me he needs to stop talking its making me moan "yes Nandini" I confirmed my name he looks at me "I suppose Miss Sharma was coming to meet me" "she is not feeling well so she send me with the designs is it okay? "All right miss...?" "Miss Nandini Oberoi" I repeat my name again what is with him an names can't he remember one an owns a big industry "right Miss Oberoi would you like to sit" he offered me to sit on the white leather couches positioned opposite each other with a large coffee table sitting between them I quickly take a seat on one of the sofas "would you like to have something to drink coffee or some wine?...wine at this early though I love wine but not at this time "no thank you" I shake my head as I speak just in case as the words don't come out as with him looking at me it's tough to answer without stutter "Water?" he asks looking at me ..ohh man stop looking at me like this please "sure" I try to give a smile he takes two bottles from the nearby fridge an and turns back towards me...I was lost in my thoughts when "miss Oberoi" his voice rolls across me making me falter. I turn to face him which is a bad idea "yes" ...he smiles "glass?" "It's Nandini and yes please..." I smiled back. Nandini get a grip of yourself he must be thinking am so unprofessional I quickly took a deep breath took out my folder an my cell phone and placed it on the table... he filled the glass with water an placed on the table an sat on the opposite couch crossing one leg over the other he tried to make himself comfortable on the couch and I was trying not to make eye contact with him but as I am here for a meeting I have to talk to him eventually but till now I better keep quite ...

"so shall we start" he asks which made me look up to him I was so nervous I only knew he was looking at me an taking sips from his glass of water too ..i quickly took my glass an took a sip from it he was seeing me as I drank his lovely lips were making me lose my nerves a man has never ever affected me as he has his lip bite as he drank was making me crazy I tried to look away but my brain was not letting me do it I totally froze on the moment "I guess you should tell me why I am here" I ask an kept the glass on the table "what do you mean?" he says quietly as those dark black eyes fall upon me again "you wanted me I mean Alya here for a project so seeing your office here it's clear that you don't need anything the interiors are perfect so then why you want me" he looked at me as if he wanted to say something else and I curse myself on asking such question "to design" he laughs with a smirk it so feels he is making fun of me "design what exactly as I said this place is perfect I don't think you want to ruin it?" "thank you for the appreciation but I don't want you here for my this office"

"Then?" "can I see you portfolio then only I can tell" "sure" the file was placed on the table I thought to drag on to his side but to my horror he gets up walks towards me leans down on to the sofa near me OMG he smells divine all fresh an minty i hold my breath he leaned an opens the folder and starts looking at the designs "are they yours or Miss Sharma's" "they are mine" "you are quite young yet you know a lot are you studying?" "yes I am in my last year about to graduate next month if I pass my exams with too much work around its quite tough" he smiled seeing me talking "sorry I should stop babbling" "it's okay so you work for Clare since?" "I am doing an internship with her since 5 months now" "oh then I must say you are an accomplished designer" he muses slowly turning my portfolio

"How old are you Mr Malhotra? He looks at me on my sudden question Oops stop Nandini where the hell does this come from "twenty seven" he answers without any expressions "so can we get back to where we were" "certainly" "I really liked your work on this" he points on a photographs of Escala you have done it" "yes that's mine" "it's really nice I liked it the perfect style" "thank you" "i want you to design Cornica the same way" "Cornica the condo on west street?" "yes the very same" "but that has been already designed by Masons i guess an they did a pretty great job" "by all means they did but i want to redo it that is why you are called an after seeing you work at Escala i want the same" "but this is Alya's project not mine so you should see her designs" "i saw and i liked yours so i want you" "well am not yours to get" "i think you are i always get what i want" "may be you are to lucky" "Miss Oberoi It's all my hard work i have earned this on my own so i can get what i want" "so you don't have any interest besides work don't you have friends" "i am a very private person Miss Oberoi i like to keep it that way" "are you gay Mr Malhotra?" He inhales sharply ...Crap not again I need to shut up "No I'm not Nandini" he seems displeased..."i am sorry Manik i didn't meant it just came out abruptly ..He stared at me for a minute "so i will talk to Clare about Cornica an then you can get started"

he was talking but i was too busy in checking out his hands for wedding or engagement ring but couldn't find any "i am not married or engaged for that matter miss Oberoi" "um i was not looking at your hands for rings i mean i was thinking about the project" "am sure you were" he said with a smirk "so i shall take your leave now you can talk to Clare she will decide it's me or Alya but am telling you she is good" "i bet she would be but i want you" he smiled an winked making me nervous.. is he playing with me he knows he is affecting me yet he is not stopping "why do you want me?" he stood up from his couch walked near me making me go weak an kept the folder on the table looked at me he was too near me i can feel his breath "because you are good" an gave me his hand i looked at him an slowly kept mine in his as our skins touched each other it felt like i was burning he was giving me a intense look i knew he was affected by me too but the affection i had was like never before an like the man he is its totally not new for him girls usually use to gawk on him and he must be having girlfriend too but i didn't want to ask an be center of embarrassment again he walked me towards the door i saw the big guy standing what was his name Aryaman..."All done?" He asks an Manik nodded "i shall be in contact Miss Oberoi" "its Nandini Manik" he smiled "Nandini right" "see you soon Nandini" "see you soon Manik". "Aryaman will escort you out" "very well" i took my hand from his hand which he was holding but before he left it slightly dropped small peck on it making me go all red" "Manik" "Nandini" we gestured each other..i walked with Aryaman an came out towards my car as i breathed the fresh air it so felt my heart started beating again because seeing him it was like it stopped I started my car and thought i can't work with him he has something in his eyes which makes me so nervous...

As I drive down the driveway, I look in my rear view mirror seeing Malhotra house getting smaller and smaller behind me. And there, stood at the top of the steps watching me leave was Manik Malhotra...


That's all for now,,,do share you views


lots of love Sehr:)


Edited by sehrmemon - 9 years ago

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